He Is My Fat Bag Muscle

It's a very nice novel. Although the content is a bit borrowed, the author's writing is also very good. The description of body shape does not need to be so long, and too much description is a bit like trying to make up the word count. Come on, the author [blows a kiss]

First of all, I think the writing style and everything are good and very real. I feel very sorry for Xiao Xie, but there are some plots where I also want to scold him. But I also know that I just want to scold my former self. But when I saw Xiao Zhang in the middle, I couldn't stand it. Xiao Zhang was like a tool to promote their relationship. He was no different from the previous Xiao Xie. I felt very sorry for him. I don't know how to put it, but I was a little sad. Finally, I wish the author better and better. It's my own problem that I can't read it. I'm not saying that the writing and plot are not good, but I feel sorry for Xiao Zhang. [Love][love][love]

I think this article reveals a very typical situation: Guizi falls in love with a straight man The person in this article is indeed a straight man at the beginning, but many straight men are actually bi. This article is no exception, but many of them don't realize that there is only one sexual orientation in the world - the direction of the heart. If there is something about Xie that makes Wen's heart move, Wen will like him. But it takes time for straight men like Wei Bi to accept that they like boys and realize that they have developed a crush on that person. This period is very embarrassing and requires calmness on both sides. At this stage of this article, the author added a third person - Zhang Zhang made it clear that Xie Another contradiction is revealed: What should you do when two people fall in love with you? Choosing only one of them will inevitably hurt the other person's heart. It is unrealistic to have both, so let's see how the author writes it [Love]

The author's writing is very good. I have read so many novels of the same type. To be honest, the author's book is very good. The writing is very delicate. Everyone's feelings are very different. It can be seen that the author's true feelings are not fabricated out of thin air. I have not guessed the content of each chapter. The content is very novel. The emotional pull between the two protagonists is very heart-breaking. The concession of the third male lead in the end is really sharp🔪. I can read it. I feel bad for Zhang Xinwei, to be honest. I feel bad for Zhang Xinwei, but I can't love you. It's really just what Xie Mingyuan said. It's just that Wen Jingheng is better than him. I hope the author will write an extra chapter about Brother Xinwei. I really feel sorry for him. Finally, I wish the author a better and better book and a happier life. I am stupid and won't say anything. Maybe the author will not see my comments, but I still want to say, come on [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss]

I saw the shadow of Zhao Yuheng, but Zhao Yuheng and Wen Jingheng are two people. Although the plots are quite similar, they also have their own styles [Adoration]

Who wouldn't give this book a high rating? It's so well written. I suspect this is a spin-off of "Help, the hunky roommate begs to touch his abs." It's so good that it kills me. I won't allow anyone who hasn't read it. Sisters who see this, please raise the rating for me. Today I want to give the author a top rating. The author can rest assured. I love you and will always be with you @Crayon Mouse Mouse Come on, write well and try to get a second season. Brother Zhou's article was not even written for a second season. I was so angry that I wanted to spray him.

Member of my heart, I feel so happy [blowing kiss]... Member of my heart, I feel so happy [crying]... Member of my heart, I feel so happy [admiration]... I feel wronged, and I feel unhappy [almost crying]... Member of my heart, I feel happy [sending heartfelt wishes]

Oops, I have no resistance to this kind of writing. Come on, the author, please write sweeter. I am most afraid of knives [love] [love] [love]

I have read more than 120 chapters so far The advantage of this book is that the secret love and pulling at the front are well written. The disadvantage is that the daily life of love after being together is too strange, the plot dialogue, and the character of the protagonist are completely unattractive. I feel like the author had a lot of fun writing the latter part, so he wrote whatever came to his mind. Recommend a book to the author "What kind of brother do you want to be? Can you be my partner?" If the writing style were more restrained, the plot more reasonable, and matched with the author's level of writing about secret love and pulling, I would definitely be able to write a better book

It's quite good for my xp, especially the one where we sleep together hehe. I don't know what will happen to Zhang Xinwei in the future, and I don't want his appearance to be just a tool for the male protagonists to have a frank meeting. I'm really looking forward to the following plot, best wishes, author [Love]

How to put it, I can only say that there are shadows that I have seen before. The storyline and everything are very interesting. But why didn't Xie Mingyuan call him Wen Jingheng's husband [what][what][what] even after admitting the relationship, he didn't call him [what][what][what]

I'm very satisfied with this plot. Finally, it's not that the recipient always bears too much psychological burden and shamelessly pursues the plot of attack and defense.

Overall, it is well written. It is a pure sugar novel. The knife at the end is a bit stiff and the ending is a bit hasty. But in the end, it is HE and it is perfect. Except for the ending, the other plots are very good [Thoughts]

It's obviously a reference, but it's okay. It would be better if I could have more of my own ideas.

After reading it, I feel that the later social chapter is a bit short. I don't know if it's because I ran out of good themes and couldn't think of it or something. I feel that the later social chapter is very good, especially after Zhang Xinwei took it far away. I thought the plot would last for a few months or a year, but it ended in a few days. It's a bit of a pity, but this book is still very interesting! Brother Heng and Mingyuan are so sweet that they almost cry. I personally feel that the appearance of Zhang Xinwei is also very well written. I really like this character after reading it. Alas, it is a pity. The ending of Zhang Xinwei is a bit sloppy, but it is also a perfect ending! [Laughing out loud]

The description is really delicate and the narrative rhythm is very comfortable. Some plots are really true, and some people may not like them. They all hope that the author can stick to his own style. Maybe it's because I've learned from it, but it was really awkward to read it at first. But the author's writing was really attractive, so I kept reading. I hope the author can write more excellent original works in the future [Love]

It looks a bit like Brother Xiao Zhou. Is Wen Jingheng Zhao Yuheng? Good-looking, watch more, love to watch

It's really super, super, super beautiful😊

It's so beautiful. I stayed up all night to watch it. I couldn't stop watching it. I beg the author to make a movie about their married life. I'm looking forward to it🤩🤩🤩

Nice! ! ! Nice! ! ! But I prefer Zhang Xinwei and Xie Mingyuan

I really like it. The story is of high quality and the content is very good. I beg the author to update it more! ! ! ! !

I think it's well written

Faster and bigger, not enough to see haha

After reading the two books by Zhao Yuheng and Zhou Dingchuan, I felt empty. This book appeared so timely.

The writing is very real, so real that I feel a little disgusted [face covering] but I still recommend reading it. It's quite sweet at the back. You can tell from a glance that there are some twists and turns at the front.

It's really good. Although the previous plot is somewhat similar to a novel I read before, the author still showed his own uniqueness later on. Looking forward to subsequent updates and creations

That's great, my writing reviews can rival those of Brother Zhou

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! !

There was no update today [please update] Is the author feeling very uncomfortable? [What]

Actually, I think there can be more emotional descriptions, but the descriptions of body figures should not be too cumbersome, and there should not be a long paragraph of text description every time it appears, although I also like to watch this kind of thing hehe. But I just feel that maybe it would be better if there were more emotional and inner aspects! (Don't scold me! I know it's my first time writing a book, so I just want to give you some advice!) [Crying] [Crying]