Fantasy**********

Give yourself a thumbs up! Generally speaking, writing a book requires a period of time to formulate an outline, especially if it is a long novel. After my last book was banned, I was chatting with my friends As we chatted, I became very angry: I want to write a male video! My friend: Write! So I quickly thought of a joke and then wrote a chapter Hence this book Yes, from writing a male video to coming up with memes, it probably only takes a few hours... Then I started writing I don't know if the writing is good or not. But I still think I'm pretty awesome

Although there are flaws in the training system and the difference in realm is not reflected, the daily interactions are very sweet. I like this type very much. I hope that I can always be the heroine doting on the hero [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It is very consistent with xp at the moment. The perspective of a strong female protagonist is not abusive to men, and she is pure in love. As an old bookworm, it is quite good to read some beautiful love stories every once in a while. Personally, I feel that they are more mindless and sweet stories. I don't need to go into the details too much. I came here just to read the sweet love [shy] but I fell into the trap a little early and it feels a bit shallow. Please give me a lot of support [love]

I have been listening to this book for most of the day. I don't know how many hours are displayed, but I have listened to more than 60 chapters. Let me tell you my own point of view. I have always been a bookworm with single female protagonists. My favorite books are those with a little plot added to daily life. This book can be said to be very suitable for my taste. The image of the male and female protagonists is very well created. The relationship between the two people is natural, not artificial, very sweet, and the author's writing style is also good. I saw someone in the comment section saying that the male protagonist was too feminine and that it was a female video. But I don't think so. The male and female protagonists are very intelligent, not mindless cool novels. The male protagonist is still an innocent little boy. Moreover, the author is a girl, so the writing of the article will inevitably be a bit biased towards female readers. Besides, this has no impact. This book is suitable for both men and women. I would like to make a small suggestion. The male protagonist cried a bit too much. After all, he is a man, which is a bit bad. All in all, it is highly recommended [like][like]

It's okay, and finally I don't have to rely on AI writing anymore... If I talk too much, I will shed tears. It's better to eat it. The male and female protagonists are portrayed very well, and they are relatively good, right? I look forward to reading the last chapter of this novel when it comes to a successful conclusion in the future.

Progress Chapter 91, let's talk about my personal feelings. Let me talk about the conclusion first. If you can accept spoiled literature and don't pay so much attention to tactics and immortality, then this book is indeed worth reading in its current state. The male protagonist is a soul-wearing, tea-chasing, and very smart love brain. The author uses the system's function of promoting plot development very well. Each task issued by the system can greatly promote the progress of the emotional line and the cultivation realm without suppressing the realm. This is very good. It is better than what many male authors have done. There are also foreshadowings, which is good. Next, let's talk about the shortcomings. It can be seen that the author's plot is still a bit immature in some game aspects. For example, when the male protagonist came to visit his mother-in-law, he proposed to let two enemies compete. As a result, the two really fought with all their strength, allowing the male protagonist to find out. There is also the imperfection of the cultivation system and worldview. This is also a common problem in this kind of novels with a spiritual background that focus on emotional lines. At present, the worldview of the novel has not yet been formed, and the cultivation system is also extremely dependent on the system. It would be great if the author could make appropriate supplements in subsequent plots. Keep up the good work

OK, I'm the unlucky guy who posted book reviews in the comment section [crying] and I can only write one more side. It's very beautiful, the plot is coherent, the emotional lines are so perfect, the writing style is close to life and has a poetic style, the characters are well described, the light and dark sides of the characters are well described, and the male protagonist's systematic dialogue and sense of humor also gave me a great feeling , the male protagonist is said to be a coquettish husband but not the kind of annoying weakling. This is very accurate. I didn't expect the author to write it very well. It is really a perfect idea to embody the male protagonist's coquettish feeling in the innocent relationship with the female protagonist. Even boys will not be disgusted when watching it. It can be seen that the author is very skilled in emotions, and the innocent male protagonist is very well grasped. There are too few plots in the battle to be seen. Overall, it is a really, really good book. I really, really, really like [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]. In fact, it also has a shortcoming, that is, it is not enough. Hehe [Attention] [Attention] Come on, the author, I am very optimistic about you [Salute] [Salute] [Salute] I found out that I am not a full-time author. The writing is so good and the plot is handled so smoothly. It is really strong. The disadvantage is that it is not interesting enough and I can't rush for more [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

Oh my god, it made me smile like an aunt. It's so sweet. When I first read the introduction, I wasn't that attracted to it. I browsed through the recommendation list several times before I clicked in to read it. The result surprised me. The male protagonist has a degree of progress and retreat, and the female protagonist's psychological journey is also very contrasting. Cute, cool writing, cool men, cool girls, it makes me scream [shy][shy][shy][shy] The character plot and the author's writing skills are very eye-catching. Come on, author, we will update a hundred chapters a day [shy][shy][shy][shy]

The emotional scenes are well written, and I personally prefer 1V1, so this book is quite to my liking. Although he is a spoiled wife, he is not an incompetent husband and is working hard to become stronger. Cheers to the author, don't be blinded by the bad reviews, and those of us who think this book is good are looking for more updates!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh The interaction between Xiao Lu and the empress is so sweet. Ohhhhhhhhhhh I can't help it. And Xiao Lu is always catching up with the empress's pace. I am so touched. The author must continue to write. It's such a novel subject matter. I really like it! ! ! !

In fact, it is very beautiful. There is no otherworldly misunderstanding, and there is no smell of knives. Instead, the male and female protagonists are running in both directions, and they hope that they will get closer and better. I have to say that I still like this kind of more delicate emotional drama. The narration between the protagonist and the system is also very interesting. As a boy, I would also giggle watching some of the plots. Well, it is indeed very funny. I hope the author will get better and better and not be attacked by some people. After all, the angrier you are, the happier those people will be. Please update quickly, I also want to read the latest chapter~

A homepage duration of 1K+ means the book is really good. Now women are strong and men are weak, but the upgrade is smooth! It could have been read with your brain, it was logical, it didn't abuse the men, and both the male and female protagonists had good personalities. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is super sweet, I look forward to (*^o^*) the author's support at the end! I'm optimistic about you!

It's good, but what should I say? It's not right for you to say that he is a male channel. It's not entirely correct to say that he is a female channeler. A bit like a heroine, but not like a heroine. Machiavellian, but not much. The love component is quite high. If it's poisonous, it's not obvious until now. All are acceptable. In summary, it is a very good book, but it still has one shortcoming, that is, there are too few chapters. Then the author is not threatened.

I'm here to comment. First of all, when you click on this book, you should see a lot of bad reviews. These are just some trolls looking for trouble. The author writes really well. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very smooth. Both parties are each other's first love. The female protagonist has a cold personality but protects the male protagonist at all times. The male protagonist has also been working hard for the female protagonist. Those people say that high-level people will be tired of government affairs and self-righteous poisonous points. Brother, although he is a cultivator, can he not take a break if he approves an article? Just like when you go to work, don't you want to rest and be lazy in the middle? Let me say here that although this book is female-oriented, the perspective in the text is still based on the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Think carefully before commenting. Some people read for less than 30 minutes and criticize, which will have a bad influence on those who want to read the book later. Who is this? The author's writing style is already very good. Thank you for your understanding.

It feels like a combination of male and female channels. It's very nice. The male channel's fighting tactics are combined with the female channel's love story. It feels very comfortable. It's the best of both families. It's [Admiration]

The writing is okay, the description is quite detailed, not bad, quick update

I hope the female protagonist will always be strong and pamper the male protagonist, hehehe/

It was very well written, and the characters and plot really impressed me. Um

Can the author not make the male protagonist invincible, but also have the opportunity to have the female protagonist protect him later [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It is strongly recommended that the author change his name and introduction. I was really convinced. Looking at the cover and introduction, I thought it was a cool article about men. It turned out to be a spoiled brat🌚but it looked okay [Thinking] It's this training system that annoyed me. The combat power is a bit like a low-level martial arts, and it doesn't look like a cultivator at all. Get rid of this point, it looks quite comfortable (insert a digression, this author is a bit active, let me see if he will reply to me at 2 o'clock in the morning) [smile]

I just like the cute little love-minded husband. Alas, it's a pity that it's not a female protagonist. I feel that the male protagonist is suitable for the female protagonist. Anyway, I like it very much. Come on, Rolls, please update more [please update more]

It looks good, I like it very much, the male protagonist has a good character, and so does the female protagonist!

I don't know why the rating is so low. This is the kind of emotional drama it should be, not those stud stories that the heroine will post as soon as she sees the hero. [Adoration]

It's good-looking, really good-looking, the writing is very delicate, and the emotional transition is very natural. Anyway, I just like to read this kind of novel, although it takes some practice, but the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is slowly developed. It's so sweet that the corners of my mouth never dropped [shy]

It's good-looking [smile] [smile], come on author

It suits my taste quite well

Overall, it's okay. Please support it. I hope it can be more complete.

It turns out to be the perspective of the yandere wife (female version)

Good-looking, the male protagonist is quite shady, and he can't get enough of a grudge.

It looks good, I just hope that the author will have more time to update it soon.