Glory of Football: From Club to National Team

What can I say? At this point in writing this book, even if it is a new author, his writing is relatively poor. There are many flaws, so many that I cannot understand the author's thoughts. First, you tell me why a player performed poorly for 12 games (maybe less than 12 games). Just because his performance was good, it attracted the attention of the Premier League. The protagonist was anxious for several chapters. It is obvious that the protagonist wants to go to the Premier League, but why does he stay at Millwall later? The protagonist's previous performance is obviously not that one person has a city. If there is a better future, he has to take a gamble. What's the point of taking a gamble? What's the use? Would a sane person put his health at risk because a loan team was relegated? Second, it may be because I haven't read enough, but I can't see where your attribute points are used. Third, why do we keep describing what Luca is doing? He is the second male lead, right? If this book doesn't bring glory to the country, I don't want to read it. Who else are the protagonist's teammates, Luca, Irving, and James? If you want to stay in a team, you must write down his teammates. If you don't write down, it means that he is not important. Why is that? It must be because he will not be the protagonist's teammate, so the protagonist must leave. Fourth, I originally wanted to talk about the time issue, but then I wanted to take a look. What time is this book set? The author didn't write it, so I searched it myself. After searching, I found out why the author didn't describe the protagonist's teammates. You are just making it up! There is no such person, brother. How did you write it?

I have wanted to write this book since I was in high school. Now that I am studying in college in Xi'an, I have time. So it began. I am a novice author, and many of my ideas may not be mature. Readers, if you have any ideas or suggestions, you can put them forward. I will try my best to incorporate them without changing the outline. [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] Finally, the New Year is coming soon. I wish all readers in advance a happy New Year, all the best, all your wishes come true, good luck in the Year of the Horse, and good luck all the way 😄😄