Evil Revisionism? Passerby B Breaks the Male Protagonist's Corner

The writing is very good. I think the protagonist is cute, and the elders are cute too. Yes, they are all cute. The feeling of death of a twenty-three-year-old social animal is really relatable (right? I am still studying, and I am lovesick in school). I am a Chinese who has to study hard all my life. I hope to keep writing and see the ending. I beg you to read it...

This book is really good! Really good. Let me write a long review. . . . . . . . . Many people will like it. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] Come on, teacher! I hope I can always write well. First of all, Brother Shi is a well-deserved university hegemon. What is the intellectual and theoretical framework? Nothing was too much trouble for him. Really strong. It's just that everyone understands it, college students? Crispy. The feeling of death in living people is quite severe. The feeling of being a social animal is also very strong. Our Brother Shi is still a rebel. Strong and cocky. Very exciting. "He is sadness itself. He exists completely and is always alone." He is world-weary and self-loathing at the same time. He said, "Mu Qiuchi is fake, Xu Heqing is fake, and he, Lin Qingshi, is the most genuine fake." His background is indeed sad. But at the same time he is also a little sun. Very gentle. Very warm. Very cute. Very cute. He had bad intentions. Arrogant yet reserved. Also very prone to shyness. It's a little fox. I really like him, this guy is really charming! I just love to watch our brother quack! Kill all around "I just want him and her to have a peaceful life." This is a very strong emotion between him and his mother. My mother is also a very powerful person. Unfortunately, I have to go to heaven first. Each character in it has its own charm. The leader is indeed a master. He has a high vision and is very transparent. He has a bright eye and is very enlightened. He is a good teacher. "The 'normal law' does not follow the 'normal way'. It has a foundation of keeping the rules, makes unexpected changes, and has the courage to break the rules." The three people summarized it differently. It's very essential. Xiao Yanzi is a big, irritable bear. The mouth is too honest for the body. I love and hate our Brother Shi at the same time. It's a pity that I can never find this beloved disciple. The fairy who cultivates music is beautiful and sassy. Terribly strong. The fairy who cultivates medicine is a cold and beautiful woman. "Only compared with your own way." "Those who can achieve the way are all on the right way." "Find your own way where there is no one else." "I believe in you. I believe that you will be invincible and have a bright road, and the world is right in front of you." The two original protagonists are also very good. Let's talk about the one named Mu first. The high-necked flower is a prude. Very positive outlook. He is a person who behaves "perfectly." Let's talk about Xu Qinghe. Very cute, very cute, a real little sun. He has a very lofty ideal: to save the world. Tenacious and hardworking. He can talk to flowers, grass and trees. He understands them. He is really very gentle when getting along with our brother. The feeling of flowing water. It's the kind of person who feels like you can be a lifelong good friend. Our brother Shi liked him very much. Each of the three of them has his own way. But they are entangled with each other. "It seems like someone is laughing far away." "He just feels that this flute seems to have been waiting for a long time." "Then you can practice it later and play it for me." "And those unselected instruments in the sound storage hall are still lying quietly on their shelves, waiting for the next person to arrive. Maybe soon, maybe never. They are not in a hurry." I really like it. It's light and comfortable. It makes people feel very comfortable. Such a light and humorous writing style. I like it so much! It just feels very energetic. Very interesting. Make people immersed in it unconsciously. A joy naturally arose in my heart. There is also a hint of melancholy. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Finally, here is what my brother Shi said to Qinghe. "I've always believed in you." "I believe more than anyone else that you will eventually live your life as you wish. With enthusiasm and courage, you can uphold your magnanimous original intention, break through all the shackles, and heal the chaos and injustice in the world." And to Mu Qiuchi, "You are all inferior to him!" "The mice in the gutter are jealous of the bright moon in the sky, feeling ashamed in the clear moonlight. No matter how they jump up and down, they can't stop the flow of fate." "I believe in you, I believe that you will be invincible and have a bright future, and the world is right in front of you." Hello world, come on! [Make a face][make a face][make a face][make a face]

Super nice book! It's been a long time since I've found something that appeals to my taste. I'll break it down from the following points. Plot: It's very interesting, the twists are not abrupt, and it's not too bloody. It's also very warm in daily life. World view: Very complete! ! ! It will also be interspersed with some metaphysical knowledge and spiritual herbal knowledge. It feels very real and it is a complete and reasonable world view. Character creation: Very cute babies! Each character has his own characteristics, and is not flat, but a very three-dimensional person. Every good baby should live well in their world. Writing style: No, you must accept my knees! It's very delicate and gentle (I especially like this kind of [blowing kiss]), and the description of the environment in the middle is fascinating, which slows down the pace while adding a bit of reality, and the description of the environment is very gentle [love]. The psychological description of the characters is also very delicate and very close to their personalities. To summarize + my sense of reading: Overall, it is a very good book, and it is considered a stroke of luck for Yang Persimmon to pick up such a treasure. From my perspective, because I am a student in a school with high competition pressure, reading this book sometimes resonates with me as a child, and I also learned some very useful learning methods. Everyone is working hard to live, and the youthful vigor heading towards tomorrow is also very moving. I can always be moved by the tenderness in this book. Come on, don't tire yourself out, but be sure to write it down and give your hour a good ending [Love] There is just a small problem. The control of the text could be improved a lot. The world-weariness in the early childhood is not well expressed. For example, certain paragraphs in Chapter 4: ————————(The following is quoted from Chapter 4 of this article) "I can go and pry the corner..." A cold and clearly malicious plan took shape in his mind. He resented Mu Qiuchi and was angry that he blurted out "He is so handsome". He wanted to take revenge on the world and Mu Qiuchi. ————————(Quotation completed) It feels a little... (How to say) a little weird?

I love this book so much! ! ! Every character is very three-dimensional and has strong motivations. Just like Xu Heqing, he has a strong subjectivity and he always does what he wants to do. There is also Lin Qingshi, I love him especially. He is really like a flesh-and-blood human being in real life. He has various complex emotions and a dark side. The author's portrayal of human nature is particularly good! And Mu Qiuchi! Mu Qiuchi is definitely more than just a gentleman and a gentleman! There must be a secret to his life experience! Didn't the copy say it was a half-demon attack? So Mu Qiuchi is a half-demon, right? Will he become darker later? I think he is actually a little possessive, and he is also a little indifferent. Although he is very kind to many people and often smiles gently, I just feel that he is a bit of a ruthless person. I love Lin Qingshi's growth line! The group portraits are also great! The three little ones and Mei Shenglin and Yudi are all cute, and the master and the elders are also very nice! I like the two female elders very much! It feels like Elder Leng and Elder Qingxuan are both excellent! Elder Qingxuan is also very beautiful, truly unparalleled in elegance, and paired with a sound-cultivating instrument like a rattle, it is absolutely stunning! I love it so much! ! ! ! !

It was very touching. I could see the tears in the chapters about Xuanjizi telling fortunes and Qingshi telling fortunes. Who would be able to adapt to another world immediately, take in it, and be forgiven? I think the author's pacing is very well controlled, and it's also great to consider that the characters will have "unprovoked malice". It seems to be able to touch Qingtoki's flesh and blood... I will always follow the author... I am also very curious about the development of the future plot... Can I make dumplings... Wuwuwuwu, it's okay to eat knives and glass shards in the middle, but I hope everyone can have a good ending.

It's super good-looking, and the author is simply amazing. I haven't seen a book that suits my taste for a long time. Whether it's the plot or the characterization, it's a pity that there are only more than 60 pictures now, and I'm still a baby. I look forward to the follow-up ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾The author must work hard to update! ! [Send heart][Send heart]

Give the author full stars. Please don't abandon the update. I really like this story.

I think Lin Qingshi's character is really very special. I really like him very much. But maybe it's because I am in control. It feels like a lot of people are targeting him and belittling him. I feel an indescribable sadness in my heart [crying]

It's been a while since I've read an unfinished story. The introduction attracted me a bit and after I got into it, the content really impressed me (´o̴̶̷̤ㅂo̴̶̷̤`). The writing is very good and the plot is not too slow. I will continue to follow it until the end! Come on ovo

I read it in one sitting. The author's writing is very good and gives me a feeling of being there. The characters are well created: the irritable elder who cares about his disciples, Mei Shenglin who compares with Lin Qingshi but goes out of his own way... And focuses on the fireworks of the human world. Most of the elders are from the human world.

The author's writing style is so powerful. A few strokes show the charm of words. It is said that the characters written by the author are his own projections, which can more or less project his own personality, three views, philosophical concepts and the way to treat others. The author is really a good person. Oh my god. I hope the author can keep it up, and the characterization is very delicate, and also describes in detail the protagonist's process from rejection to habituation to integration into the world. The loneliness he felt at the beginning now realizes that he also has a sense of belonging to his family in this world. If the death of his mother and the absurdity of traveling through books are the triggers that ignited Lin Qingshi's world-weariness, then the various emotions, moods and kindness conveyed to the protagonist by the two original protagonists, Yu Di and the elders, are the protagonist's anchor in this world. I hope the author won't be fooled!

Super pretty! ! ! The plot is very interesting, and the character of the protagonist is also very interesting [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] It's so beautiful, the writing is super good, and everyone is very vivid and alive! The relationship between Lin Qingshi and Mu Qiuchi is not very fast. They are so comfortable to watch and get along so naturally! It's so well written that it's easy to have some empathy with the people in it, and it's also very real. Everyone has flesh and blood [heartfelt] Great support, author, I will keep following up for updates! Thank you for writing such a great story! 7/23 Why doesn't the author update anymore😭😭😭

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It's a very good read, an unusual article about cultivating immortality. Please give the author a thumbs up for writing it. It's just that the emotional line seems a bit slow, I want to see the sour emotional line😋

It's super beautiful. The main character is cute and the characterization is great. I like the warm group portraits the most.

Different type, very good-looking, Lin Shiqing is so handsome

The author's writing is very good. The article is also very detailed and fascinating. Character portrayal. Full of vividness and interesting plot

The writing style is very fluent, and it is considered to be in the middle and upper reaches of Tomato. Maybe this is my first time writing it, and I feel that the character development is not enough, and I don't see Shou's misanthropy, but I should consider it if it's a label.