My Bai Wuchang Soul Has Passed Away, What About Lao Fan?

My old Feng Feng! Little sister, do you know how awesome your writing is? This is so crazy for women and menstruation for men [Adoration] [Adoration] After watching this, my children stopped shouting Od every day and cut off the pig's trotters. They just want to read one or two chapters every day (?) Overall, I still like the protagonist's character and background very much. It feels very underworld and different from what I have seen before. It feels like someone has understood it carefully! [Thinking] [Thinking] Also, this friendship writing is so awesome, I was rolling on the bed just reading it... Just like this, I keep up with this chapter or two every day... Author, you are such an awesome person (well, it's actually something that is too satisfying for your liking). Anyway, come on, author! (Following the comments, I wonder how my goddess is so stylish [fear] Then it's over, little brother)

I really recommend it! The black and white CP is really easy to learn (but there is no CP in it, so just have fun with it). The writing is also very good, and it's worth reading.

It's good-looking, whether it's about brotherhood or CP, it all has great ideas, and the author interacts frequently, and the plot is very immersive and imaginative, so I highly recommend it! ! !

It's super cool, but could the author change it to two male protagonists? Fan Xie is really good. If it is changed to two male protagonists, it will definitely be a big hit😋Please author [cry][cry][cry]

Super beautiful😍, black and white is so delicious (*^ω^*)

It's very beautiful (although it has no CP, I really think the black and white impermanence is really good [adoration][adoration][adoration])

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking I don't know how to describe it Anyway, no one thinks that Lao Fan and Lao Xie are very easy to fight with, right? [Exploration] No, what on earth am I thinking? It's okay. I've already written the fanfic and I'm still afraid of this [laughing]

It's also awesome by Claes. To be honest, it's so nice to read such a lyrical and beautiful short article when I'm bored at night. It's also very good to read. It's just that after reading it for a few days, I still can't distinguish the names of Bai Wuchang and Hei Wuchang. The main reason is that Xie Bian sounds like Hei Wuchang, but it turns out that he is Bai Wuchang. O(╥╥)o

It looks good, fellow solders [laughs] This Jiu An is also a Chengcheng (playing by himself). Brother Jiu has become a god of wine. I recommend it. Little sister, you are quite awesome! Gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling

I also want to comment on it after reading it at the beginning. The setting is very interesting and the writing is not that bad either. The black-and-white friendship or the camaraderie between ourselves is also very interesting. The author really reads comments and the like, and gets replies or likes every time. Come on, duck. 🥳

Let me go, the male god is also very awesome, Klass, okay, you can see my non-existent parts slowly moving, little brother, you are quite awesome, Klass, the male god is obviously not an ordinary person. He is so handsome, so handsome that he doesn't even look like a human being. His body proportions are as well-proportioned as the golden ratio discovered by tens of millions of talented artists through countless experiments. Although he is tall, he does not feel oppressive at all, and his slender face looks like it will break if touched. He seemed to be an angel trapped in the mortal world, not belonging to the mortal world at all. That kind of dreamlike handsomeness, like a thin-winged dragonfly or glass artwork, or like melting ice crystals or cherry blossom petals. His hair is like a rare metal that can capture light, and his eyes are like gems from another world. Even the darkness seemed to be afraid of him and didn't dare to get close. It was late at night, but he was bathed in the moonlight, and his whole body was shining like a god coming on a whim.

Nice! The author's teacher is very nice. By the way, the teacher is a boy. I feel like the writing is pretty good, but the first 100 chapters have problems with repeated words or sentences, but it doesn't affect reading. I'll make corrections later. If you mind, you can consider it before joining. Apart from the above, don't you have anything to complain about? In this article, the country does not play a big role, and the focus is more on the protagonist and the chosen one. It's more of a group portrait. There are famous supporting actors from other countries, but it seems that the only one who is close to the protagonist and has a lot of roles is Ivan, the drunkard. Oh yes, and the teacher's Xie Bian and Fan Wujiu are really delicious, whether they are CP or CB! One thing to note is that there are cp comments in the comment area. If you don't like it, you should avoid reading the comment area.

It's okay. Xie Bian and Fan Wuzhe are very good at fighting each other (justifiably). As for the plot, the barrage is a bit messy. The logic of some plots in the main text is not very good, but overall it is readable. I think the relationship between black and white is the best in the whole text.

I like this kind of subject matter alone, but the author's writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. The plot um... Gave me a rather dry feeling, and the dialogue between the characters was very short. Maybe it was to express the character's personality of being quiet and cold? I think from what I've seen so far, the character's personality is not particularly outstanding. I hope it will be better in the future. Then there are some plots. You said that the protagonist is Bai Wuchang at 10,000, why is the force value so low? (Is it because of time travel? I don't think I saw it.) Also, there are many repeated passages in the previous article. It may be that I want to use repetition to achieve a certain modification effect, but I feel that it reads very strangely (it gives people the feeling of a low number of words). A small suggestion can be to appropriately describe the character's demeanor or mood, and express it through some unintentional actions. Generally speaking, it's okay, but the writing style needs to be improved [Love] [Like] (It's not malicious, just some personal suggestions. I hope the author's writing will get better and better! [Blow a kiss] I will continue to read!)

Not bad at the moment, Xie and Fan are so close to each other [admiration], but sometimes the barrage gives me a weird feeling

Very interesting and emotional Both black and white cb and cp are very good (by the way, the author is a boy) Although it is a bit short, each character has his own unique image. Comments like that are not very formatted to ridicule or belittle someone. Countries can be considered helping each other (this can be reflected later) The brotherhood between Lao Xie and Xiao Wan is also very touching.

I've finished chasing it, and it's very well written. Whether it's black and white or black and white, I think it's very enjoyable. The relationship between the two of them was well written. I also watched the finale angrily. The author's writing style is also increasing. Although there are some repetitions, he is also working hard to correct it. I hope the author's writing will become better and better and more active. Note that the author does not use cp standards. White and black/black and white are purely personal preferences. In fact, the friendship statues are also delicious. It is a personal preference. I am an omnivore, so don't complain. Finally, is black and white/white and black 99 good (cp/cb)?

Beautiful, love watching. I just feel that every barrage is a bit too formulaic. But that Ivan is really funny (●°u°●)", and can't it really be black and white? It's really good (›´ω`‹)!

It's so beautiful and has a brotherly love that I will never forget for ten thousand years.

Okay, let's just give it a five-star rating! It's also very awesome. Family members, except for the repeated sentences in the first few chapters, but they are also changed later. It's very biu and fou. The subject matter is novel, and the black and white of the book is also very cute (bushi). Anyway, it's just good-looking and that's it. I remember that when I first started reading this book, there was no rating yet. In just a few months, I can see how much potential this book has. Great cheers for the author! Also, if you're a quick reader, don't worry, the author updates it three times a day, it's really strong👍

At present, I feel that there are a lot of barrages, and the words are very blunt. I guess no one can always express the actions, demeanor and words of the Chosen One. Also, how does the Chosen One in Mao Xiong know Xie's movements and words? It may be that I misjudged the Chosen One. Other than that, it is quite good-looking. There is no ambiguous heroine, and the black and white impermanence CP is also good. I feel that I can use a little more barrage. I'll make up for it after I watch some more😋

My mom looked at me and I felt so good. Psychological committee member, I felt so good, oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (dancing) oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (dancing) oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (dancing) oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (dancing) ) Oh oh oh, it's so exciting╰🤓╯ (Dancing) Oh oh oh, it's so exciting╰🤓╯ (Dancing) Oh oh oh, it's so exciting ╰🤓╯ (Dancing) Oh oh oh, so happy╰🤓╯ (Dancing) Oh oh oh, so happy ╰🤓╯ (Dancing)

This is the only book that I have followed to the end. It didn't bother me at the beginning like others. This one kept me going until I cried and laughed at the end. I have so many emotions after reading this book. I hope many people will like it. Author, your writing style is very good. I especially like it. Anyway, it is the kind that is very plain and simple but with true feelings. The concept and language of this article are very attractive. I hope you can have a large number of fans. I wish the author peace and health every year. Come on, happy life!

Very beautiful! ! Highly recommended! ! CP is also very good! ! Moreover, the author's writing is also very good, and his imagination is very big. Anyway, as soon as I came in, I was tied all the way. Come and show me! ! !

It looks good, black and white is impermanent, and it's very easy to knock.

Okay, okay, the plot design is very interesting, and the overall concept is a bit philosophical. The first story is also the last story, and the beginning and the end correspond to each other. However, the author's writing style can still be improved. The more interesting the setting of the story, the more it reflects the author's insufficient writing style. The climax of the plot is not obvious, and the battle is dull, which makes the story a bit floating and lacks weight and depth.

It is particularly beautiful, the plot is very detailed and vivid, and it is unique in the description of the environment and the description of the characters' language and expressions. Black and white is still so good [shy][shy][shy], author, I will follow you all my life! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The author's writing is so beautiful! Successfully solved my book shortage problem [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

The author writes very well and makes the interaction between white and black very sweet! No more talking, I'm going to see it😄 And this book is really awesome! Everyone went to watch it, rolled around on the bed after watching it, and the author, my goddess, didn't need to say much. Moreover, the author is kind-hearted. If you ask me to be a stranger, I will be a stranger. The author of this book is very awesome, Claes. I must add it to my bookshelf. I even opened a separate group for the author. I must read it! (The following is my personal madness, don't read it!) I'm Feng, what the author wrote is like a fairy descending to earth, okay, women get crazy when they read it, men are menstruating when they look at it, okay, they go crazy when they read it, awesome Klass doesn't accept refutation! Oops, my hands are tired from beating, so I won't talk anymore.

It's good-looking~ The front is better than the back, but the ending is okay. Even in the back, Lao Fan doesn't have much of a role. [Thinking] The blackness and impermanence of this world doesn't seem to be helpful in the back. Is the rhythm a bit messy in the back? But it's still a book worth reading! Looking forward to the extras and the next one [Love]