Xihuan: Isn't the Equipment Hanging Out?

It's okay. This is the first time I've read this type of Western fantasy novel. It's a bit fresh. [Laughs] The reading experience of this book is similar to that one I picked up by chance, with six livers growing all over my body. It has a little novelty and the plot direction didn't touch me. [Like] I must wait until the second push. If I can maintain this quality after another hundred chapters, I will have five stars, and I can also give it as a gift.

It's very good. The protagonist's character is very likable, a bit sultry, but not too distracting. The inner scenes are mostly funny, and the output will not be affected by the inner scenes. It's very good. The plot is not false. It's just a straight punch. It's a straight shot. It's really fun to watch. There are no awkward plots. Sometimes when you feel like it's going to start to get bloody, alas, it's solved directly with a false shot. I feel so comfortable watching it. In addition, just when I thought it was an ambiguous article again, I had to eat it. Now I have nothing to say at all. What a great book!

It's good-looking, abstract enough, has lots of jokes, and the main character is cold on the outside but cool on the inside.

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unparalleled in the World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I followed the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I trained the "Immortal" Divine Body. Under the "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used the "Destroy the Sky Map" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" Yuan~~~Oh! I am old, and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update!

It's very good-looking and refreshing. The rhythm is just right. It's not soaring into the sky, nor is it overpowering. The emotional line is okay, and it feels like I'm playing in a corner. The shortcoming is that it's not interesting enough. It's all tied up at once.

The current plot development, this article deserves 5 stars, it is really interesting, but the hook is a bit too big, I don't know if I can stop it.

2 Meters strong and cute big girl, I love you so much [Adore][Adore][Adore]

Yes, it's quite refreshing. It's about eradicating the roots. There's no plot about letting the tiger go back to the mountain.

Five-star support. However, it is recommended to polish it up. It is best to change the priest into two teams to fight against the monster wave. Only the priest survives. Unless the priest is just a vase and the protagonist does not have many bonds with him, otherwise the betrayal will be unforgivable.

After reading the first few chapters, you can tell that the writing style and emotional scenes are quite good. It ranks about 9.5 Points on Tomato. The writing style is relatively humorous, except that it is a bit lacking. It stopped after Chapter 50, and the score can only be about 8.2, Which is very confusing and inexplicable. It feels a bit self-explanatory, awkward and not smooth. You can just throw it away after reading about 30 chapters. If the author wants to make changes, he should first remove the inexplicable self-pleasure and overly dense plots after chapter 45, and change the inexplicable emotional scene between the dragon lady and the eldest lady. I can't think of any good suggestions at the moment. The simpler thing is to make the eldest lady a little more domineering, a little arrogant and naive, so that the confession will appear to be out of ideas and it will not match the character description. The dragon lady changed her character to a sinister character and joined the protagonist's team just for fun, making it reasonable to fall in love with the protagonist for no reason. Use as simple a brush stroke as possible to write about the character, leaving some white space. Then re-optimize the unnecessary descriptions and re-plan the structure. There has been a situation where I wrote a little here and there. Hope that helps.

"Very fresh and delicious"😋👍

The author is very capable, and the writing is very good [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Above average, non-toxic and visible.

In Chapter 52, it's quite cool to have an idle golden finger and be able to spawn equipment. The rhythm is also very smooth, and I can finish it in one go. Occasionally, he talks nonsense and doesn't look like someone who is writing a novel for the first time.

It's delicious, bro.

It's pretty, I think.

Very pretty, but a little lacking

Looks good, just a little more would be nice

It's actually good-looking, but a lot of people didn't like that prophet, and then there were fewer updates and the author stopped writing.

Author, please promise me not to be a eunuch, okay? [Sending my heart]

Why is the average score only 6.7? I've already seen half of it. A perfect score. A perfect score is worthy of the gold found in the sea of ​​rocks.

The update is too slow, it feels like it's getting cold.

Not bad, it suits my taste

It's pretty cool, and there are a lot of delta memes [face covering]

So cool! So cool! It's so exciting that your mouth will explode! The male protagonist has brains and can eliminate the root causes, which can be said to be the pinnacle of wit and teeth!

It's very nice and interesting. I finished reading it in one sitting😋👍👍👍. I have to say that this kind of protagonist is well set up. Oh my god, this is just me😎😎😎. He has a sultry character and it's quite interesting.

Yes, it's surprisingly good-looking. I quite like the character of the protagonist.

It's pretty good. Not to mention other things, the male lead is very handsome [Like]

Now that I've seen it, I think it looks pretty good. Maybe I'm short of words and don't know what to say. Anyway, it's pretty good [eating melon]

It's okay, I'm looking forward to the next plot