Tachibana Hayato, an otaku, was on his way home from school one day when he suddenly met Aphrodite, the goddess of love who was forced to descend to earth after being frustrated at work. The goddess of love, who had lost her magic power, temporarily stayed in his room. In order to restore the magic power, they must take the initiative to match up six couples as friends, so the two started a series of tasks to match up lovers...
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This is just my personal opinion
The plot is old-fashioned and the design is bland. The character setting is okay but the writing is insufficient.
I saw that the author of Chapter 13 has currently designed two points of conflict (ups and downs of the plot), one is the main line Sakura Mukaishima, and the other is the branch line Nobu Kitakura.
The branch plot should be for the author to dig holes in advance, so that it can be written later. I guess the follow-up should be that the sister and best friend find the protagonist to explain the situation, and then the protagonist talks to the sister, Nako to find out about the letter, and then expose Beicang Xin. My current view is like this. I currently feel that the protagonist does not dare to have a head-on conflict with the letter. Of course, it is also possible that the author wants to use this point to let the protagonist grow.
The following is the emotional output
I don't understand why I always like this kind of conflict. Nako is very worried about her sister, and then she tells her to stay away from Kitakura Nobu without saying anything. It's okay to tell her clearly. She is worried about her and doesn't say anything. She pretends to be serious. Of course, it may be because she is embarrassed to say it, but it's so good. Let's send a message and see, looking at the unknown fire. Also, if it is dealt with, I hope that my sister will have a long memory. This kind of person will not be able to remember things unless something happens. Of course I will not read it anymore.
This book evaluates NPCs. Because there are too few words that can be changed, I won't finish it.
This is just my personal opinion The plot is old-fashioned and the design is bland. The character setting is okay but the writing is insufficient. I saw that the author of Chapter 13 has currently designed two points of conflict (ups and downs of the plot), one is the main line Sakura Mukaishima, and the other is the branch line Nobu Kitakura. The branch plot should be for the author to dig holes in advance, so that it can be written later. I guess the follow-up should be that the sister and best friend find the protagonist to explain the situation, and then the protagonist talks to the sister, Nako to find out about the letter, and then expose Beicang Xin. My current view is like this. I currently feel that the protagonist does not dare to have a head-on conflict with the letter. Of course, it is also possible that the author wants to use this point to let the protagonist grow. The following is the emotional output I don't understand why I always like this kind of conflict. Nako is very worried about her sister, and then she tells her to stay away from Kitakura Nobu without saying anything. It's okay to tell her clearly. She is worried about her and doesn't say anything. She pretends to be serious. Of course, it may be because she is embarrassed to say it, but it's so good. Let's send a message and see, looking at the unknown fire. Also, if it is dealt with, I hope that my sister will have a long memory. This kind of person will not be able to remember things unless something happens. Of course I will not read it anymore. This book evaluates NPCs. Because there are too few words that can be changed, I won't finish it.