Honkai Impact: Because of the Miracle of Your Existence

It's rare, very delicate, and it's not a tomato fast food fanfic. In fact, the author can learn from Sister Jing's book, Lao Xu, and create an independent world. The protagonist's ability is to go back in time. The prologue has nearly a hundred chapters, which is also awesome. A dozen chapters may be said to be poor or delayed, but they are enough to be popular. It's normal if you are not popular. Although I saw the skip reminder, I read dozens of chapters to realize that it is too long, too long, don't The fanfic is almost in the middle and late stages. Although the growth process is reflected, it can be seen that the author wants to enrich the character of the protagonist. After all, Kevin is not a natural savior. There is also Lao He. He knocked down the protagonist with one punch at the beginning. You can count it as an early B0SS, but it is too deliberate. The description is neither short nor long, very... So what, there are still a hundred chapters later, and there is still no original character. Are you cheating? But the author has worked so hard to write it, and it's free.

Reading your words is a gentle and shocking spiritual walk. When I first read it, I just felt that the sentences were smooth and natural, with no sense of stiffness. After reading carefully, I realized that every word and sentence has been carefully polished, and the words and sentences are just right. It has the vivid texture of fireworks and the human world, but also has a poetic pattern that transcends daily life. People are unconsciously immersed in the world built by words, and they are unwilling to leave for a long time. The most rare quality of your writing is that you are good at seeing the big from the small. The trivial and trivial daily life in the eyes of ordinary people, once you put down your pen and describe it, it will instantly have a moving warmth. There is no need to pile up gorgeous and unfamiliar rhetoric, no deliberate sensational plots, just simple and precise expressions, and the emotions hidden in the details and the thoughts hidden in the scenes can be clearly and euphemistically unfolded. Writing about scenery can make the picture three-dimensional and vivid, as if readers are seeing the breeze blowing through the streets and the sunset over the window sill; writing about emotions can accurately touch the softest corner of the heart. Those indescribable confusion, relief and joy are all properly placed in the words, triggering strong empathy. The rhythm of the writing is even more outstanding, with a moderate degree of relaxation and appropriate density. The narrative is clear-cut and the context is smooth. You can follow the text and advance the plot leisurely. The lyrical writing is free and easy, with moderate shades. The strong emotions are not overflowing to the point of making people feel cramped, and the light thoughts are light enough to have a long aftertaste. The paragraphs are connected in a smooth flow, with no gaps or gaps, and the reading is smooth. The reading process itself is a kind of enjoyment. What's even more valuable is the depth of thought behind the words. Good writing is not limited to superficial writing skills, but also relies on unique observation and transparent cognition. You capture the essence through appearances and dig out the deep meaning in the ordinary, making the whole article not only beautiful, but also more readable and durable. After reading it once, a vivid picture remains in your mind; after thinking about it again and again, you can gain new insights. This is the longest vitality of words. Being able to write such words must be based on daily experience of life and careful polishing of writing. Every writing is sincere, and every narrative is full of sincerity. I hope you will continue to write and move forward, record all kinds of scenes in the world with pen and ink, convey the warmth and power with words, and create more touching works in the future, so that more people will be lucky enough to encounter the mountains, seas and gentleness you write.

The previous protagonist's own plot may be too long, and the viewing experience may not be good. Maybe I think the author is trying to establish the character of the protagonist and some foreshadowing. I jumped to watch it. There was nothing wrong with the shaping in the front, but it was too long, resulting in few people. The official start of the follow-up pre-civilization plot makes me a little bit excited, so please keep updating.

Looking forward to the future where the protagonist is finished.

It's not about finding a girlfriend. Can it be faster? Although the front part is nice, it's a bit too long.

Do your best in everything! Let me tell you, the logic of adding updates in this book is slightly different from other books. Under the premise of adding updates as a gift, an additional chapter will be added for each person who scores. For specific rules, please go to Chapter 32 of the Civilization Chapter of Volume 2. The author said at the end of the chapter that there are details.

The description of the plot is very delicate, and the description techniques and the use of memes are very suitable to my taste. It is really rare on the platform Tomato, so I must write it down [Love] Come on, boss

Yes, but the pace is a bit slow. I just finished the first Honkai Impact.

It's good-looking, the protagonist and the plot are well shaped, and most of the plot is well connected. Except for some plot points that are a bit slow to advance, everything else is fine. The point is that the author keeps updating, come on! ! ! The further I look back, the content is quite good, and the author is also very kind to readers, responding to almost all comments. Come on author! ! !

It's really good, much better than other books

Hope to enter the main line soon It's very interesting, but the main reason is that the prologue is too long, which makes many people who want to read Honkai Impact quit immediately. If the author wants to write another book in the future, it's best not to do this. Finally, I want to see how long I have been reading it now.

This is a good book (Hi)

The plot is quite good. It may be a bit long in the early stage, but overall it is good to watch. I just don't know why there are so few people. I hope the author will write more!

I think it's pretty well written.

A very good Honkai Impact novel

It's okay. It's just like that. It's about the same. It's not very good. The author is from the district. There are too few followers. No matter what, it should be ten chapters a day. Give ten [grievance] [thinking]

Okay, this book This book is really nice

I hope the author can stick to it [eating melon]

Although I haven't finished it yet, I feel pretty good about it, so that's it.

Starfish, before picking up the civilized small boarding link, there are also elements of monthly notes

It's pretty good among the Honkai fanfics I've read.