Honkai Impact 3Rd: The Miracle That Exists Because of You

It's rare, very delicate, and it's not a tomato fast food fanfic. In fact, the author can learn from Sister Jing's book, Lao Xu, and create an independent world. The protagonist's ability is to go back in time. The prologue has nearly a hundred chapters, which is also awesome. A dozen chapters may be said to be poor or delayed, but they are enough to be popular. It's normal if you are not popular. Although I saw the skip reminder, I read dozens of chapters to realize that it is too long, too long, don't The fanfic is almost in the middle and late stages. Although the growth process is reflected, it can be seen that the author wants to enrich the character of the protagonist. After all, Kevin is not a natural savior. There is also Lao He. He knocked down the protagonist with one punch at the beginning. You can count it as an early B0SS, but it is too deliberate. The description is neither short nor long, very... So what, there are still a hundred chapters later, and there is still no original character. Are you cheating? But the author has worked so hard to write it, and it's free.

This plot is very comfortable, sweet and interesting to watch. Some scenes satisfied most of my fantasies. My favorite ones are "The General" and "Retrial". Come on, the author ~ [Sending Hearts] [Admiration] [Blowing Kisses]

Reading your words is a gentle and shocking spiritual walk. When I first read it, I just felt that the sentences were smooth and natural, with no sense of stiffness. After reading carefully, I realized that every word and sentence has been carefully polished, and the words and sentences are just right. It has the vivid texture of fireworks and the human world, but also has a poetic pattern that transcends daily life. People are unconsciously immersed in the world built by words, and they are unwilling to leave for a long time. The most rare quality of your writing is that you are good at seeing the big from the small. The trivial and trivial daily life in the eyes of ordinary people, once you put down your pen and describe it, it will instantly have a moving warmth. There is no need to pile up gorgeous and unfamiliar rhetoric, no deliberate sensational plots, just simple and precise expressions, and the emotions hidden in the details and the thoughts hidden in the scenes can be clearly and euphemistically unfolded. Writing about scenery can make the picture three-dimensional and vivid, as if readers are seeing the breeze blowing through the streets and the sunset over the window sill; writing about emotions can accurately touch the softest corner of the heart. Those indescribable confusion, relief and joy are all properly placed in the words, triggering strong empathy. The rhythm of the writing is even more outstanding, with a moderate degree of relaxation and appropriate density. The narrative is clear-cut and the context is smooth. You can follow the text and advance the plot leisurely. The lyrical writing is free and easy, with moderate shades. The strong emotions are not overflowing to the point of making people feel cramped, and the light thoughts are light enough to have a long aftertaste. The paragraphs are connected in a smooth flow, with no gaps or gaps, and the reading is smooth. The reading process itself is a kind of enjoyment. What's even more valuable is the depth of thought behind the words. Good writing is not limited to superficial writing skills, but also relies on unique observation and transparent cognition. You capture the essence through appearances and dig out the deep meaning in the ordinary, making the whole article not only beautiful, but also more readable and durable. After reading it once, a vivid picture remains in your mind; after thinking about it again and again, you can gain new insights. This is the longest vitality of words. Being able to write such words must be based on daily experience of life and careful polishing of writing. Every writing is sincere, and every narrative is full of sincerity. I hope you will continue to write and move forward, record all kinds of scenes in the world with pen and ink, convey the warmth and power with words, and create more touching works in the future, so that more people will be lucky enough to encounter the mountains, seas and gentleness you write.

Brothers who haven't watched it can think of this as the Honkai Impact version of Subaru Natsuki. The protagonist Goldfinger can go back in time, but he can choose the time to go back. He is quite strong, but there is a price, and the relationship is not bad. The characters on the stage now all actively approach the pig's feet because the protagonist has helped or saved his life. 🐍🐍Cute, the female character and the male protagonist like it. Familiar sister, men like older ones, and they want two at a time, and they only pick colleagues to attack [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh], there are indeed many originals, but fortunately it does not create a loneliness, it does pave the way for the emotional line and help the protagonist's growth. Although the protagonist's combat power is not equally promoted, it is not powerless, and the operation and layout are the main points. I can't wait to see Paramecium, Mei, Yaya, Seele, Goose, Rita, Otto and other playable characters appear on the scene [smile]

The previous protagonist's own plot may be too long, and the viewing experience may not be good. Maybe I think the author is trying to establish the character of the protagonist and some foreshadowing. I jumped to watch it. There was nothing wrong with the shaping in the front, but it was too long, resulting in few people. The official start of the follow-up pre-civilization plot makes me a little bit excited, so please keep updating.

Do your best in everything! ★☆☆☆☆ I don't know why I have to write this book by myself. I'm obviously just a reader. I don't care about writing, but the more I write, the more tired I get. This author is really brave. ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა

Brother is awesome! I've reached 99 comments, I'm here to collect them all for you! And you are also an author who has been writing for a long time. I admire you very much! I'm very similar to you now when you had 30,000 or 400,000 words. No one came, but I just wanted to persevere. And to be honest, I was attracted by you when you first opened the book, and it has grown to be very powerful today!

The description of the plot is very delicate, and the description techniques and the use of memes are very suitable to my taste. It is really rare on the platform Tomato, so I must write it down [Love] Come on, boss

Looking forward to the future where the protagonist is finished.

This book is actually really good, but it is slow to pick up. In fact, the plot at the beginning is very original and some people may not be able to read it. I have to say that the author's writing is good. If you read on and see the back, you will see that the basic descriptions of each character are very good. I gave 4 stars because it is too slow for a plot of more than 800,000 words.