The Max-Level Boss Crosses into the Demonic Patriarch

Apart from the fact that the series is not finished, there are no other flaws. The characters are not ruined, and all the contradictions in the original plot are handled very well. Everyone has their own difficulties, but the Heijiang family, who are not brainless, all have a happy ending. Good reviews from Wu Xicheng and Xue Xiao👍

It's been so long since I've seen this kind of normal fanfic in Mo Dao. The ones I found were either on Crazy Heijiang's Family, or Crazy Black Xianxian, and the ones about demolishing Wangxian's CP. I'm really convinced, and I finally saw this normal fanfic.

It's so heartwarming. Although it is a fanfic, it really makes up for the regrets of the original text. The writing is also good. The plot is not draggy and there is no watery plot. It is really good. I look forward to the subsequent plots. It was really good in the early stage, but now the update is too slow... In the latest chapter, the meridian tropism of Chinese medicine must be described, and the fable storyline must also be described, which will help the plot 😦 To be honest, the interaction between the system and the heroine is quite annoying sometimes. Today, the system has to describe what skin it wears, what actions it takes, and what stupid things it says. Originally, two chapters a day would be okay, but writing so much system interaction What a waste. There are also things like the heroine's past, the interactions between elves, and the powerful weapons given to her. Writing so much will not help the plot. The heroine is the most powerful existence in the world, so why bother describing her past? Write more characters about plot tasks and push the plot faster. There are so many chapters. I don't know whether the author wants Jiang and Yuli to break up or break up. Don't put too much ink on the small characters. It's time to think about Wei and Lan's first encounter. Will Wei, who grew up in love, do something outrageous? Why will Lan fall in love with him? Whether the Wen family can still be crazy when there is a female protagonist is what the author needs to pay most attention to [rolls eyes]

It's super pretty, really really pretty. The heroine is really a queen, powerful and sober. I really like the development of this story. It really makes up for a lot of regrets. I really hope that Jiang Yanli can find his own freedom and happiness. After reading more than 80 chapters, the description of women throughout the whole process is very, very friendly. There is no objectification, no sexualization, and no bad stereotypes. The description of the female supporting characters in the article is also very good and very friendly. It's not the kind of novel that claims to love women but only loves the heroine (yesterday I read a novel like this and I was really angry. Almost all the villains were female and ended badly) This book was really enjoyable to read, and I really like the concept of the heroine in the author's novel.

This fanfic is very well written, not OOC at all, and it is very close to the original character design. The plot is also very smooth, and the set conflicts and plot developments are not abrupt. I wait for Daddy to have dinner every day, so Daddy must keep writing! !

The author's writing is so beautiful that it almost eliminates the previous regrets, and it is not the kind of CP article. And she is really the kind of super cool heroine who can smooth out all the unhappiness! Let A Xian really become a child with a family! I'm really touched. The author please continue to update! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

A super nice book! This is the most thoughtful and well-written book I have ever seen! The original heroine Fu Jin is invincible in the whole book. Although she is said to be on vacation to raise children, she does not lack pampering. Every little bitter gourd in the original book has a happy childhood. The only regret is that the Zangshi Nagasawa couple died before Fu Jin came. After the tie, I saw that the souls of the two people must have been collected by Fu Jin. I don't know if they can be resurrected in the future. I look forward to it. The most important thing to boast about is that Dada has arranged a kindergarten for Wangxian! It's best to drink it if you're a childhood sweetheart or something! Even the fingerprint unlocking and wiping plot has been advanced! It's just that there is little interaction now. I look forward to more interactions. The most enjoyable part is the treatment of Wen Gou. A Jin is like a criminal capitalist. All the domineering Wen Gou are captured and farmed. Wen Chao is directly thrown to Liger Mountain and tortured to death. Wen Zhuliu is even directly abandoned and thrown away to experience A Xian's cry for losing the golden elixir n times! It's cool to sum it up in one word! ! To sum up, it is a strong recommendation! The writing is good, the plot is great, and the daily life is very heartwarming. You must read it! (Os: Tangtang must give us an extra update [blowing kiss]) @

Author, I really like this fanfic you wrote. "The Patriarch of the Demonic Way" is my first novel. This book brings me a lot of joy and regret. When I was in the first grade of junior high school, I often fantasized that I could help them in their world. Through your writing, I saw the perfection that I was looking for when I was 13 years old. Fujin is very powerful. Her strength can heal Wei Wuxian's childhood trauma, pull Jiang Yanli into the path of cultivation, improve Jiang Cheng's character flaws, save Meng Shi and Meng Yao from the hot water, and save the relationship between Yu Ziyuan and Jiang Fengmian... She has filled up the scars of the "ancestral master of the devil", and she has comforted the hearts of readers like me. Thank you to the author for creating such Fujin. Moreover, the author has greatly compensated for the regrets of the original work and ensured the logic and quality of the entire book. In fact, when reading, I can feel the high level of literacy between the lines. I even need to look up the meaning of some words to know. I am a person who likes to read novels. This is the first time I write such a long book review. I really want to let the author know that there is such a person who likes this fanfic you wrote. I hope that my like can become the motivation for your creation. (I usually use my old mobile phone to read novels. My old mobile phone does not have a phone number, so I cannot comment, so the author, the reading time you see is not the real reading time)

This book is very wonderful and wonderful. The author's understanding of the original book is very deep and thorough. There is no OOC. I feel that the author is very thoughtful and understands the original text to the extent that it can make people rethink the original text. Moreover, the author's profound literary skills make him a very good fan.

It took me a day to tie it up. It's so beautiful. I saw the author revealing some details of the original work. It warmed my heart. I also cried hard at times. I finally understood the meaning of that fan sentence. You can give me the happiness that the original work cannot give (╥╥)

The author's writing is very beautiful. This book makes up for Xianxian's regret of not having parents. This aspect is highly praised. It can be seen from this article that the author loves girls very much. It is good to change the senior sister into a confident, generous and powerful heroine. And the author's writing style is very good, and the characters are not OOC. It's really rare to find a novel that is so to my liking. I love you so much, the author (ღ♡‿♡ღ)

My wife's writing is really good. While the heroine saves the devil, she also slightly changes the scumbag's knife. Every female character written by Madam has embarked on a happy path. When I go home from school every day and read a few chapters before going to bed, I feel like I have hope for life [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's quite good-looking, and it makes up for Xianxian's regret. My Xianxian is also a child with a family. In the original book, I really disliked Jiang Fengmian because he caused unrest in the family and his wife affected Wei Wuxian. Wei Wuxian did not have a good childhood, but this book makes up for this regret. Protagonist Bi Jiang Fengmian I even found Wei Wuxian and adopted him first, and gave him a very, very, very good childhood. My family, Xianxian, is also loved by someone, and Jiang Cheng, the bitter melon, and Jiang Yanli have a hard time getting over each other. Woo hoo hoo, her marriage to Jin Zixuan has been dissolved, Lord. Jiao also taught her how to practice. She was no longer the bitter melon who needed to abide by the rules and be married. She had her own personality, the lineage of Doctor Wen, and many, many more. In short, the regret disappeared and they both had a bright future. Finally, the author will update soon!

I have caught up with the latest chapter (ﾟ∀ﾟ). The author is committed to making up for all the regrets of the original work. The ceiling points of Fujin's extraordinary combat power and the many magic weapons╰(*´`*)╯ have allowed Axian and Ayao to have a wonderful childhood, and Ali and Acheng to have a happy home. Those who watch the plot feel warm in their hearts. Hey, the next step is to recruit Xue Yang. I look forward to the evil friend group! ! ! In addition, the author is seriously considering linking up with Tianguan~~

It looks good, the writing is very good, the heroine's raising of the child is not obtrusive to the original plot, and the author's understanding of the original work is also very good. When I read the original work, I always felt that Jiang Yanli should not be helpless. The author's changes are super good, I am very satisfied😋 I didn't like it very much when I first saw Lan Zhan being sent to the scumbag. Now that I have updated Tianguan, I can only say that the author wrote it very well at the beginning, but not so much later on. I really want to see Lan Zhan's mother resurrected, and that's it. I don't recommend reading it later, and I don't plan to follow it.

Frog Fun, this is really good-looking. I feel that the plot is very reasonable. The heroine is also very three-dimensional and charming. The writing is also very good. The only flaw is that it is not finished. The author should do more [crying]

It's very heartwarming, and it makes up for a lot of regrets. The teacher's writing style is also very good, the plot is also very interesting, and there is also a dream linkage. All in all, it is very, very good to read. Recommended [Like] It's been a long time since I've eaten tomatoes that suit my taste. Come on, teacher!

Give myself a five-star rating, hehe(◍•ᴗ•◍)

I like writing about making up for regrets. The writing style is also good, and the context is smooth. The heroine is a bit squandered, but maybe those things are nothing to the heroine.

I love it, the author is really my mother. All babies can be installed by the heroine. And it feels like a very flat knife. When watching The Demonic Master, the thing that bothered me the most was the knife.

Big cheers for the author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Although it is very interesting, I felt a little uncomfortable after reading Chapter 29. Why was a baby suddenly added in Chapter 29? Because I already accepted it from the beginning. Well, two of the four members of the family are original characters, because when faced with a bunch of poor orphans at the beginning, he did not choose to adopt them, but chose to let them learn skills. However, when faced with this baby, he directly accepted it. In fact, I don't understand a bit. There is no plot foreshadowing, and an original character was directly added. Uh, will there be any other original characters added later? Because the review seems to be about a family of four, well, it's a little bit okay because I don't really like the inexplicable addition of original characters. But it's still super good-looking. Don't criticize me. It's not because this is a girl, so I don't want it to join the family. I wouldn't want it if it were a boy, because I hate the inexplicable original characters joining. Without any foreshadowing, just join directly. After all, I also gave it a five-star rating. I didn't give a bad review for no reason. I just raised questions. If there are more, I will just abandon it and won't scold anyone.

To be honest, it's pretty good-looking. It's refreshing, the ooc is not too overdone, and the difficulty is basically solved. And it's rare that it doesn't discredit any other supporting characters except the villain in the original work. Yes, yes.

The character design is consistent with the original work and is not OOC at all, and the heroine is also very strong and protective of her shortcomings.

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, it fills up a lot of uneasy feelings, and there's no OOC. Rolls, you must keep writing [love] [love] [love]

I don't know why the rating of this book is so low. The author's writing style is very smooth and the plot is well connected. It is really a very relaxing and beautiful work [like][like][like]

It's so beautiful and exciting. I just like such a powerful and unconstrained heroine.

I like this story very much. Xiao Wei Ying can have a stable home and relatives, and his character is still bright and cheerful. Some of the warmth he couldn't ask for was given to him in this world. Da Da not only provided him with his family affection and protection, but also gave him double love. I'm so lucky to be able to read about such a loving world, and I'm grateful for the thoughtful creation. (∩▽∩)

It's really beautiful

It's okay, there's no OOC, it's just that I always talk about big principles, and one lecture is a big one. Every time I skip those principles and watch the plot.