Leader System: Start Operating from a Run-Down Small Sect

It's been a long time since I've seen a good book like this. The characters that have come out so far have their own characteristics. They are not stereotyped villains like AI. The plot is compact. The male protagonist has been growing up under high pressure and trying to survive for the sect in the cracks. I look forward to the protagonist continuing to make the sect bigger and stronger and growing step by step. I feel that if this book continues like this, it can be called a masterpiece. Come on, author! ! !

It's quite interesting. It's the first time I see the system being inherited by the natives of the world of immortality. Instead of blindly enjoying the golden finger, it is getting better step by step. But is it too early to reveal the origin of the system now? Moreover, the protagonist has just established the foundation, and has come into contact with major secrets, such as the blocked path to ascension, the origin of the system, and the three corpses of the Dao Ancestor... It feels like the most important management sect has been left behind. Logically speaking, these should be discovered later. In this way, the title of the book is more appropriate and more logical. The most important thing is that it can be written down bit by bit and decrypted. I feel that the plot moves too fast, and the title of the book mainly describes Liao Liao. But overall the writing is quite good, but I personally feel that the promotion is too fast. You can read it as much as you like, the writing is still good.

It's very good. To be honest, it's better than 80% of Tomato's cultivation novels. It has a vague shadow of the time when I saw the leader of a cultivation sect. Although the writing is not sophisticated, it is still sophisticated and smooth. At least the first 50 chapters are logically clear and layered. The protagonist is made of flesh and blood, and the supporting characters are not facial makeup symbols. They all have their own characteristics. This is not easy. I hope the author can persist in the follow-up. When a man sees a good book, he hopes that the author will not enter the palace too early. The main reason is that there are too many eunuch books here in Tomato.

The most important thing you need to do now is to turn on AI and let it help you rename the title of each chapter. This book is written crookedly from beginning to end. You shouldn't call it this title at all. The route is not a martial art at all. Each chapter unit of this book should be a separate book, instead of mixing three plots together to write a book. Each unit drama can be given 8 points alone, and combined together it is only 6.5 Points. The reason is very simple. You may think that the three paragraphs are one story, the growth process of the protagonist, but to the reader, it is not the same thing at all. It is just that three paragraphs of completely different styles and types of stories are mixed together. The simplest thing is, wouldn't the second plot be valid without the first plot? Is it okay if I just use the second plot as a book? So let me ask you again, is this book unlimited? Not again. Maybe you think that by dividing it into volumes, you can write whatever you want in each volume. I don't know how the author's performance is on other platforms. This kind of writing is not so popular on Tomato. I give full marks because I recognize the author's writing content, but you deserve a low score on Tomato for what you wrote.

It's quite interesting. I've read Chapter 173. It's not too toxic so far. The plot has a good rhythm. It's a good read. It's worth watching. I originally wanted to give it two stars so that more people can see my review, but the book's rating is too low, so I'll give it five stars to improve my rating.

First give yourself a five-star review!

At present, it seems that the plot is quite compact, and it seems to be a rare quality at present. The only problem is that due to the compact plot, the combat power seems a bit vague. For example, a talisman worth five yuan a piece is still used in foundation building, and can even be used in the later stages of foundation building. Moreover, as a fourth-level Nascent Soul treasure, the blueprint of the Danqing Pavilion appears so early, and can be exchanged for only 200 points. . . Invisibly reducing the later development potential. But the shortcomings do not hide the good points. From the writing style, emotional expression, and characterization of the protagonist, it is still a masterpiece.

At first I thought it was just an ordinary development direction, but when I saw it later, it started to look a bit Machiavellian. Overall, it was very interesting to watch and made people feel immersed in it. However, there were some places that were not perfect and should have been corrected using AI. However, overall it was good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Why does it have a low rating? Is it because it's not long enough? I feel that the writing is very good, the writing is fluent, and the plot has ups and downs, especially the part of escorting Yun Zhao back to the sect, which is very exciting. I stayed up late to read it. I give the author five stars and keep writing!

It's good to watch. I like this kind of story about a little character growing up little by little. I originally thought it was a sect management + farming style, but in the end the plot unfolded in a big way. The world is grand and turbulent, and the protagonist is always moving forward.

Full stars are not counted, so I give four stars. Readers who are more than ten years old, read the beginning and the end, there is no AI flavor, the logic is clear, and the language expression is normal. It is worth reading. Come on, the author, don't give up. I've read dozens of them, let's talk about my problems. It's suitable for people who have read novels for four or five years, but it's not suitable for old readers who will have a lot of daydreams! Especially the power system! A group of dozens of middle-stage Qi-refining tribulation cultivators were fighting back and forth with the injured Establishment. It was a bit ridiculous. There was also a talisman, and they had to keep pushing it. What was the talisman? It's enough to activate it. It should be the Foundation Builder who shows up. He chops melons and vegetables and kills most of the casual cultivators. The boss activates the talisman and injures him severely. Also, the protagonist's full attack of the Foundation Builder only breaks the temporary defensive spell. It's a bit funny. He should break the shield directly and split the person into two!

Let me ask, has the author forgotten that there is such a thing as reputation in the system? And don't you remember the points? [Laughing] Have you forgotten that it is a sect management system? You should not have this name

This is not a mindless and refreshing article about cultivating immortals. It may have been cliche when I was in the sect. After building the foundation, I can see that the author has his own ideas. The plot has logical reasoning and game elements. The protagonist has a distinctive personality and can use his brain. So far, it seems to be pretty good (as of the 5th-5th chapter of this review)

I prefer the main story content, but the dungeon content is too long, and the single-player content for the protagonist is very long. I basically skipped through the modern part, and kept exploring and solving puzzles. I even doubted whether I was reading a fairy tale or an infinite stream.

This is a rare novel that has a system, but mainly relies on the protagonist's own abilities to grow slowly. It's not the kind of cool story that cheats as soon as there is a system. For example, even though the master of the male protagonist has a system, he doesn't escape.

The writing style is particularly down-to-earth. It doesn't downplay the protagonist just for the sake of humor, nor does it make the villain very sharp. Like it very much! I have read more than seventy chapters, and it is quite interesting. However, from about forty to seventy chapters, I have not returned to the sect. The sect leader has been flying solo. I was originally attracted by the sect system, but now I feel that the super protagonist has an on-hook system that can continuously generate equipment. Looking at the chapter names, I feel like the sect leader's solo career will take another ten or twenty chapters, alas.

This book is quite good. I like this kind of slowly building up a sect.

No one read it. Duan Pingshao is still not interesting, but the writing is very good.

Yes, it's not a cool article, the system is auxiliary. Although the content is good, your title is about sect management. I see that you are actually writing about the first half now, but at the end, you are all writing about frontline matters. This transition is a bit long, although I know that I will probably write back later, because judging from your previous content, the overall story line is very long. Think about it carefully later. After reading it, the title and content of your book may cause some controversy. The content is good, it can be regarded as a traditional immortality article. The quality and IQ are both online.

There's nothing serious about it, the characters are well-drawn, and it's not brainless. It's a fine product.

The writing is smooth, the growth and development are natural, and there are no brainless cheats. I don't understand why the rating is so low.

It's a fairy tale among tomatoes, it has logic and depth.

It's good-looking, the characters and plot are relatively normal, it's not a mindless novel, but it's inexplicably attractive.

After reading the first volume, I realized that this is really a good book with potential [laughs] Just caught up with the latest chapter. But can the author of @ please let more disciples from Lin Chen's sect participate more? They feel a little disengaged. I think since this is a sect book, can you write more about the development of the sect (without affecting the author's broad outline, the writing so far is actually quite good). So far, Lin Chen has been working hard for the sect alone. Now the disciples of the sect don't know what to do. Maybe they are avoiding the ghost-faced crowd. I think it is better to let them play a little role than Lin Chen to work hard alone. [Love] [Love] [Love] The setting of this novel is really good, please come on💪

Five-star praise. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs, and the author is particularly good at describing fighting tactics.

I'm still very satisfied with what I've seen so far

Good, good, good, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

I don't know why the rating is so low, but it's actually pretty good.

The protagonist is not a time traveler, the protagonist's master is, but the protagonist has a good character under the influence of the time traveler master.

It's okay. In addition to being systematic and very traditional about cultivating immortals, the writing style is also good.