This is a story about the struggle of civilian ninjas. The protagonist Chen Xi has no Sharingan, Byakugan, or Reincarnation Eye, and there is no system! Some of them only had the Tai Chi they learned when they were fans of martial arts and immortals in their previous lives and the Taoist classics they memorized, but they couldn't develop their internal and spiritual powers in the world of Naruto! There will be no combat power beyond the rules of the Naruto world, but you can step by step from ordinary to shadow level, improve your combat power, and rely on your own efforts and the help of your friends to protect the people and the village you cherish!
Reader comments
The logic is clear, and the timeline begins with the arrival of the protagonist as a three-year-old child in Wood Industry Village, and gradually describes the protagonist's transformation from a stranger to integrating into the family, to actively planning how to enhance his own strength in the future, and achieve the ultimate goal of protecting his family and friends. At present, it seems that the setting is still in line with the main outline. The protagonist is a civilian, there is no cheat system, the initial mental strength is average, and there is no ninja elder in the family to provide experience and help. He can only use the skills he learned in his previous life and his understanding of the Naruto incident to move forward.
To be honest. It's amazing that AI can be written like this.
It should be that the author has a good grasp of the outline and plot rhythm, as well as reasonable planning of the settings.
However, AI's unique metaphors, problem analysis methods, customary "not but" sentence patterns, and indiscriminate use of the first-person perspective. These problems are still very prominent.
However, except for the timeline at the beginning, the biggest problem with AI has not occurred, which is contextual contradictions. Without this hard question, coupled with an excellent outline, it is still worth reading.
AI novels, especially novels that are heavily expanded and have a large number of words in a single chapter.
It relies heavily on the continuity of reading, which means that if you catch up on updates, you will not be able to catch up.
I haven't read it for two days, and I can't even remember what you wrote before. A lot of invalid words directly offset your normal plot development, so that I can abandon the book after catching up with the latest chapter you wrote.
I hope I can still read it after you finish writing it.
It's good. It's much better than others. I didn't see any poisonous points. The description of realm breakthrough is very detailed. This is very good. I would like to give you a suggestion. After you finish writing, you should bring the readers into it. After seeing the plot, you should think about what the readers will think about the next plot.
The system is very good and the writing is beautiful.
Integrating Tai Chi concepts, this book will become a hit soon
It's not bad at this stage. I hope I don't get convulsions.
Very well written! Come on
The author's writing style is very good [laughing]
It's extremely uncomfortable. I have to defend everything. I don't understand the simplest truth that offense is the best defense.
Oh my God, I actually saw a masterpiece in 🍅!
It feels good now. It's slow but has a strong sense of immersion.
It's written with great details. You're really talented. I give it a thumbs up.
Five-star praise, it is really the best Naruto fanfic I have ever read, the first one is Legend of Chiba
It's well written, the protagonist doesn't have a lot of gold fingers, and the whole thing isn't exaggerated.
The logic is clear, and the timeline begins with the arrival of the protagonist as a three-year-old child in Wood Industry Village, and gradually describes the protagonist's transformation from a stranger to integrating into the family, to actively planning how to enhance his own strength in the future, and achieve the ultimate goal of protecting his family and friends. At present, it seems that the setting is still in line with the main outline. The protagonist is a civilian, there is no cheat system, the initial mental strength is average, and there is no ninja elder in the family to provide experience and help. He can only use the skills he learned in his previous life and his understanding of the Naruto incident to move forward.
To be honest. It's amazing that AI can be written like this. It should be that the author has a good grasp of the outline and plot rhythm, as well as reasonable planning of the settings. However, AI's unique metaphors, problem analysis methods, customary "not but" sentence patterns, and indiscriminate use of the first-person perspective. These problems are still very prominent. However, except for the timeline at the beginning, the biggest problem with AI has not occurred, which is contextual contradictions. Without this hard question, coupled with an excellent outline, it is still worth reading. AI novels, especially novels that are heavily expanded and have a large number of words in a single chapter. It relies heavily on the continuity of reading, which means that if you catch up on updates, you will not be able to catch up. I haven't read it for two days, and I can't even remember what you wrote before. A lot of invalid words directly offset your normal plot development, so that I can abandon the book after catching up with the latest chapter you wrote. I hope I can still read it after you finish writing it.
It's good. It's much better than others. I didn't see any poisonous points. The description of realm breakthrough is very detailed. This is very good. I would like to give you a suggestion. After you finish writing, you should bring the readers into it. After seeing the plot, you should think about what the readers will think about the next plot.
The system is very good and the writing is beautiful.
Integrating Tai Chi concepts, this book will become a hit soon
It's not bad at this stage. I hope I don't get convulsions.
Very well written! Come on
The author's writing style is very good [laughing]
It's extremely uncomfortable. I have to defend everything. I don't understand the simplest truth that offense is the best defense.
Oh my God, I actually saw a masterpiece in 🍅!
It feels good now. It's slow but has a strong sense of immersion.
It's written with great details. You're really talented. I give it a thumbs up.
Five-star praise, it is really the best Naruto fanfic I have ever read, the first one is Legend of Chiba
It's well written, the protagonist doesn't have a lot of gold fingers, and the whole thing isn't exaggerated.