Using the MC System to Wear a Stolen Pen, I Turned Out to Be a Beautiful and Powerful Person.

I have to say that the writing is pretty good, but the writing style cannot be said to be too good. But they have their own unique emotions, and the characters have their own uniqueness, as if they have grown up because of this world. It is very beautiful, the subject matter is novel, and the plot is also very emotional... It is just a little bit less interesting. The writing style still needs to be improved and the plot logic is a little bit unclear... But it is still very smooth to watch. And Qi Baye's words, I personally feel that it is a bit too OOC. [Cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Qi Baye is too inscrutable, that one has a slight smile, and has a deep meaning... I can't imagine that Qi Tiezui still has such an image [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]... The author's writing style is not so meaningful, I don't mean to say so, it is really close... The author is a bit of a writing novice, but it is really good. Come on, author [like] [like] [like]

It's good-looking and has his own style. He taught the little brother to love himself, which brought a bright color and precious memories to Xiao Zhang's childhood. He let them know about emotions and made them friends. He was a little bit sharp [crying], but not much (I won't write about it later, one This is the first time I write a long book review. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it. It's just my personal opinion.) This book is really nice [very quiet] but can it be updated faster, whispering jpg (the author is also super nice, he actually replies to me, and calls me when I create a group, I really want to chat [laughs]) The language of this book is plain and straightforward, without too many flowery words or sophisticated rhetoric. The setting is novel and the emotions are sincere. The integration of the MC system and the world of stolen pens is just right. It also writes a protagonist with sincere feelings for others, a story with several people, and the setting of each time traveler. It is a book worth reading. (My writing is not good, so I can only write like this. Anyway, it is very beautiful)

I am an outsider of Tomb Raiders Notes, but I have read many fan novels. I think this one is really interesting. He teaches the little brother to love himself twice and tells him that he is not an abandoned child. I really think this book is very loving, although I have only read Chapter 9! ! Many of the other fan fictions I have seen so far are about companionship and protection, but this one is really teaching me to love myself! [Shy] This really pokes me, I feel very gentle. [Blows a kiss] Children should love themselves.

It's a bit frustrating to be plotted all the time, especially when it comes to human experiments.

It shouldn't be too much to give me five stars [shy][shy][shy] I have been writing this for so long, and I am really grateful for your support. In fact, it was originally just a passionate sparring session during the summer vacation. I did not expect to be able to write more than 100 chapters. I am really happy to write a novel for the first time. [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] Thank you very much for your support. I know that sometimes I am a little slow, but I will definitely try my best to write! ! ! So please bear with me, dear ones. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The type of book I define for him is a happy book, but it is not guaranteed. Sometimes the author will bring personal emotions into it when there are exams or when the course pressure is high [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. Sometimes the writing may be a bit depressing, if this happens! Darlings, you can leave messages as much as you like to awaken my conscience...? Well, yes! Also, although my first book Hehe has so many friends liking it, I am already satisfied [shy][shy][shy], but can I take the liberty to look forward to the long comments from you guys [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][harm Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy] I'm still looking forward to everyone's opinions on this book. It can be good or bad. Fair and objective comments are also an important direction for my learning.

It's so beautiful, I can't stop watching it! Even if I become a man, I still want to watch it, I want to watch aliens, I want to watch shemales, I want to watch it even if I stay up late (ﾉ∇︎ )[Shy](ˊᵒ̴̶̷̤ ꇴ ᵒ̴̶̷̤ˋ)

Good, good, good, good! ! ! It's so to my liking, but it's a little bit cruel. It's too scary to go back to the original body, and I can't even look at it when I meet Wang Wang directly. It's so delicious. Come on [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

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Dear author, your writing is very good, but when will you update it? Please update something new. The child is going to faint from hunger. I'm on my knees for you, my sister, my dear sister, please update it. I really have no novels to read, so please update it. Your writing is so good, why don't you update it? Why? Don't stop updating? Dear author, are you back? Where have you been? Baby, you are finally back. How can I live without you? I thought you were going to stop updating [crying]

The previous paragraph was so sad. One of the excerpts is: "The memory forgets the pain, but the soul remembers it for me."

It's very good to watch, but it may be a little awkward in the early stage (this is just my own opinion). It will become more and more beautiful when you watch it later. If you can't stand it when you watch it at the beginning, you can just jump to the back and watch it. The back part is particularly attractive, and getting along with the little brother and Heixiazi is very warm.

It's so good to watch. The parting scenes with Xiao Zhang and others are a bit cumbersome [I'm about to cry]. However, I'm really looking forward to the subsequent plot where the protagonist and the black blind man meet again [Adoration]. I'm also looking forward to the opening of the main story later on. Good cheers for the author [Blow a kiss]

I'm curious, is there anyone out there like me who felt like they couldn't get out of the story after reading the chapter where An knew the truth? That chapter was really cruel. In the other chapters after that, An also felt like she had become fainter, and it felt like she would disappear in the next second.

Author nb! ! ! [Laughs] Who knows, I really like this kind of setting [Admiration]

It's so beautiful, it's simply not enough to watch. Please don't stop updating it [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

Xiao Zhang is quite good-looking and makes my heart melt when I see it. The foreshadowing is well laid out and it's logical. I think it's good-looking but a little bit cruel.

The setting is good, the writing is good, and the plot is good. There are not many Tomb Raiders fanfics out there🥲

Qwq wrote it with caution, Wu Laosi's explosives are so powerful. The author's writing style coexists with humor. Can I write a hundred chapters a day [blowing kiss]

Listen to me and pack something nice!

It looks good, but I thought it was only a little cruel. Why is it so cruel [crying]

[Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] It's so cruel, Ann [Cry][Cry] I feel sorry for you

It's well written, and it still feels that way\( ͯω ͯ)/

Look good, look good, look good, it's time to look good

It's super interesting. I only became interested in Minecraft after reading this novel. After playing it, I found that it really fits the game. Good looking(♥∀♥)

It's pretty good, you can take a look if you're interested.

The author is so creative and the writing is very good. I like it very much. After all, he is also a person who plays Minecraft. The fact that the author can write these things into the novel is enough to show that you are very capable and very innovative. After all, not everyone can think of this and write it into it, and the author is one of them. Come on

It looks good, but I discovered it too early.

I like it very much and put it on the update list. I hope you won't stop updating [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The teacher's writing is good and the characters are well created. It's so exciting! It's so cool to have such a light protagonist! ❥ ฅ՞•ﻌ•՞ฅ