Cultivation of Immortality Is Natural and Natural

The content and subject matter written by the author are also very to my liking. I am just not very good at acting, but it doesn't matter. Everyone has something they are not good at. Just practice more. I hope there will be better works in the future. Off topic: When will the Fairy World chapter be released? I am looking forward to it (if you have time, you can correct the typos in it) , because some readers don't like typos and it will affect the experience of listening to books.) At the same time, I also wish my sister to get better and better, become more and more popular, and get the love and support of more readers. Don't forget me then. After all, this is my first time to write a long review (⑅˃◡˂⑅) (I want to call you sister here)

It looks good [Blowing Kiss] The heroine was transported to the world of immortality. She tests her spiritual roots at the beginning and worships the Immortal Sect. If she likes the heroine, she is a genius. [Blowing Kiss] The heroine will always encounter other things when she goes out to practice, but most of them will be blessings in disguise. Moreover, the author's rhythm is faster, which makes me feel that the heroine is very good at things. [Send Heart] Later, it also explains the reasons why the heroine always encounters things. The author has laid a lot of foreshadowing in the front [laughing]. In the end, it was not the battle between good and evil that I originally thought of. The development was unexpected but also reasonable. Oh, yes, there is a male protagonist, but there are not many emotional lines, and his sense of existence is not strong [laughing and crying]. Finally, Shen Xinyan's story is not over yet, it can be said that it has just begun, so I would like to remind you to update the fairyland chapter [Shy] The author, please give me a big boost [Blow a kiss]

It's good, it's good, don't let the title put you off. Although it's not a group portrait novel at the moment, the heroine doesn't lack friends. Something happens every time she goes out, and there are people who share the same path around her, which is equivalent to a group portrait. It's a very normal book about cultivating immortals. Although the heroine doesn't rank first in every competition or ranking, she gets what she needs and wants by accident. It feels like a hundred flowers blooming. Everyone is great. This is how I feel about my current progress. I want to continue reading.

Overall, it's okay. The sentences are indeed a bit long, and there are also a lot of modal particles. Oh, you can write less of this. It's more focused on the heroine's personal growth. Later, I rarely write about her good friends and family members in the early stage. OK, I happened to be online and saw the end, so I read the rest in one go. I feel like I can start a second part to write about what happened after the fairy world. There are many things that haven't been written yet, such as the person who dug up the tears of the sharks before and the story of the cult leader.

It's not bad. The content is not that bloody. The early stage is a bit bland and the experience in the middle and late stages is more interesting. Also, the first part is not done well and it is a bit long and easy to tire out. The heroine has a lively personality. She has the liveliness and cheerfulness of a child and loves to act coquettishly, but also has the caution and stability of shouldering heavy responsibilities. Talented players have weird luck and are decisive in killing. They rarely hide their identity. They use their identity when it is convenient. There is no messy text about the sect's big test. The male protagonist on the background board has almost no emotional lines. Book lovers who like no cp can give it a try In fact, I really want to read the Immortal World chapter. I feel that the Hui Sharman clan would be more interesting. After all, the female protagonist is the most talented one in the tribe, and the other sages have not yet ascended, and the male protagonist has no status. I feel that the Immortal World chapter can contain a lot of content. The heroine's wood spirit body and the water attributes of the sharks are a bit delayed. In addition, the title and introduction of the book are a bit delayed for this novel.

A beautiful picture, a delicate figure, shining in the tranquility and beauty of summer! June is the most beautiful day in the world, when all things are at their peak, and all good things happen at the right time. May you be born like a summer flower and live up to your time. May the time be clear and shallow, may you be at peace, may the years be quiet and good, and count the passing years.

Please do a big update. The first few pictures are really beautiful.

It's good to watch, and I'm looking forward to the sequel

I like it very much. I found one of the few wood-type Tianlinggen heroines. It would be better if there is a sequel. I am looking forward to the heroine's life after arriving in the fairy world [Adoration]

It's a pretty good piece of writing about cultivating immortals. It would be better if some modal words like oh, ah, could be deleted.

It's really beautiful, good luck to the author!

Looks pretty good

Who is the male protagonist? [Laughing and crying] Why didn't I see it?

I see it's pretty good now

It's okay, it's pretty.

So far, it looks pretty good. Come on, author, and work hard to finish it! ! !

The writing is very good. I don't know why the rating is so low. The writing is very good. I even stayed up late to read it.

Yeah, yeah, I like the heroine [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] please give me more [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]