After the Marriage, Jinyiwei Fell

I was attracted by the writing, the plot, and the tension between the male and female protagonists. I read about 130 chapters in one go and found it difficult to continue because the feeling of frustration overshadowed my pleasure in reading. The male protagonist has a sense of superiority and control in all aspects, whether in bed or off, regardless of verbal confrontation or physical confrontation. Although there are back and forth, the final point is that the male protagonist is superior. At this time, the male protagonist's so-called admiration for the female protagonist is more like the inspection of the superior person. Even an apology is to examine the reaction of the female protagonist. The female protagonist is too quick to move, forgive too quickly, and will always be suppressed. The heroine's family obviously has status, status and IQ, so why does the heroine show weakness from the beginning and coaxes the hero at every turn? She originally thought that the heroine was the leader and controller of the relationship between the two, but she didn't expect to be defeated so early. The plot shown in the article shows that the hero is attracted first, the hero pursues his wife, the heroine's family is strong, and the heroine's personal abilities are a bit low in concentration. , I don't like to express the love of the male protagonist for the female protagonist through the plot of the male protagonist cleaning up the female protagonist, because the identity of the female protagonist is not a dependent, not a subordinate. She obviously has the resources and abilities, and she should bring her own light. She can be the male protagonist's support, not just a gentle and appropriate wife who carries out an independent career with the male protagonist's acquiescence. The writing is very good, but it may be a matter of personal preference. I am a firm feminist. She can be weak, lonely, and disadvantaged, but at least she cannot be manipulated emotionally.

Among the time-travel stories I have read, they are considered to be top-notch. They are relatively realistic and logical. Both male and female protagonists have their own mouths. If there is any misunderstanding, they will quickly talk it out. Anyway, it is very interesting. I will give it a five-star review to support it. 🔥🔥🔥The relationship between the male and female protagonists is very emotionally developed. It is also the kind of slim and popular, and the development speed is just right [Send heart]

The writing is rigorous, the plot is attractive, and both the heroine and the hero are thoughtful. The female protagonist is a special police officer who traveled through time, and the male protagonist is a native. The two began to battle wits and courage, and then gradually fell in love with each other as their understanding deepened. Worth watching the show. Give it a perfect score of 5⭐!

Come and recommend this good book to my sisters. The male and female protagonists are evenly matched with each other. I like the author's writing style so much. It is full of reversals and the feelings of family and country are not lost in the love. The male protagonist is a good son who is clear-headed and will not harm the country because of hatred, and the female protagonist is also a tolerant and kind-hearted character. These two people have to work together to find a way out of the chess game in the cracks, which makes people look forward to the upcoming heavy rain. Yes, I have already followed "It's going to rain heavily, and my uncle won't go out" [laughing] This is the first time I've evaluated a book before I've even finished reading it. It's really worth pursuing. Great author, come on💪

First of all, the author's writing is good and the story is very attractive. However, in the relationship between the heroine and the hero, I personally feel that it makes people feel a little uncomfortable (overall). Another thing that I am not satisfied with is that it clearly felt that the hero and heroine were still in a cold war one second and needed to calm down, but the next second the heroine forgave her and bowed her head. It felt like this several times. Other than this, overall it's pretty good.

The following is my impression after listening to the book. The author's writing style is not bad. He likes to write about people's movements and demeanor far more than dialogue, so as to express the character's personality and mood. Most of the characters in the article have restrained emotions and deep thoughts. The author uses a lot of [tiny] movements and expressions to reflect this personality/emotion. So I keep hearing descriptors like "invisible", "barely detectable", and "slightly", almost in every chapter... The eyes are dark and dark... The voice is low and low... It's so low that it's a bit funny😮‍💨 In addition, the subtle movements of each character must be written down, which makes me feel like the director is reading the script. It is too detailed (although I have not seen the script...), And I don't know if it is trying to achieve the effect of Zhen Huan. Overall, it's okay. You can read it. The effect of reading should be better than listening to the book. 4 Stars are encouraged.

I saw 300,000 words and tied it. Let's evaluate it first. This is the first time I read the author's book, it's really good! All the people present are smart and their IQs are online! Stratagems, machinations, conspiracies, human hearts, human nature, human feelings, the depiction is meticulous but not rough, the psychological description of the characters is accurate, the overall plot is advanced in an orderly manner, not impatient, not impatient, and not wordy. I'll give it a good review first, it's probably going to be hundreds of thousands of words long, and I'll follow up with the review after it's finished. I am serious and responsible for every evaluation I make [cool][cool][cool]

Nice! ! ! Although it is a serial and only a few chapters have been updated, in the latest chapter, the male and female protagonists have already expressed their feelings for each other. Although the two have not yet completely talked openly about all their secrets, at least they already have feelings for each other in the latest chapter. The world structure of this article is quite large. I think some of the lines are relatively deep, and the villains all have brains. The biggest villain and many secrets have not yet been fully revealed. The writing is good and the plot is relatively smooth. The layout is not simple either, but overall it looks good so far.

The writing is quite good, but many places in the early stage are superfluous. The author writes that the heroine is smart and decisive. She treats the emperor and the queen mother with quick thinking. It can be seen that the brain is very good, but it seems that we are afraid that our brains are not very good. Every time the heroine speaks, there will be annotations and similar things below. The heroine says something, and the author adds something below, saying this What is it for, like reading comprehension, this habit is not good, but the rest is pretty good, but the author's progress in the later stage is very fast, and there are very few details. It is still recommended to read. Oh, there is another shortcoming, that is, the original heroine disappeared inexplicably. I am not comfortable with the setting. Every time I see this, I feel that the original heroine was really miserable, and then killed the queen mother of the original heroine, and everyone is praising it.

It's quite good to watch. There is no plot that can be missed. You need to read it with your brain. Some plots are unpredictable even without thinking. The image of the heroine is different from what I have seen before. It is very distinctive, including the male protagonist. The author is also very good. The author is really good and the plot is well written. It is very enjoyable to read. I stayed up for a few days and finally finished it. Hahahaha. Come on, the author. I like ancient Chinese novels. Please read more! ! The relationship between the heroine and the hero is very delicate, including the tension and reversal. When reading this book, you can immerse yourself in it and experience the sourness and tension in it. It is refreshing.

It's been a long time since I've seen a book with such good writing. Not only are the plots intertwined, but the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are both ups and downs and smooth. Although the male and female protagonists are deeply impressed by each other at first sight and fall in love at first sight, they are both rational. They get married first and then fall in love. From mutual defense, appreciation, cooperation, trust, temptation, and fall, they taste the entanglement of love again and again, and finally open their hearts completely and trust tightly, making readers unable to stop watching. It is worth recommending. The current rating is only 8.1. If more people want to watch it, it will definitely exceed 9.5.

One of the best movies in recent times. The emotional pull between the male and female protagonists is so fragrant and delicate, and the characters are very, very comfortable. It is not silly and sweet, but instead you and I compete with each other in a battle of wits and courage. It is very enjoyable to watch. Although the author's Machiavellian skills still need to be improved, the emotional line has covered this shortcoming. [Sending Hearts]

The emotional scenes were portrayed very vigorously and fragrantly, although it was a bit different from what I expected, because the heroine's status as a special police officer was of little use... I thought she would often kill everyone, but in fact it was quite rare. I also thought she would be a strategist and chess player, but the actual tactics are as simple and crude as those on the set. When I think about it carefully, the heroine's emotional changes are also a little subtle and stiff. Do you think it is the result of the acting and it is really love at first sight? I looked a little confused. The characters and plot are well matched, but the specific content is empty. It would be perfect if it were longer and more detailed.

A good book with two strong characters. The heroine uses her wisdom to fight her way out. The beginning has a feeling of Mr. And Mrs. Smith fighting against each other. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. The ending is too idealistic, but the flaws are not hidden. It is still very interesting. About 200 chapters is the best length.

First of all, I praise the author's penmanship. The ink is rarely used on the appearance of the characters, but more on the psychological activities of the characters. At the same time, the description of psychological activities and expressions is not cliche. The same mysterious words are not always used, such as "a glimmer in the eyes". Different situations and different backgrounds can always be accurately and uniquely described. Even though the appearance of the characters is rarely described, the charm and magnanimity of each character are vividly displayed in their interactions. These cannot be accurately displayed by gorgeous appearance words. Secondly, a very important part of watching a romance is of course the emotional pull. The pull between Xie Lanyin and Zhan Shuo has back and forth, retreat and advance. The pull between them is not too cold and stagnant to make people anxious, nor is it too sweet to make people speechless. It builds the trust of a real couple through repeated confrontations and pulls, and clearly sees the other's sincere trust in them. Third, the romance content and the plot are well proportioned, and it is not boring. It not only tries to reflect the characters through their psychological activities, but also uses the storyline to depict the characters. The characters and the plot complement each other. Finally, when I think about it after reading it, I don't feel doubtful, but rather curious to know more. For example, when Mo Yu was checking Zhan Shuo's past, he should have written that the past ten years were very clean and seemed to be covered up vaguely, so is there more hidden information about his financial background? And, although Zhan Shuo is no longer obsessed with Lan Yin's past, after everything has settled, will he still have the idea of ​​telling Zhan Shuo about his past? After reading it in two days, I was shocked to realize that the rating should be more than eight. Then I looked back and found that it was recently completed, and I realized that I am so happy (I don't have to work hard to gain weight). Thanks to the author for his writing and dedication.

Good looking and recommended! The author's writing is good, and it currently scores over 9.5 Points. The plot has ups and downs, no unnecessary nonsense, and every page is exciting! Unlike other time-travel romances, which can stretch into more than a dozen chapters just by cooking, I didn't miss a single page of this one. I even read it over again while waiting for the update, especially since the male and female protagonists are both wise and courageous. The emotional lines are rich, delicate and extremely stretched. I'm hooking people and waiting for the update... [Laughs]

Wuwuwuwu, why are you so good at reading this novel? I finished it in one day. I originally didn't want to read an article with a mind-blowing plot twist, but this one is so good. Wuwuwu, please give me a damn rating [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [crying] [crying] [crying]. Don't come in and read it if you don't want it to be 9.0! This book will be as high as 9.8 When it pops up [crying][crying][crying], come and read it, come and read it, the plot is compact and nonsensical, it is a pleasure to read and has no flaws, the writing is one of the best in the world, come and read it (distorted dark fly rubs hands)

It's so beautiful. Both the male and female protagonists have top-notch IQs. There's no nonsense, no misunderstandings, and no vicious female counterpart. It's really rare. Although the two people are testing their feelings, they are not pretentious. The evenly matched relationship is so frustrating. The author is so awesome. I must like it👍 Important points: there is no white lotus, no vicious female supporting role, and no slap-in-the-face plot. The IQ of the entire book's characters is available online. The IQ of the entire book's characters is available online.

Very well written! But I suddenly discovered that in all novels there seems to be a plot where the male protagonist is knocked unconscious in order to protect the female protagonist! Of course there is also the other way around! To be honest, why I wanted to say these things after watching this movie is because the author has already portrayed the heroine very well! But the male protagonist is still like that! I suddenly thought about a question, whether a man's recognition, love and respect for a woman means fighting side by side, or always wanting to protect her behind! Probably both, just in different ways. To be honest, personally, if I am not capable, I hope there is someone I can rely on! But if I am not inferior to men, I hope my partner can fight alongside me! I hope he can recognize this person's ability from the bottom of his heart, even if something happens, oh no! Although he is sad, he can understand that this is what I want most! All I want is to be by your side, not behind you! I feel like if I could write a heroine who is as capable as she is, she would follow a general in ancient times, and she would be a female general. Fight side by side at last! It is the kind of life partner and the most respected comrade-in-arms, or this kind of role is the mother of the death of the male protagonist or the female protagonist. The hero and heroine ask his father, his father reminisces, etc. Haha, the thoughts are spread too far! Overall, this novel is very well written! Recommend!

My biggest feeling after reading this book is that the author describes the inner characters of the characters very carefully. I like it. I also like the characters of the male and female protagonists. There is no vulgar plot of house fighting and female competition. It is not procrastinating and is very decisive and smart. Look at my homepage to see how many books or books I have read. You can tell by the length of reading that I am a Lao Tomato reader, but almost 90% of the books are unfinished, due to various reasons. However, it took me less than a day (sporadically) to finish reading this one. The plot is compact and the emotional lines are laid out very naturally. I like it so much! Some people may think that the male protagonist is always suspicious in the early stage, and that he does not have much true love for the female protagonist, and his character is not that perfect. Everyone has their own opinions. I personally think that it is impossible for a person who lives in the mud like him to trust someone so quickly. It all takes time. The main thing is that the female protagonist's baby is really good and good, and the male protagonist has no reason not to be attracted to her. Alas, they are both good babies. Baby Lanyin and Zhan Shuo will definitely be happy forever! [Shy][shy][shy]

Nice. The emotional development of the male and female protagonists is delicate and reasonable, the plot logic is well closed, and the author's writing style is also very good. Two people who care about each other treat each other sincerely every time they get along, and eventually fall in love with each other. They know each other and are each other's armor and sharp sword, so they can move forward without hesitation, hesitation, or hesitation, and achieve great things together. Xie Lanyin and Zhan Shuo fell in love at first sight, but fell deeply in love step by step. It's really great that the two of them don't mince words, don't hide things, don't act pretentious, and have no misunderstandings. They honestly admit that they are serious until the end. [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

Reading the whole book gave me a really amazing feeling. First of all, the author handles every detail very well. Whether it is the psychology of the characters, the description of the scenery, or the wording of the actions, it all gives people a natural feeling. The second is the portrayal of the characters. Each character is very three-dimensional, and the author's intention in shaping it can be felt through the words. I think the general story is that the heroine uses gentleness, tenacity, sobriety, tolerance, wisdom and straightforward emotions to guide the hero step by step to let go of his guard, show his softest side, and become each other's only one. Especially worth seeing [love]

Different from previous time travels, and different from ordinary palace fights and house fights, I prefer a joint operation between ancient and modern special police. The female protagonist uses modern behavioral logic to join the ancient male protagonist and those bright and dark figures to break the situation and win a new tomorrow! A game within a game, a plan within a plan within a plan, the plot is compact and the logic is clear, but the author secretly intersperses many of the root causes of behavioral logic - human hearts and feelings - into the overall trend. The author said that they are sober in their temptations and cautious in their trust. I fully agree. For every protagonist and supporting character in the article, in a chess game surrounded by tigers and wolves, it is rational and inevitable to save life first and then fall in love... Regarding many scenes in the article, whether they are suspicion, temptation, temptation, or passion, from expressions to actions to words, they really touch people's hearts. The writing is very good! Rating should be just a matter of time, 9.5 And above should be stable! In addition, each of the steady secret guards has their own unique characteristics and lively personalities. Although they cannot walk under the sun, their hearts are not dead and dark. No matter how many words are written, they are impressive! Looking forward to the extra episode! It would be best to have a lot of extras! ! !

A very excellent work. Thank you to the author for writing such a vivid character. I hope everyone in the parallel world will be happy. This book completely deserves a higher rating. The writing is very good and delicate, and the plot is brilliant. The male and female protagonists transition from testing to joining hands very naturally. The two people's feelings are sour and sweet. There are no more than two chapters of misunderstandings. I feel very comfortable reading it. There are quite a lot of 🥩. I especially like the character of the heroine, who is sober and transparent, and can see her own emotions clearly. I really can't bear to part with it, reading a good book is so enjoyable that time flies by so fast. I don't know what I'm talking about. In short, this book is worth reading. I don't know why the rating is a bit low. Don't be dissuaded by the rating!

A two-powerful novel, a Machiavellian novel, a game between two masters! A calculated marriage binds the male and female protagonists together. The heroine travels through time, has an online IQ, and loves the hero soberly without sinking. Everything she did for the male protagonist after she got married can be regarded as a good wife. Although she was just kind to the male protagonist in the beginning to survive and fulfill her responsibilities as a wife, she was not without a bottom line. She had her own trump card and would always leave a thin line for herself in everything she did. The male protagonist has always been defensive and distrustful towards the female protagonist in the early stage. The male protagonist's position has made him accustomed to being cautious, wary of anyone, and keeping things under control, including the female protagonist. So it also broke the heroine's heart! Later, after the male protagonist understood his feelings, he opened his mouth and confessed to the female protagonist. After communicating with the heroine, he transformed into a clingy big dog, sweet. From the beginning of mutual suspicion and distrust to the end when the two are willing to risk their lives and live and die together, this process is really addictive! The heart-to-heart talk between two strong men is so refreshing! No misunderstandings, no messy bad peach blossoms! Not to torture, just to watch them pull each other off!

• Female protagonist: Xie Lanyin, a modern special police elite who traveled through time and became the legitimate daughter of an ancient official family. She is agile, thoughtful and has a strong desire to survive. • Male protagonist: Zhan Shuo, the cold-faced commander of the Imperial Guards. He is ruthless and powerful. All the court officials are afraid of him. A time-traveling SWAT heroine × a cold-faced commander of the Imperial Guards + Marriage first, love later + Powerful game between two strong men + Two strong men flirting with each other, high energy throughout the process The female protagonist takes the initiative to explore an alliance, and the male protagonist is strong and arrogant. The two start to guard against each other and compete with each other in a battle of wits and courage to start a game of power. The female protagonist faced danger many times and fought back and killed her opponents in public. The male protagonist witnessed her brave and strong side, with a cold mouth but silent protection, and gradually fell in love with her. Marriage first, love later is not a forced love. The two work together as allies, recognize each other's strength, and then develop feelings for each other. The two sides have a solid foundation for going in both directions.

1. The author's writing style is very good, and various scenes are described very carefully, allowing readers to instantly have a three-dimensional sense of the picture, especially the description of the psychological activities of the characters is very powerful; 2. The characters are innovative. In fact, this is the first story in which I feel that each character cannot be simply defined as good or bad. Everyone has their own shining points and their own dark side, whether they are the male protagonist or the female protagonist; 3. The storyline is basically smooth, but if you look back carefully, there are still a lot of bugs. Some details do not explain the causes and consequences, which will make people feel a little confused. For example, the female protagonist was originally a candidate for the second prince's concubine, but she was unexpectedly betrothed to the male protagonist by the Queen Mother. The Queen Mother's plan was not clearly written. Why she gave up protecting her mother's family and disrupted the selection of the prince's marriage again. I think this motive was not clearly written; and the emperor's intention was not clearly written. The emperor's various suppressions of ministers, such as the suppression of the Xie family, are written too little, and only a little bit is revealed from the words of the heroine's grandfather, so the motives of the heroine taking the role of the hero are not reliable enough, something must have happened to cause this... And so on. 4. Here, I think the emotional line of the male and female protagonists is too awesome. Although she is a time traveler, it seems that the female protagonist is omnipotent. She goes from being full of calculations to falling in love too quickly. Although the author uses a lot of pen and ink to describe the life of the male and female protagonists. I like it rationally, but the process of getting into my heart is still too fast. This is why some netizens in the comments feel that the heroine written by the author "loves men too much", because at the beginning, the author's writing did not let us see that the heroine fell in love with the hero at first sight. However, the writing is good, the characters are outstanding, and the plot is coherent, so it is worth watching.

After searching and searching, I finally found a novel that suits my taste. From being suspicious of each other at the beginning to becoming evenly matched later, A Yin and Zhan Shuo really had a good understanding [cry] [cry] [cry] I simply can't get enough of it. The writing is really good and the story line is complete and very readable! ! ! ! ! ! Everyone go and see it! ! ! ! ! ! ! I hope they can continue to walk hand in hand in the days to come and grow old together.

A marriage that began with calculations. The two gradually lowered their guard during testing and groping, chose to trust each other, and gradually fell in love with each other. The male protagonist was a native, the sword that the emperor had calculated for ten years, and the female protagonist was a special police officer who traveled through time, but she didn't look like a special police officer, but like a noble daughter of a military general's family, brave and resourceful. That unexpected son (Xiao Yu's son Huai Leng) was the best gift given to them by fate, and became their common mission. There is an arrangement somewhere, and two extremely sober and cautious people begin with calculations and end up with trust and affection.

I'll go, show it to me, it's so exciting, it's thrilling [crazy][crazy][crazy] The ultimate maneuvering and extreme pulling. It feels like every character is strategizing, and the opponents are equally matched in strength. The light and dark confrontations are intertwined. Everyone is a player in the game and the master of the chess, but it is very satisfying to watch the male and female protagonists working together step by step. There are a lot of foreshadowings and twists in it, which are unexpected, especially the life experience of the male protagonist's sister and her child. The male and female protagonists are both very strong, and they are equal in strength, serving as each other's weaknesses and armor. They are simply top-notch warriors who rely on each other. Although there are many temptations, suspicions and pulls in the process of running in both directions, it is very enjoyable to watch, especially when the male protagonist bows his head for the female protagonist. His pride can only be humbled by one person, and his edge can only be withdrawn by one person.