Naruto: My Daughter's Name Is Haruno Sakura

It's okay. The writing style is slow and the protagonist is bland, but it's not bad (touch chin). At least it looks comfortable. However, most of the early stage is about the protagonist's study of ninjutsu. You can balance the story and the appearance of ninjutsu. After all, online articles write stories, and we can't learn ninjutsu (touch chin).

I don't know how to put it, it's a bit weird, but it looks good, it's ordinary, and I still have the desire to read it. Don't give up easily, author. I feel like I can write it. That's what Tomato is like. As long as you have more words, someone will definitely read it.

There is no conspiracy, but there is not much time traveler stuff. It feels like there is only plot. I can only say that it looks okay, and the character is a bit cold. The most important thing is that Naruto is about to come out, and Sakura has not moved yet!

You can still watch it. It's better than most. The environment of Tomato emphasizes the importance of large quantities and full tubes. If you want to compete for high-quality products, you still need to practice.

The writing style is light and the life flows slowly.

It's a good Naruto fanfic, but I always feel it's not very pure. Does anyone know why? [Sinister smile]

This kind of narrative writing is not bad, but it is only good for the protagonist and has no impact on the plot. It is more like a reflection on the war and a summary of the plot of Naruto. He has changed nothing and can't do anything.

The summary book is good, but why are there no deer? Just pigs and butterflies? And if this plot develops, can Naruto still be with Hinata? I always feel like I'll be with the protagonist's daughter Sakura

Ice Escape now has all forms, and can develop in the direction of low temperature, like Aoki Pheasant.

The protagonist is really like a bystander in the early stage. Fortunately, the plot of Nine Tails was changed later, otherwise I would have cried to death🥺. This book also feels like it has weakened Nazuo a bit, but the writing is very beautiful! Come on Zachura!

Nice! Super solid writing! Love this style!

It has a light, eloquent feeling, a very different writing style, but it feels very surprising! ! ! Looking forward to future developments! ! !

Author, are you a sufferer of depression? Still have autism? [Shocked] Please, please write less anecdotes [face covering] I'll go straight to Boruto after reading the anecdotes, okay? [Laughing evilly]

I like the style very much, and the content is pretty good, but the problem is that nothing about the plot has been changed. How can it still be called a fanfic? Brother Tsunade, White Fang, Obito, Kakashi, Rin, etc. Are all the same as before... Basically, except for the addition of the protagonist, I don't know what the difference is from the original plot. If it sounds nice, it means respecting the original work, and if it sounds bad, I won't say it.

Now that we have traveled through time, we still need to make some changes.

My eyes lit up. I like this narrative style very much.

Very steady, didn't show off, didn't bother the important supporting actor

The content is plain but close to reality. The simplicity contains deep feelings. It is neither fast nor slow. The same is true in life.

The plot is very peaceful, I hope the author will work harder

Please update it soon. It's plain and simple. It's different from other Naruto stories. It's not so irritable. I watched it slowly and finished it. It's not enough at all.

Very bland, so is the work

Come on, come on, come on

The writing is okay, not bad

The writing is very plain and good.

Add a plug-in to the pig's feet to freeze time and space [shy]

There are a lot of minor flaws, but overall it's okay.

It's quite novel and well-written. I'd like to support it by giving it a high score.

Good. Much better than some invincible streams.

It's beautiful, it's the kind of light feeling I like

The protagonist works hard to improve his strength, and the book saves some regrets. It is a good book. Finished spreading flowers! ! ! ! !