Falling Iron: Pinoconi's Invincible Agent

I have basically finished watching it so far. The signs of growth are obvious, and there is nothing too embarrassing. In the early stage, it followed the route of the original drama "The Big Sleep" and there was no big sense of disobedience. The integration is very good. The current shortcoming is that the progress of form acquisition is a bit slow, the current forms are a bit small, and the combat power is seriously insufficient. It is still a bit too difficult to fight the Doomsday Beast with several basic and derivatives. I feel that none of the Gravity Fantasy that can be fought has appeared. I don't know how to solve the current crisis. Four stars is because I heard that five stars are not included in the rating. Finally, I would like to mention the chivalry that everyone in the Kamen Rider series is talking about. From the plot I have seen so far, there is definitely chivalry, and the growth trajectory is very obvious. From being cowardly to slowly growing up to now having the courage to stand alone and protect others, it can be regarded as a rare growth story. In addition, if the author arranges it well, it feels like there is no need to follow the original plot of Sleeping in the Big Sleep, and the form will be given when it needs to be given, that is, during the reincarnation, don't let the robin do the "Wow Ga Cream" operation that makes people high blood pressure in the original drama. I hope the author can work hard and don't stop updating.

So far, it looks okay. The writing is very good. This is already the fourth book about zzz that I have found. Don't let it be too bad [laughs]

It's really exciting. It took more than 600,000 to collect all 4 colors. I hope it will speed up, but I don't want it to be so fast. It's very good-looking, but the score is really too low. The description of the growth of the protagonist is really good. I feel it is above 8 points.

Shocking and delicious, the plot collapses in the fierce collision of blood and flesh like a constantly burning requiem, the absolute contrast between the unlucky guy and the ace agent, all the feelings are constantly amplified in the unique impact of zzz, making your blood boil. In addition, the most important spirit of being a knight and the constant foreshadowing, the most important thing is that the beauty praises the robin [Cool] Without further ado, I give you five stars. The author will update soon.

A five-point book, perfectly integrated, but I dare not give a high score because I am afraid of being suppressed by Tomato [crying], and several fan books have been suppressed and removed from the shelves. It should be okay to follow up on the review [Thinking]

I have to say that the author's idea is really good The theme of zzz is dreamland which matches the theme of Pinoconi Secondly, the heroine is a robin, just like Ning Meng. In the play, I knocked on Mo Ning's CP. In this book, I can knock on the protagonist and the robin. It's great [laughing][laughing][laughing] Second and last Good Mourning

Overall, it is a good book, with good writing and vivid descriptions of the characters. But it looks like zeztz's unit drama in Pinoconi, with nothing new except reality. When you look at the back, the male protagonist feels like a novice agent? Then Zeztz's capsules appear a little less. Now, Calamity and Plasma King will appear in the Year of the Monkey and the Horse (although this year does seem to be the Year of the Horse). The combat power is not clear, but no matter what, there is still plasma and the Disaster King's Envoy, after all, one punch can create a nightmare. (Excessive strength is stronger than the end, right, King Rag). Overall, a book with potential

This is definitely a top-notch work with a grand layout and sophisticated structure! The plot of the novel is extremely tense, and the world view setting is shocking, creating a complete universe that is both real and believable and full of fantasy. The plot is intertwined with exciting rhythm and tearful moments, with both goosebump-inducing highlight moments and delicate and touching emotional portrayals. The author's recycling of foreshadowing and control over the arc of the characters are truly legendary. Every detail echoes the grand theme. After reading this, I feel excited and have endless aftertaste!

Generally speaking, it is a well-written fanfic, and there are no problems with the character creation. It is a bit too hellish for Sig to come out at the time when the protagonist has just gained gravity. In TV, there is Ning Meng who has always been with the protagonist and accompanied him through so many things. This effect is very big. The family of the protagonist in this book does not know his identity. They have to try every means to hide it from them. The only one who knows and can enlighten the protagonist is Mockingbird. Sometimes he can't come out. He is a chess piece on Sunday. Lao Nuo sometimes comes out and tells riddles to make the protagonist confused and beats the protagonist. According to the progress of this book, it will be almost 2 million words by the time Mewtwo comes out.

It feels like a Zez fanfic wearing a layer of broken iron leather [face covering]

This seems okay, let's wait for the follow-up to unfold. I don't know how the author plans to round out the subsequent settings. It is impossible for The Lady to be the robin's mother who came back from the dead.

A very good novel with vivid characters and interesting plot. The shortcoming is that the author wanted to incorporate the original plot of zzz, which resulted in unclear narrative and not suitable for Bengtie, but overall it is good to read.

It's pretty good, but why does it feel so similar to the original show? Just changed a few people, are you afraid of being stabbed in the back? Two stars off, I really can't stand this AI, like... Yes, and, extremely, I probably counted this kind of modifier, it appears at least seven or eight times in a chapter, and it makes me stressed. Isn't the polish of this AI a bit too much?

The only shortcoming is that the proportion of profile descriptions of the protagonist's growth is slightly higher than the positive ones, and other aspects are at a high level. Now that zzz has been broadcast, I never expected that Zero is actually Lao Mo's father, and the biggest difference between him and Mrs. Mo is that Mrs. Mo is more subjective about destroying the world than women. The love of his son, but Zero is always struggling between saving the world and his love for his son. He loves Mo very much. Various details in the latest episode have shown Zero's debt and love for his son. Talking about the plot, I don't know how the author handles this relationship and how to introduce the order and disaster form of zzz

Push, push, push! It's really good to watch. Whether it's the various little details of the protagonist, Zero's stumbling, or the integration of the plot, it's all very good. Oh my god, it's so fun to watch it.

Why do I feel that AI is used more and more in this book? Now there are too many adjectives and the information density is already very low.

The character creation is very good, the signs of growth are obvious, there are no obvious embarrassing places, and the subject matter is also very creative. It is a rare shocking and delicious tomato. I feel that the 7.3 Rating is not worthy of this book.

You brother Mo Qi [laughs] Later, you will use the quill pen given by your Robin sister in [Feather and Heartbeat Trembling] to imagine a beautiful hell war god in your dream, then hold your brother Mo's hand, write out a thunder formula on paper, use hundreds of thunder capsules to create a thunder driver, and then turn into his Thunder Mewtwo to elbow you [laughs] My head hurts so much... Who am I? [Thinking] Hmm………… Ah [crying] I remembered [crying] [crying] [crying] Author [cry][cry][cry] We are close friends [crying][crying][crying][crying]

I know it's not as good as combat power, but this is too weak. If you are not as good as Jingyuan in the push, you will really be scolded, and the combat power will expand in the later stage of Bengtie. This combat power cannot keep up. Let me change it: basic four colors, one common life, upper level ∽ top common life (gravity has this strength), plasma one, weak, medium commander (corresponding to Jingyuan), etc. Push, one weak, nox - weak, top, disaster, one medium, dawn, one strong, order, one strong, bottom, strong, and finally one iron tomb level (slightly stronger)

It has a bit of an AI flavor, but it doesn't affect the viewing experience very much. The writing is pretty good (probably it was polished with AI), and the pace is a bit slow because I have to wait for the zzz plot to advance, but there are no other big problems. So far, the adaptation of the original work is quite good. However, I personally think the Shura field in Chapter 211 is a bit toxic, but I got over it quickly, so it's not a big problem. Post-script: Why does the author like the Shura Field in the trench so much?

I hope it can get rid of the code and let the protagonist do things by himself. I hope the plot can be faster. This is completely the original work. [Laughing out loud]

Well, overall, this is a well-written zzz fanfic, but the progress is a bit slow. I don't know if there will be a second series, but as long as I keep updating, I will keep following it. I don't give 5 points because I'm afraid of being suppressed by Tomato [crying] I'm full.

Finally I found someone who plays Bentie and is also a Knight Chef [I'm about to cry]

The writing is beautiful, although it is not a complete world view of Bengtie, with a little personal setting added, but it is worth reading.

This book is very good. It feels very similar to Banjin Mo but has some differences. The fighting scenes are okay so far, and the names are not those that don't fit the background. By the way, the author means what he says [laughs crookedly]

I feel like the zzz drama will be finished by the time Order appears. It's 600,000 words and Plasma hasn't appeared yet? [Shock]

It has a bit of an AI flavor, but I can feel that the overall story was written by the author and polished by AI. Maybe the writing is not easy to use AI, but it looks weird in some places. It's okay, I can accept it

Very nice to look at. All in all very nice looking. The quality is very durable. All I can say is. Just like the original work. And the two worldviews are perfectly integrated. All I can say is that he was blown away. It's just that the update is a bit slow. And there's still some water. I hope the author will work hard to update. @ The lightest oxide @ leisure risk @ a few degrees of youth

The book is a good book, and the plot is very well written, but it feels too literary and artistic. I wonder if it will be awkward for others to read. Personally, it was quite awkward for me to read, and I almost skipped through the rest of the book. There is no need to care about the author. The book is a good book and I will continue to read it, but I won't read it so carefully.

Why hasn't the Calamity King appeared yet? [Angry][Angry][Angry] @The Lightest Oxide You are enough to create a second creation, why do you still care about the plot of the original work? Just set the same