(The ratings have just been released and will increase later) There are only three SSS-class mechas in the entire federation. Su Qing, the 22-year-old designer of Channel 3, did not get off the stage alive during the delivery ceremony.
Then he woke up. Not in the hospital bed, but in the core of the mecha designed by myself.
The first thing he said: "Don't touch my console."
After all, the youngest marshal of the Federation. I have hidden my thoughts for seven years without saying a single word. Now he is assigned to drive this "AI abnormally awakened" mecha.
One is trapped inside, unable to reach anyone.
One of them was sitting outside and couldn't speak even once.
There is an armor plate in the middle. One centimeter difference.
Mecha AI·07: I'm in the middle. I am that armor plate. I'm very tired. But I'll keep the light on.
[Mecha | Interstellar | Qiangqiang | Two-way secret love | Sweet abuse | HE ]
Reader comments
It's delicious. So far, the writing is very solid, and the emotional lines are rich and fluent. After all, the boy can actually have a crush for 7 years. Such perseverance, and some of the teacher's psychological descriptions are really well written. The feelings suddenly become fuller. 07 Is also cute, very lively and cute. I generally don't like this kind of theme. Yes, but it can also be seen from some technical terms that the teacher is quite professional, and he recommended the teacher to change the cover and try it. This cover completely made me lose the desire to read it. Fortunately, I clicked in and read the introduction. No matter what, it is delicious for me. Can the teacher add two more chapters, just like feeding the chicken [shy][shy][shy]
(I have finished reading the first volume so far) The plot processing and rhythm are very neat, and every chapter has emotional changes and plot advancement. The defense of Gray Harbor at the end of the first volume is very exciting, not only the sci-fi sense of mecha combat, but also the brief silence when each soldier leaves. (Finally, there is a novel that treats ordinary soldiers as human beings! I am touched. Even the supporting characters, Adjutant Qin and Sister Han, have their own arcs. Touched*n) Technology and emotion are intertwined, and the emotional lines of the two protagonists are not sluggish. From Xiaoyan's perspective, years of secret love ended dramatically with the sudden death of her lover. However, she found familiar traces in the mecha left by her crush. She wanted to get closer but was afraid of losing hope. After a little trial and error, she finally found the joy and relief of being found. If you look at it from Xiao Su's perspective, it is a mecha AI that the genius boy turned into his nemesis (?) Once in trouble. He gradually discovered his nemesis (?)'S feelings for him and his true feelings for his nemesis. However, he chose to hide it because becoming an AI could not bring satisfaction to his lover. In getting along and fighting, my heart is pried bit by bit, and then bit by bit suppressed by myself, until it explodes. The plot line is also slowly unfolding. As the murderer of Su Qing is identified bit by bit, and the larger conspiracy hidden behind the murderer is gradually revealed, the more I watch, the more I look forward to it. There is no need to say much about the writing style, just knock it off (Teacher, tell me, is this the trumpet account you opened?) I just regret it now. If I had known it was so good, I would not have enriched it. I feel like I missed a lot when it was finished (crying😭) (Also: I feel that the book is not popular because the author chose to promote it too early. When it was promoted, the teacher only wrote about twenty chapters. Everyone thought of promoting the book because the setting was interesting, but as a result, they forgot about it.) The teacher is also really responsible. The first few chapters are 4,000 words each. Although the flow is not good, I have finished it. Boss, when you open a new book, I will definitely pursue it [love] [love] [love]
I feel like I have been brainwashed by some mysterious knowledge after reading it. The author's writing is super good, but the emotional line is relatively bland (why don't you write if you say the author can't write?). The plot development is probably very shocking. I recommend reading it. The author remembers to add that the rating is low because it just came out ()
What a high-quality article. The writing style, subject matter, description, narrative method, and the emotional progression of the story line are all very comfortable. After reading the book serialization to more than 400,000 words, I thought that it should not be far from the end. Now that I see it, I feel that the story will go on for a while, and there is still a certain distance from the end. . Although I don't want the author to be too tired, I still want to say, do you dare to finish it all at once? It scares me to death.
It's really beautiful!
The world view and character creation are very successful. The professional terms and numerical values in it are very accurate, which makes people feel very immersed. You can also feel that although Su Qing and Yan Gui are the protagonists, they are not the only people in this world. Every character is complete and unique. 07 Is a little AI with his own feelings, super caring, super cute and always growing~\(≧▽≦)/~, and the senior brother is a very powerful and strong person. A particularly gentle person who feels particularly safe whenever he appears (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎) Even the villains are righteous to some extent.
And Su Qing and Yan Gui are really two very good people, with a special sense of justice, and they will not stop each other from doing what they want to do, but will put themselves in someone else's shoes. His love for him is reflected in the 3200K lighting, level 1 wind speed, and 25.2℃ Seat temperature every time. I really feel that this kind of detail is the most touching! Their love is reflected in the changes in body temperature and core temperature, and the rigid values reflect their beating hearts (*≧ω≦)
Finally, I wish the little couple 99, and your writing will get better and better!
Super awesome! The subject matter is novel, and I feel like I have found a treasure. Some of the professional terms in it are really sci-fi (*＾3＾)/~♡
Oh my God, this is a very novel angle, a complete treasure. The author's narrative angle and entry point are very perfect. I have to keep writing [crying][crying][crying] This is my ideal book
It is a book that makes laymen feel very rigorous. The author must be an engineering major. Jpg The plot line is simple, but the portrayal of the villain is a little confusing. The persecution of the protagonist in the early stage was so thorough, but the reason for the collapse in the end turned out to be very simple. . What can I say about the emotional line? It's very slow. . Although having a two-way crush is really fun, you guys should try to do it more () In short, it's very hardcore. It's fun to follow the title for a while.
[Adoration] is beautiful. In just one hundred chapters, the main plot is pushed quickly but without losing details. The secret love that goes in both directions reveals the understanding and trust of each other bit by bit. The patient companionship and support give confidence in the future.
I want to praise the writing style of the author's wife. The basic skills are as solid as a reinforced concrete structure, and the various descriptions are not out of place at all. Especially the portrayal of the villain made me want to give him the Eighteen Palms of the Dragon through the screen (I was so angry for a day that I haven't seen such a realistic villain in a long time). The interaction between the protagonist and other characters is also very real. This wave must be given!
I have finished reading it. This book can be published directly as a physical book. I just need to change the title. It is very clear. Please be prepared, but the content is very interesting and the subject matter is very bold. It is the only book I have seen in more than three years of reading that the protagonist runs into a mecha. There is a lot of professional knowledge about mechas in it. When reading at night, please be prepared to fall asleep in the arms of mathematics.
It is also at the bottom of the recommendation list. It is different from the articles that are pouring out now. There is no running account and not much nonsense. I love it!
Maybe I prefer this style. Here is my personal understanding: The emotions written in this novel are relatively plain and do not require such intense expression. You can feel the stormy waves of emotions in it silently. In the end, the author did not explicitly write down the details of the young couple getting together (that is, Su Qing officially agreed). Yan Qing did not need to express it. They had become the most important part of each other's lives.
The idea is great and the subject matter is great. However, the writing style and detailed logic need to be improved, such as "Because Su's sensor value is high, otherwise he would not notice it" and too many backdoors. The former is too repetitively emphasized, and the latter is not very logical. Overall, it's pretty good in terms of numerical values and plot themes. I recommend it.
It's really beautiful. It's the first time I've read this type of novel.
The writing is very interesting. I have never seen it before. It is very novel and beautiful.
It's a very novel theme, it's really good
It looks great and the AI writes it very well!
What a novel setting!
It's very beautiful and the writing is very delicate [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
Beautiful, never seen before
Good-looking, very receptive character,
I like this book very much
Not bad, worthy of praise
The teacher is really great!
In fact, I have never read a novel with this theme. It is rare, but the author writes it very well.
So pretty, super pretty! ! ! ! ! Woohoo, it's a pity that I still have to go to school and haven't finished it yet, it's painful! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
It looks good, it looks good, I can't stop the rhythm (≧ｗ≦)
It's really good to watch, the subject matter is very novel, and it's super sweet to see the undercurrent between the protagonists. I can't stop watching it. Come on! ! ! !
Oh my gosh, what a novel subject matter! Love to watch
It's delicious. So far, the writing is very solid, and the emotional lines are rich and fluent. After all, the boy can actually have a crush for 7 years. Such perseverance, and some of the teacher's psychological descriptions are really well written. The feelings suddenly become fuller. 07 Is also cute, very lively and cute. I generally don't like this kind of theme. Yes, but it can also be seen from some technical terms that the teacher is quite professional, and he recommended the teacher to change the cover and try it. This cover completely made me lose the desire to read it. Fortunately, I clicked in and read the introduction. No matter what, it is delicious for me. Can the teacher add two more chapters, just like feeding the chicken [shy][shy][shy]
(I have finished reading the first volume so far) The plot processing and rhythm are very neat, and every chapter has emotional changes and plot advancement. The defense of Gray Harbor at the end of the first volume is very exciting, not only the sci-fi sense of mecha combat, but also the brief silence when each soldier leaves. (Finally, there is a novel that treats ordinary soldiers as human beings! I am touched. Even the supporting characters, Adjutant Qin and Sister Han, have their own arcs. Touched*n) Technology and emotion are intertwined, and the emotional lines of the two protagonists are not sluggish. From Xiaoyan's perspective, years of secret love ended dramatically with the sudden death of her lover. However, she found familiar traces in the mecha left by her crush. She wanted to get closer but was afraid of losing hope. After a little trial and error, she finally found the joy and relief of being found. If you look at it from Xiao Su's perspective, it is a mecha AI that the genius boy turned into his nemesis (?) Once in trouble. He gradually discovered his nemesis (?)'S feelings for him and his true feelings for his nemesis. However, he chose to hide it because becoming an AI could not bring satisfaction to his lover. In getting along and fighting, my heart is pried bit by bit, and then bit by bit suppressed by myself, until it explodes. The plot line is also slowly unfolding. As the murderer of Su Qing is identified bit by bit, and the larger conspiracy hidden behind the murderer is gradually revealed, the more I watch, the more I look forward to it. There is no need to say much about the writing style, just knock it off (Teacher, tell me, is this the trumpet account you opened?) I just regret it now. If I had known it was so good, I would not have enriched it. I feel like I missed a lot when it was finished (crying😭) (Also: I feel that the book is not popular because the author chose to promote it too early. When it was promoted, the teacher only wrote about twenty chapters. Everyone thought of promoting the book because the setting was interesting, but as a result, they forgot about it.) The teacher is also really responsible. The first few chapters are 4,000 words each. Although the flow is not good, I have finished it. Boss, when you open a new book, I will definitely pursue it [love] [love] [love]
I feel like I have been brainwashed by some mysterious knowledge after reading it. The author's writing is super good, but the emotional line is relatively bland (why don't you write if you say the author can't write?). The plot development is probably very shocking. I recommend reading it. The author remembers to add that the rating is low because it just came out ()
What a high-quality article. The writing style, subject matter, description, narrative method, and the emotional progression of the story line are all very comfortable. After reading the book serialization to more than 400,000 words, I thought that it should not be far from the end. Now that I see it, I feel that the story will go on for a while, and there is still a certain distance from the end. . Although I don't want the author to be too tired, I still want to say, do you dare to finish it all at once? It scares me to death.
It's really beautiful! The world view and character creation are very successful. The professional terms and numerical values in it are very accurate, which makes people feel very immersed. You can also feel that although Su Qing and Yan Gui are the protagonists, they are not the only people in this world. Every character is complete and unique. 07 Is a little AI with his own feelings, super caring, super cute and always growing~\(≧▽≦)/~, and the senior brother is a very powerful and strong person. A particularly gentle person who feels particularly safe whenever he appears (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎) Even the villains are righteous to some extent. And Su Qing and Yan Gui are really two very good people, with a special sense of justice, and they will not stop each other from doing what they want to do, but will put themselves in someone else's shoes. His love for him is reflected in the 3200K lighting, level 1 wind speed, and 25.2℃ Seat temperature every time. I really feel that this kind of detail is the most touching! Their love is reflected in the changes in body temperature and core temperature, and the rigid values reflect their beating hearts (*≧ω≦) Finally, I wish the little couple 99, and your writing will get better and better!
Super awesome! The subject matter is novel, and I feel like I have found a treasure. Some of the professional terms in it are really sci-fi (*＾3＾)/~♡
Oh my God, this is a very novel angle, a complete treasure. The author's narrative angle and entry point are very perfect. I have to keep writing [crying][crying][crying] This is my ideal book
It is a book that makes laymen feel very rigorous. The author must be an engineering major. Jpg The plot line is simple, but the portrayal of the villain is a little confusing. The persecution of the protagonist in the early stage was so thorough, but the reason for the collapse in the end turned out to be very simple. . What can I say about the emotional line? It's very slow. . Although having a two-way crush is really fun, you guys should try to do it more () In short, it's very hardcore. It's fun to follow the title for a while.
[Adoration] is beautiful. In just one hundred chapters, the main plot is pushed quickly but without losing details. The secret love that goes in both directions reveals the understanding and trust of each other bit by bit. The patient companionship and support give confidence in the future.
I want to praise the writing style of the author's wife. The basic skills are as solid as a reinforced concrete structure, and the various descriptions are not out of place at all. Especially the portrayal of the villain made me want to give him the Eighteen Palms of the Dragon through the screen (I was so angry for a day that I haven't seen such a realistic villain in a long time). The interaction between the protagonist and other characters is also very real. This wave must be given!
I have finished reading it. This book can be published directly as a physical book. I just need to change the title. It is very clear. Please be prepared, but the content is very interesting and the subject matter is very bold. It is the only book I have seen in more than three years of reading that the protagonist runs into a mecha. There is a lot of professional knowledge about mechas in it. When reading at night, please be prepared to fall asleep in the arms of mathematics.
It is also at the bottom of the recommendation list. It is different from the articles that are pouring out now. There is no running account and not much nonsense. I love it!
Maybe I prefer this style. Here is my personal understanding: The emotions written in this novel are relatively plain and do not require such intense expression. You can feel the stormy waves of emotions in it silently. In the end, the author did not explicitly write down the details of the young couple getting together (that is, Su Qing officially agreed). Yan Qing did not need to express it. They had become the most important part of each other's lives.
The idea is great and the subject matter is great. However, the writing style and detailed logic need to be improved, such as "Because Su's sensor value is high, otherwise he would not notice it" and too many backdoors. The former is too repetitively emphasized, and the latter is not very logical. Overall, it's pretty good in terms of numerical values and plot themes. I recommend it.
It's really beautiful. It's the first time I've read this type of novel.
The writing is very interesting. I have never seen it before. It is very novel and beautiful.
It's a very novel theme, it's really good
It looks great and the AI writes it very well!
What a novel setting!
It's very beautiful and the writing is very delicate [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
Beautiful, never seen before
Good-looking, very receptive character,
I like this book very much
Not bad, worthy of praise
The teacher is really great!
In fact, I have never read a novel with this theme. It is rare, but the author writes it very well.
So pretty, super pretty! ! ! ! ! Woohoo, it's a pity that I still have to go to school and haven't finished it yet, it's painful! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
It looks good, it looks good, I can't stop the rhythm (≧ｗ≦)
It's really good to watch, the subject matter is very novel, and it's super sweet to see the undercurrent between the protagonists. I can't stop watching it. Come on! ! ! !
Oh my gosh, what a novel subject matter! Love to watch