Quick Travel: Giving a Child to the Male Protagonist of Jue Hei

Shuangjie, sweet text, a bit of a world with some minor bugs, but overall it's fine. There are some things in the small world that are vaguely explained. For example, it was written at the beginning that he would help the original heroine take revenge on the female counterpart, but in the end nothing was done or said, and it was not explained whether the male protagonist's brother married the female counterpart. Moreover, it was clear that the male protagonist's mother and brother did not like the female counterpart. Du, why didn't you bring up the matter of separation? Then the whole incident of the ancient emperor's world taking revenge on the female supporting character was quite deliberate. Everyone's reaction was to serve the final purpose of the heroine's revenge on the female supporting character, but when I looked at it, I felt a little bit that logic and rationality were abandoned for this purpose. Hiss, I was a little exhausted when I saw the back part. The female protagonist returned to Bai Yueguang's world and gave me a massage. She also liked the male protagonist but had not gone abroad to find someone for five years. The female protagonist came back and exposed the female secretary's idea of ​​taking advantage of someone's drugging. As a result, the male protagonist just threatened to do it again next time. If he doesn't change her position, let her be a secretary? ? ? This triggered the heroine to leave for the second time and agreed to a three-month observation period. When she came back early, she was deliberately blocked from entering the company. Then the heroine decided to run with the ball. Later, through the chat between the heroine and the system, she learned that the heroine never wanted to be with the hero. She just came back deliberately as an excuse to hit the second female lead so that she could run with the ball and give birth to the child and leave this world. It feels like the whole process, whether it is the male protagonist or the female protagonist, is very separate and serves the purpose of the plot. . .

I just started watching it and it felt pretty good. Then the more I watched it, the more I enjoyed it. Overall it's pretty good. Especially the last episode, wow, but I was a little curious and took the drug. Why can the male protagonist be moved to the female protagonist? Is it because he has always been there? He has always been with the heroine. Including every world the heroine travels through. They are all male protagonists.

Especially beautiful. It would be nice to write a little bit about the interaction between the male protagonist and the baby.

It looks good, but I just love to see Shuang Jie [shy]

Looks good, great job! Recommend it.

I really like this kind of fast-paced movie. It suits me very well. But it's just not enough. Please give me a lot of support, the author.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good, good, good, good

It's nice to watch, the sweet text is [send heart][send heart][send heart] and there is no intrigue, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very fast [full][full][full]

Nice! I like short articles without being too boring! The ending is also very good. I am happy with my lover and children! !

I have been reading novels for many years. This is the second time I have read a novel like this. I like reading this kind of articles. I hope the author will write more and pay attention [laughing]

The overall sensory experience is okay. You can read it as a no-brainer, because there are some details that haven't been worked out well. If you don't mind these details, you can read it without thinking [laughs]