After Getting the King System, I Crush All the Supernatural Horrors

Four stars first. The subject matter is very novel, but I always feel that it has a strange feeling. The protagonist recommends avoiding lightning because it feels aggrieved to say it. Although the author said that he just met everyone and everyone is not familiar with it, so he is wary. However, the protagonist, aside from the identity of the revelator, is an ordinary citizen. However, looking at the behavior of these people, it gives people the impression that they are not concerned about the safety of the protagonist (or maybe the author has not created it). Those who know it are an official organization, and those who do not know it think it is an official organization. As for Bandit's Den, I had to read it reluctantly until Jiang or something brought the protagonist into the dungeon for his sister. I wonder if the protagonist's opinion is important, and he took the person away forcefully. If the author wanted to shape his feelings for his sister, this part was not handled well, at least it gave people a bad impression, as if his sister's life is life, but the protagonist's life is not. Is he 100% sure to ensure the safety of the protagonist? No. He was anxious to get the protagonist involved in order to find his own sister. Let's wait and see again. Personally, I think it's better for the protagonist to be more than lightning-proof. The whole story gave me a novel theme that can describe the aggrieved but not so aggrieved that I can't stand it anymore.

I'm not a person who speaks harshly. I'll just say it simply and clearly. The characters in the novel genre may have flaws, and the plot content is not very satisfying. However, as a new author, it's really amazing to write like this in the first step! It's super cool if you dare to write and post, keep up the good work, the future will be even more amazing! 👍👏(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

As the protagonist, I can't bear it anymore and run away.

The pace of the first twenty chapters is okay, but the proportion of the hero Yang Yuhuan in the back is too long, almost fifty chapters. The story is not streamlined, and the skill effects are not well explored. It can be seen that there are too many characters and it is difficult to grasp the rhythm, which is quite satisfactory. If you want the King System to be fun, you can think about it. If you want to see the main control, you can give it a try. If this theme is the King System + time traveler, there is no King of Glory in this world, and then integrate the weird invasion, and combine the heroic story and skill characteristics to awaken the special attack, and then it will be better to tell it together with the weird story. How to grasp this degree, the writing requirements are also high, I think it will be very good-looking. (Longing) (Visit here)

It's really good to read. The author has some problems in the early writing because he is a newcomer, but he is slowly improving later on. The interaction between the protagonist and other characters is really interesting and super good to watch [Love] [Blow Kiss]

It looks good. The main character control feels okay. It's not as exaggerated as other reviews said. I don't know how Li Hua's part is about the weird battle. I hope it won't be too harsh. The animal sculptures are very cute, including cats, dogs, and foxes. This is the most two-way episode where character creation and animal sculptures go hand in hand. Situations that feel a little stressful become easier. The progress of the story is a bit slow, but the writing style is much better logically than other books, and it's comfortable to read.

Just stick with it, okay? I believe you will be rewarded through all the hardships. It's so beautiful and you give up. Where can I find another book like this? And I don't like to find a substitute, it's really good-looking, I will hit a wall for you, please have mercy on me, don't abandon it 😢 It's really good-looking, very good-looking, it's addictive! I can't accept the withdrawal reaction, and I don't want to explain it. I really like it. I like you, I like you, I like you. Your baby makes me obsessed and makes me crazy. Please don't abandon us. Maybe some people are raising books. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, don't abandon our readers who are still reading, I will harass you, I am very bad, I will harass you, harass you to the point that you dare not abandon me, you don't have to update, you can adjust, but you can't abandon me, do you have the heart to abandon me? You cruel person! You are so cruel, how can we survive? Do you have no motivation? Is it because no one is sad? Is it too much pressure? I can comfort you, I can write you a short composition or a very long composition! I don't like to leave things to chance. If you are really tired, just rest for a while. I can wait for you and keep waiting for you. I am very patient. I will never abandon books. Please don't give up on us, okay? OK? OK? OK? I will insist on harassing you 😢 @ It's so beautiful. Why is the baby coming back? Have you forgotten that you still have a book? 😢 @ I need you 😢😢😢😢

I'm the main character, I don't know why, but it's a bit uncomfortable to watch, but the writing is good.

It's also very good-looking! I will give the author a five-star Thunder!!!♥♥♥ Our wild brother is also very handsome, and he has become the group's favorite! Come over and watch me! The shock is coming, and the wild brother arrives, everyone gets out of the way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The little weirdness is straightforward and easy to handle. Again, no hesitation, no hesitation, you don't need 998 or 88 to watch the full text today, you can take it home with just a little care. Such a beautiful novel is free to watch💋💋💋💋👅👅👅🤪🤪🤪🤪

I can't say it's not good to watch. It's just that some parts are weird and uncomfortable to read. It doesn't have the same feeling of excitement as the title of the book. The weird scenes of traveling through ancient times at the back are a bit bland and have no attractive highlights. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist's emotions towards the abducted girls are a bit bland. The big emotional ups and downs are due to being scared by the weird baby. Maybe it's because I've read about the fake abduction and time travel to ancient times and I'm a little aggrieved.