Traveling Through Another World: I Win Hearts with My Prepared Dishes

I always like to read business novels, especially stories with a Western fantasy background. I didn't expect that the author could combine these two favorite elements of mine so naturally. The world in the story is very solidly constructed. The business line is a bit difficult in the early stage, but the later development is not abrupt. What's even more surprising is that elements of ancient Greek text are added at the end, which immediately fills the atmosphere and makes people feel particularly immersed, as if they are really working hard in that world with the protagonist. The author's writing style is really good. He combines elements from different cultural backgrounds without violating the harmony. It's very comfortable to read. I look forward to the follow-up development.

The plot is okay, I prefer business stories, but this one seems a bit tired, there are a lot of repetitions

When I read Chapter 22, I found that the author gave too little positive feedback to readers (sometimes it is accompanied by negative feedback after giving it) The author's idea is good. In a situation where there is very little clean food or healthy and natural food, the protagonist's golden finger is of great use. But! The problem with this is that it is difficult for the protagonist to improve the pre-made dishes in this situation. Every improvement has a negative effect and only increases the portion of the dishes. This makes the protagonist very useless (or it is impossible to discover the protagonist's shining points). And the people who read this kind of article all like the sense of accomplishment in cooking. For example, using food from another world combined with the high oil, sugar, and carbohydrates of pre-made dishes to create super delicious food from another world (I'm really looking forward to it). This one didn't appear. The protagonist in the author's novel has no initiative to solve the problem, or there is no way to solve it in the early stage. It is uncomfortable to rely on new people (powerful creatures) to solve it every time. For example, a werewolf mercenary (Rake) or a mage (Ron) can solve it alone. These two people can easily frighten the enemy. , But the protagonist can't do it, and has to only return the money to the person who made the trouble (it can be said to be reality, but as the protagonist of the novel is a bit too weak, do you really not intend to solve it? For example, blaming others, poisoning, and the trouble will be wasted. Mutual help between groups is okay, but the protagonist never takes the initiative to solve it) There are too few positive customer feedbacks written by the author. You, the author, will write a lot about the fatigue, anxiety, and fear of the protagonist, but you rarely write about the happiness of customers eating delicious food, and the interesting things about the other world that you get from listening to customers chatting. Even the expressions are good, but you rarely write about them, and the proportion is pitiful. But it's still very interesting and very attractive to me. Good luck to the author.

I really like the overall atmosphere of this article. It is a history of the struggle of little people in the Western fantasy setting. It is indeed a bit slow at the beginning. The cautious feeling of the protagonist as an orphan is a bit thin, but it gradually gets better later. Especially after the shop is opened, the adventurers coming and going, and the story lines brought by guests of various races are very exciting. The pace in the later period is obviously much smoother. It is really satisfying to watch the protagonist's small business grow bigger and bigger.

I really like the development of the plot after the protagonist meets the adventurer team. From being alone and cautious to slowly having fixed partners and supporters, this change is written with great warmth. The team members each have their own personalities. They are not pure tools. The interaction with the protagonist is also very natural and humane, but not deliberately sensational. It is only through the recipes of this group of well-connected protagonists that they can truly gain a foothold, which seems very reasonable.

I really like this setting of running a Western fantasy. The protagonist did not cheat when he first came out, but honestly started by setting up a stall and selling food. It looked very down-to-earth. The background of the Western fantasy is not a simple one. The fusion of magic elements of various races is quite natural. Unlike some stories that change the skin and are still pure ancient society. While watching the protagonist think about new dishes to attract customers, while exploring this world full of adventurers, the two elements are combined just right.

I particularly like this steady and steady growth path. The protagonist has a really miserable start. She is an orphan with no connections and no resources. She can only rely on craftsmanship to open up the situation little by little. From the beginning, she only dared to set up a stall in front of her own house, and later she opened her own shop and had to recruit help. The whole process was particularly fulfilling. The author didn't make the protagonist omnipotent and panic when encountering difficulties, but this sense of reality makes people want to follow him even more.

When I first started watching it, I felt that the progress was really slow. The protagonist is an orphan. Although there is a system, everything has to be explored by oneself. The state of careful survival is very realistic. In a strange and unreal world with no money and no background, every step is very difficult. I was sweating for him while watching it. But after getting through the foreshadowing, the rhythm became smoother, especially when you slowly save money to start a business, the feeling of gaining a firm foothold little by little is very refreshing.

The article is well written, but can the text paragraphs be divided into smaller paragraphs, ending with two or three sentences, so that it can be read more easily? I am a super novel reader. I have some suggestions. I hope the author's new book will achieve good results, [like].

Great, author please work hard

The writing is very good and full of details.

The characters are perfectly created It looks really good

This is my first time reading this subject and the writing is very good. Keep it up

It's pretty good, but I'm really short of books.

Very beautiful, well written, and strong narrative ability

The theme is novel and beautiful

Warm Days, although there are some logical loopholes, the text is particularly optimistic and positive.

The writing is good and very warm! It's just that sometimes the author himself forgets the plot he has written before. Overall, it's worth watching.