Romantic Comedy in the Ravenclaw Common Room

Okay, kids, I am Shennong, this is good food The emotional description and detailed description are almost impeccable, and the plot guidance of the original characters is also good. By the way, Alleria was dealt with this year, and next year it will be Celestine. Then the third year will be squeezed out by two girls, and fourth year Luna will join the battlefield. If this continues, the protagonist will really die in bed ( Can't sleep all night, update quickly I wanted to say that the recent development of the plot has been a bit delayed, but today I have a big one. What else can I say? You are right. Also, we are not considering deleting Luna for the time being.

Conclusion first: a HP novel worth reading Advantages: The author's writing skills are still good, and there are no poisonous points so far (it may also be because my magic resistance is high) The description of emotions is very delicate, and slowly warms up in daily life. The feelings for each heroine are not abrupt, but give people a natural feeling. The main plot is not just the traditional fight against Voldemort. The image of the original heroine is well created (so far) The description of daily life is very warm. Although the main plot is not a refreshing article and cannot bring a sense of refreshment, it does not give people a feeling of frustration, but can arouse more empathy. It is different from most current HP fans. It has a unique and unique style. It gave me a sense of freshness when I first saw it. Disadvantages: There are still too few updates at present, and this kind of daily article still needs to be long to be read at once. Therefore, there will be many people raising books, and the data of many people raising books will not be very good and will disappear easily. Summary: The author will update soon! ! ! Not enough! ! !

The author is very different from many so-called "literary youth" writers in Tomato. The words are beautiful but not artificial, the rhythm is slow but not procrastinating, and he combines the wildness of the original setting with the distinctive personality of his own original characters. I just feel that it is not enough. Please update more quickly [Adoration][Adoration] After reading the back part, I can only say that the previous review was high. It can be seen that the author is good at writing daily romance articles rather than highly plot-oriented articles. After entering the main line, the author has great logical problems. There is no battle of wits and even the cause and effect cannot be explained clearly. Every crisis is inexplicably solved with the so-called "power of love" (Thinking about the "power of love" of love between the protagonists, 11-year-old elementary school students who have known each other for less than a year, I really can't stand it.) In the original work, the power of love only appears at the end, and it has not been used again and again. Every time it is used, it gives people the feeling of plot killing the villain. Be cautious with low anti-toxicity. However, the daily interactions are indeed well written. If you can accept the author's logic, it's not impossible to read it.

Overall it looks great. The writing style is literary and artistic. Although the plot of the original work is not much, it is slowly unfolding. The emotion is light, but you can still notice the existence. There are many wonderful ideas in the article, or various adjectives, and it feels like a fairy tale [laughs] [note]

Needless to say, the writing style is excellent and the writing power is excellent. After reading books for so many years, I found a treasure on Tomato. The writing style is not vulgar, but it does not appear noble either. It has a slight sense of warmth, of course from the current perspective. I really hope that the author will not write the so-called "Shura Field" (that kind of straightforward, emotional Shura Field) plot in the future. It's not bad, but it just feels like a waste of your writing. I feel that everyone in this article should have the feeling of still water running deep, implicit but not plain, turbulent but not expressive. Of course it is just my own personal wish and cannot represent anyone else. I sincerely hope that the author can continue writing it.

After reading this book, I can tell that the author must have written it carefully. The writing style is relatively refreshing and healing. The update speed is similar to that of other authors. The quality is good. The number of words in each chapter is generally more than 5,000 words. There is also a knife mixed in (I think it is), but I feel that the author should be able to give a good ending. All in all, this book is very good and one of the best in my bookshelf. I hope the author will continue writing and not stop updating.

Fairy is so beautiful. The author's vivid and beautiful writing style makes people feel the warmth and love as if they were there. The emotional scenes are in line with everyone's identity. Luna is fairy-like and clingy. One of the two girls is passionate and reserved, and the other is lazy and deep. Although there are many female protagonists, it is one of the few that truly matches the HP love theme.

The writing is delicate and the description of expressions fits the characters. The first time I read it, I was leaning on the back of the bed before going to bed, with the warm yellow desk lamp next to me. After reading it, I just felt that the time was just right, warm and soothing. The stories written by the author are like the breeze in early summer, neither arrogant nor impetuous, blowing slowly over my face, not in a hurry, but just taking away the slight heat. Rated as: Writing: 90 points Story: 85 points Immersion: 80 points Summary: I found another gold in the history of tomatoes.

This is a novel that is really burdened by chapters. It is really delicate and beautiful. For readers, a chapter of seven to eight thousand words is indeed very satisfying, but if I hadn't taken a look at the number of words and the comment area, I wouldn't have started reading this chapter at this time, which would indeed affect my performance. It will take a long time to finish writing it

It's quite interesting. Except for Luna, the characters of the other two heroines are great, but maybe it's because of their age. The literary flavor is a bit heavy, and there is a lot of jumping plots, such as the Sorcerer's Stone and the Chamber of Secrets. It can be felt that it is deliberately intended to speed up the development. The author is busy with studies, and many of them are saved and published on time without any changes based on readers' suggestions. I also hope that the author can write other things after the college entrance examination. By the way, he can enrich the writing style and try to connect the events better. Finally, I also hope that the author will be named on the gold list for the college entrance examination next year.

Currently updated to chapter 32, three female protagonists. The style is more everyday and warm, making it very comfortable to read. The feelings gradually warm up in daily life and will not feel abrupt. Anyway, it can be seen that the author really writes with great care. This is one of my favorite HP fanfics that I have read. I don't know if the protagonist's magic story will be added in the follow-up. [Like] [Like] [Like] Come on, author, don't stop updating. Hey, I've chased several HPs that have been interrupted. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Hold on! Hey! ! ! Come on!

The overall story is very good. Among the many fanfics I have read, this one is very good. It does not follow the traditional plot. It has its own original characters in its own conception. The addition of different characters also makes the article not so boring. It does not follow the old routine of entering school with Harry Potter, but adds details based on the original version. But looking at it now, I feel like it's a tragedy. I don't like tragedies very much because life is hard enough. I don't want it to be hard for me. I hope it can have a perfect ending.

(◦˙▽˙◦), It's very beautiful, come and see, come and see, come and see. The writing is delicate and comfortable to read, and the characters and images are distinctive and prominent. It is more daily-oriented. Although the number of words is not many, the quality is acceptable and the output is stable. In terms of writing style, it is naturally completely different from most other HP fans. Just the theme of daily life and sweet love is very attractive. With the slow pace, you can feel the charm of this daily love even more ヾ(^▽^*))) I hope that the more I write in the future, the better („• ֊ •„)੭

Sweet love novel Although they are the same person, the author's writing style is more like Niku The protagonist looks very much like a standard male protagonist in Japanese comics, who is relatively passive in relationships. By Chapter 128, he agreed to Se's confession, but couldn't let go of Ao. I guess Lu's sister took the initiative to push back, and there may be a stomachache plot. Suitable for watching the three girls together in one sitting

I haven't written many reviews, but I can only say that this book is very good. The original characters are very comfortable to read, and the characters are also very likeable... The author will update it quickly! [Punch out][Punch out][Punch out]

Let's put it this way, this is a magical work. It is unique and stands out from the crowd in today's Internet environment where AI is rampant and formulas are confusing. It feels very comfortable and quiet to read, just like reading an extra chapter written by Rowling. It can even be said to be the predecessor of the HP series. Biography is the same. The writing style is really similar to HP. The meticulous portrayal of characters and psychology, the delicate and dense technique. For people who have had a hard day at work or school, it will feel like they are immersed in a fairy tale and magic dream. I won't say anything else. The author is amazing.

The sudden ending caught people off guard, just like "my" brother. Just after going to school, two strangers intervened in the lives of "me" and my brother, and I could only try to accept it. Because I know that this is an unchangeable result, just like "I" cannot ask my brother to stay away from them. Fortunately, my brother is good to me. The development of the story has gradually healed the embarrassing unpleasantness. My brother has not forgotten "me". "I" and "I" have always been the people he loves.

I finished reading it on 7.29-7.31. I am glad that the author finished it on 22nd. It was really a perfect encounter. Reading a wonderful story is painful and joyful, especially if the story is not a long one. Watching the ending approaching step by step is like a wall of sighs as life rushes towards its end, making people feel powerless. The second reading is always less soulful than the first reading, and there is no longer the amazing feeling of foreshadowing and recycling. The ending may be a bit hasty, but it is also a technique. After all, it is the blank space that gives people unlimited reverie. I'm looking forward to another masterpiece after graduation to satisfy the foodie like me.

At first, I thought that although the writing was very fairy tale-like, it was very bland and I couldn't stand it for a while. But then I read more and the first incident was well written and made me like the characters in it, so it's five stars.

It's so delicious. The light daily life, twists and turns and a kind of sadness are mixed together, which makes people always want to slow down and take a closer look. The original heroine is also very vivid and unique, with her own story and sadness. This style is rarely seen in tomatoes.

It's very interesting. It's different from other Harry Potter fan fictions in terms of leveling up monsters. The characters are full-bodied and the plot is very delicate. It has the same warm feeling as when you first watched the Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone movie [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] Also, the author is really worried about me, when can I see Luna A go up? [Laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

(Borrowing other people's comments to express my true feelings) Let's put it this way, it is still a magical work. It is unique and stands out in today's Internet environment where AI is rampant and formulas are confusing. It feels very comfortable and quiet when reading, just like reading an extra chapter written by Rowling. It can even be read. It is said to be a prequel to the HP series. The writing style is really similar to that of HP. The meticulous portrayal of characters and psychology, the delicate and dense technique, for people who have had a tiring day at work or school, it will be like immersing themselves in a fairy tale and magic dream. Without saying anything else, the author is amazing.

The writing style is extremely delicate and the reading is very refreshing. All in all, this is definitely a very excellent novel in terms of both artistic level and content. The author's writing style always has a plain, hazy, fairy-tale-like, everyday atmosphere. In short, it is very comfortable for readers. A person like me who often reads slowly can actually read it word by word. It is really a good book. Come on, author, give me more reviews yourself. There is no reason why this book's score will be poor [Like]

It is a unique path among Harry Potter fans. The plot is relatively light-hearted. After all, it is about love. The character creation is preferred, and the plot has no obvious flaws. The food produced every day is enough for one meal, and the author is also a treasure, isn't he? I hope he can be as smart and wise as the avatar in the future? At least for now.

The author has literary skills, the writing style is very nice, and it is very comfortable to read. The portrayal is also very delicate, and it can be seen that the author has carefully considered the characters' personalities and relationships, and carefully studied HP's world view.

Shennong's evaluation: The emotions are delicate and soft, and it is rich in the flavor of prose, just like the original feeling of reading "The Cultural Journey", where the words flow out bit by bit. The rhythm of the plot is also well controlled, neither overwhelming nor overly enhanced. The author's personal design is also very interesting, and it is cleverly integrated into HP. The summary is that except for the slow update, which is not very interesting at the moment, it can basically be rated as excellent and worth watching.

A good book makes daily life sweet, and eating dog food gives you strength. However, there are still some problems with the structure of the article. First of all, the core plot of the heroine is too fast and advances quickly. How to put it, it's like the situation where the full-favor CG is triggered to confirm the relationship as soon as you pass the multiple-choice question and enter the character's exclusive line. It's too fast to see the true love through thick and thin. Secondly, avoidance of strengths and weaknesses, daily space is squeezed, and emotional accumulation is insufficient. As for the core plot, the protagonist needs to explode, his spirit needs to be tested and he will be virtuous, and he needs to exert the power of bond and love. However, the miracle of bonding is not without reason. If the daily savings are not enough, then the voice will become a cliché and the sincerity will become cheap. Also, the readers are tired. It won't be boring if you just give out candy in daily life, but the main plot is different. If the main plot is full of emergencies, high-level battles are exclusive plots where no one can take action. They are all very different, with the enemy suddenly getting sick, our emotional buff, and finally the mechanical deity, which is really boring. All in all, these can all be attributed to one problem - the book is too short, causing the plot to advance too quickly. If the word count of the book were doubled, then these would not be a problem. If it were quadrupled, the sugar high alone would be enough to make the reader intoxicated. All in all, worth a look.

A very unexpected new book. I think this is a top-notch 9.0 Novel. I originally read this as a cool text template, but it is actually composed of rich emotional descriptions and daily life, which deeply attracted me. I started to follow up after seeing the end of 80, and just wrote the double-line description of Harry Potter, which kicked off the main story. If the follow-up can maintain the current rhythm of the writing style, 9.0 Will be the starting point. It's a pity. To be honest, I was really optimistic about this new fan book at the beginning. Both the plot control and the character style are the same as the previous work. However, it may be due to the author's academic pressure or other reasons. The book ended in a hurry. I originally thought that the author could update it after the college entrance examination and read it to fill the gaps. It's a pity but I don't regret giving it five stars. But if the author of this book opens a new book in the future, I probably won't read it. It is a waste of this book and consumes the reader's mood.

Author, your writing is very good, it made me want to read more, but when I found out that it was a harem novel, I suddenly felt lost, but the writing was very relaxed and daily, come on author₍ ᐢᴗ ˔ ᴗᐢ₎

It's still in the early stages, so I can only say that it's high-quality food, the emotional descriptions are very delicate, and it's quite touching to write about daily life. Because it's just the beginning, I can't see much, so you can look forward to it [Like] [Like]