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The plot is reasonable and the characters are not OOC. It's fun to watch and I'd like to watch more. [Laughs][laughs][laughs] Tomato doesn't seem to have Douluo's copyright, so I'll try to get points first to prevent it from disappearing.

The writing is super nice, not OOC at all. Finally someone remembers that we were the heads of the family before Sunday [face covering]

Haokan is a good Bengtie + Dou San text Squeeze this score

Nice! Two simple words are all my language. The author has good logic and writing style, the plot is not procrastinating, and the characters do not have large-scale OOC. It is exactly what I know how to do! I am very optimistic about the author's future development, support, support, support! ! ! Ahem, cough, cough, I want to see the finale.

Well written, nothing OOC at all. Finally, someone has written about the four little train crew's journey to another world. It's so rare…

The characters are well controlled, and the plot and writing are also great. It has a more relaxed and casual atmosphere that I like. The author should continue to work hard!

The content is very good, there is no OC, and it is very consistent with the character of the original work. But if possible, the author can add a cover, just add a four-person cover, and the number of readers will increase a lot.

It's nice to see, there's a foursome on the train

Delicious, not OOC at all No matter how many points it is, this book must last a long time.

Author, be careful, Tomato does not have the copyright of Douluo

It's really beautiful, and it's even old. [Laughing]

I think this is the best book about four little animals! Woohoo, but why is it removed from the shelves now? Yeah, that's right, probably just to score points, hehe.

It's pretty good. I've always wanted to read a novel about Beng Tie's Time Travel Douluo II. I found one about Time Travel Douluo II before, but it stopped updating. I finally found another one. I must give it five stars.

It's really beautiful! A rare treasure in recent years. Great article.

Very beautiful, highly recommended! The plot is very detailed, but not complicated. The plot flows smoothly. It can be seen that the author spent a lot of effort to write it so smoothly. Moreover, it is a pure group portrait with a strong taste that I have never tasted in Tomato. If I have to say that there is a slight flaw, the abstraction of Xingbao is slightly small and a little OOC, but it does not affect the perception at all. It is a masterpiece worth pursuing. ˶･֊･˶

Very nice, good luck to the author

It's so beautiful, the four little ones are all super cute\(//∇//)\

Very good, the whole article is super comfortable

I really like watching it. It's not OC at all and fits everyone's personality very well. Let me give you some points too.

Come on, come on, come on

Very good, but too short

Personally, I think it's pretty good.

Come back to life soon, the author misses you

Score a score to avoid being sanctioned by Three Spoons

It looks great, but why can't I post a review?

Dear author, Tomato seems to prohibit writing Douluo Dalu second-generation fan fiction. If it exceeds 100,000 words, all kinds of criticism will be made, and the work will be removed from the shelves. Is there any other place where I can read this?

It's good-looking, but it's a bit sparse. I really want to follow the network cable and peek at my wife's manuscripts.

Very well written! [Blow a kiss] Let me help the author a little bit [Love] Pressed [OK][OK]

The characters are super restored and the plot is also very interesting (๑> <๑) Forgot to forget, low points, but really beautiful!

I really like the interaction between the four little ones. The memes are so dense that I can't even see them. It's so funny [adoration][adoration]