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It's also very wow. There are too few articles about Professor Maomao. It's a masterpiece! [Laughing out loud]

Full of faintness. . I have almost never seen a cat as the heroine, so don't give up.

The setting is novel, but the description of some details is too stiff. Mag's ears turned red without saying a word and the corners of his mouth curled up. East's mouth turned up without saying a word. The Lord just tolerated it without saying a word. There are relatively few descriptions of the emotional exchanges between the two heroines. I can understand why Professor Cat fell in love with East, but there are too few descriptions of how Bat falls in love with cats in the book. Most of them are about East and Lord getting along. My favorite cat is actually a human, so it is natural for me to fall in love with a human. I feel a little strange. The above are some of my own thoughts. I hope the author can pay attention to these issues [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] There are too few Professor Cat in Tomato. Come on, author, 4 stars for encouragement.

I secretly chased the big JJ account. It was completely different from what it was 6 years ago! ! ! The writing is very good and I like it very much. The youthful and cute descriptions create two vivid characters. I searched the whole 🍅 for the author who wrote CP with Dean Maomao, but I only found DaDa. In my mind, this is how Minerva gets along with her lover. She feels very satisfied with her age. I didn't feel OOC at all, and the protagonist's insertion was very smooth, as if he was a naturally growing character in the main story line, without being particularly abrupt or obvious. Come on! It can be summed up in three words: I love to eat! Personally, I read all the books relatively quickly, but some of the large text really touched me. I would slow down from time to time and think about the different thoughts behind the protagonist's actions. Although there is no specific description in the text, the pages give the reader a certain amount of room for imagination. I really like this type of style works, and I hope there will be more updates! ! Of course, it is important to maintain your own style. While sticking to yourself, you can also learn from some readers' opinions. For example, some readers will say, "Hey, some words describing actions are used too many times, and some expressions are too repetitive." I think this idea is positive, and it can be slightly changed without affecting the original character of the character. Some small actions really poked me, suppressing laughter or other things, making the character of Professor McGonagall a little more humorous and gentle in addition to the original seriousness. Different methods can be used to describe different situations. For example, "the corners of the mouth curved up" can be changed to "the lips curled up, and the arc at the corners of the mouth was slightly raised, and then disappeared immediately." Or "hiding behind the cup and shaking uncontrollably" could be changed to "hiding behind the teacup, and the tea in the cup also trembled uncontrollably." These are all personal suggestions! ! I'm just a bad reader and can't write. I really like the words written by the author! ! ! ! I love you so much! Inner OS: I want a big reply...

It's quite possible, the events that Potter experienced were not fully written, but were just used to intersperse the plot, which is great! After all, love should be sweet, not always bitter and resentful. Good reviews, I feel it can get a score of 9.0, But I don't know why the score is only 6.9.

I finally found a movie about Professor Maomao. The one I saw elsewhere was almost ruined [crying]

It's very beautiful. I don't know why no one has watched it. Some people say it's AI. . . I use the words that are the most straightforward, pure, simple, magnanimous, sincere, real, hard-core, clean, neat, straightforward, least roundabout, least roundabout, least roundabout. Da, the least sloppy, the least hiding, the least trickster, the least scheming, the least roundabout, the least conceited, the least cunning, the least cunning, no pretense, no politeness , without a trace of concealment, use the most down-to-earth, most understandable, most accessible, most straightforward, without exaggerating, without minimizing the facts, without distorting the original intention, without deliberately beautifying, without deliberately concealing, I will be good to you. Tell the truth, tell the truth, talk about the truth, talk about the truth, don't pretend, don't act, don't act, don't show off, tell you in a sincere, frank, and straightforward way. It's completely magical🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Uh-huh, it's over before I finish chasing it... It's sad. I will continue to write other works by the author. It's especially worth reading. It's a big deal. I'll rely on it during the summer vacation. I express my love to the author: it's reasonable, reasonable, legal and you [love] [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][ blowing kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][bird The God of Food] [The God of Birds Eater] [The God of Birds Eater] [The God of Birds Eater] [The God of Birds Eater] [The grass has been planted] [The grass has been planted] [The grass has been planted] [The grass has been planted] [The grass has been planted] [The grass has been planted] [The grass has been planted]

Long live Professor Cat

The writing is very unique, and you can feel the peaceful warmth from the words. It is more touching than the countless passionate vows. I really like it. It is like tasting a special Hao Lai by chance, which left a deep impression on me.

It's good to read. It's a good book about two girls in Harry Potter.

It's nice to see the emotions and the emotions are delicate, but after the relationship was confirmed, the career line became more and the emotional feeling became much less. Can you add one plus in daily life [Please update] [Please update] [Please update] (Everyone has different opinions, don't let my comments affect your judgment) There are so many daily routines [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Overall it's pretty good, but there are too many repetitive descriptions that affect the look and feel, and some settings are sometimes inconsistent, making it feel a bit heavy on the AI ​​flavor.

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author, don't abandon the article [shy]

Long live Professor Maomao [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This is my first time coming into contact with this kind of Western magic novel. Although I don't know the specific characters in the magic genre, the round bat and the cat in the novel have won my heart. Their daily relationship is very sweet. The cat loves the bat very much, and the big bat really loves my wife [Chigua]

It's really good to read. I will read this book countless times, just like Harry Potter. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

The content is not bad, but it always says that there is too much tolerance, and it could be reduced a bit.

Oh ho! Looks great, long live Professor Cat! When will Little Bat discover the identity of Professor Cat and Cat? [Understood]

It looks good. I want to see cats and bats pouting.

I've never read a book about Professor McGonagall, it's very exciting.

Finished reading it in one go

Professor Maomao, the author must never give up.

I wasn't very optimistic about it at first, but it turned out to be a super good book that had been buried under the radar! It's great to read! Although I don't know why there are so few reviews [I'm full]

Very talented, I love watching this kind of stuff

There is actually one written about Professor McGonagall! Or two heroines! It's just that the language is a bit repetitive, but overall it's very good👍. The author listens to the readers very well and there's no OOC.

It's so delicious, Professor Beagle, who is hot on the outside and cold on the inside, and Professor Cat, who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, are great.

The author's writing is superb, be sure to finish it, [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Awesome! The protagonist is very charming

A very nice book! ! Finished spreading flowers! !

The gentle flow of water brings warmth to daily life