☾Two male protagonists have undecided cp + guardianship + emotion + different plots + system + occ warning ☽
Nanzhi is sitting in a mansion, worth hundreds of millions, surrounded by beauties but disdainful of them. Finally, when he was going to Shiheyuan, something knocked him off the cliff.
Hei Xiazi: "No one has ever risked their lives for Hei Ye, but today they have"
Zhang Qilin: "It turns out there can be someone in front of me."
Xie Yuchen: "Now I also have someone who can deliver my life."
Nanzhi: "Are these people sick? Get out of the way and don't stop me from dying."
Reader comments
Nice! The emotional descriptions are quite good, but I always felt that the progress was quite fast. Nanzhi's death wish is to return to his world, right? (This is what was said in the previous chapter.) Why do I think the more I look back, the more I think he really wants to die? Not in that sense, but the kind of death that really wants to die.
When I first came in, I thought he might have some element of that kind of pseudo-beautiful, strong, and miserable character. I don't feel it now, but as I read later, I really felt that his emotional description was very profound. Nanzhi witnessed the person closest to him die in a car accident for the sake of the real strong property, which is a scar in his heart.
Also, does your word "sudden changes" appear too often? Every time something happens to him, even though I know it's to advance the plot, I still feel that our Xiao Nanzhi's bad luck is almost as bad as that of Wu Xie.
Oh, I personally think this book is wonderfully written (-^^-) First of all, I think the protagonist's experience and setting are very novel. He can only go home after death, but he is given a halo by the system and will not die. He cannot commit suicide. After meeting other people, his inner emotions have changed from thinking of "death" when seeing others in danger to wanting to use his own halo to protect others. Why is the author so good every time he writes about psychological thoughts? After reading a few more books, I feel that my reading comprehension has improved [Love]
That one is pretty good-looking. I want to die but can't, and I'm still looking at it to death. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Nice! The emotional descriptions are quite good, but I always felt that the progress was quite fast. Nanzhi's death wish is to return to his world, right? (This is what was said in the previous chapter.) Why do I think the more I look back, the more I think he really wants to die? Not in that sense, but the kind of death that really wants to die. When I first came in, I thought he might have some element of that kind of pseudo-beautiful, strong, and miserable character. I don't feel it now, but as I read later, I really felt that his emotional description was very profound. Nanzhi witnessed the person closest to him die in a car accident for the sake of the real strong property, which is a scar in his heart. Also, does your word "sudden changes" appear too often? Every time something happens to him, even though I know it's to advance the plot, I still feel that our Xiao Nanzhi's bad luck is almost as bad as that of Wu Xie.
Oh, I personally think this book is wonderfully written (-^^-) First of all, I think the protagonist's experience and setting are very novel. He can only go home after death, but he is given a halo by the system and will not die. He cannot commit suicide. After meeting other people, his inner emotions have changed from thinking of "death" when seeing others in danger to wanting to use his own halo to protect others. Why is the author so good every time he writes about psychological thoughts? After reading a few more books, I feel that my reading comprehension has improved [Love]
That one is pretty good-looking. I want to die but can't, and I'm still looking at it to death. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Nice looking, different angles