The Noble Daughter and Me Returning from the Eastern Front

Very good fantasy article. Overall, there are no highlights and the narrative is too long. But this is Tomato, and these are not problems. It's okay to just jump and take a look. In addition, the author's understanding of Germany and the war is limited to the level of high school history books, so if you see some outrageous remarks, please make up your own mind. The key point: this is a romance.

It looks good, not like the style of online articles, but more like the style of novels in the textbooks and test papers when I was in school. It is very comfortable to read, and the content is full, and the word count is not bad. It is very enjoyable to read more than 40 pictures in one go [blowing kiss]. It is about the settings of combat power and the origin of vampires, which need to be carefully thought out [laughing]

Let me go, some boss has opened a small account to fry fish. This is called delicacy. Nowadays, many novels say that they are delicately written, but in fact they are just nonsense, regardless of priority. Reading this book will tell you what true delicacy is. Every chapter is as beautiful as prose.

So far, this book is indeed good. The first dozens of chapters really convey the haze of war, and the reading has the immersion and atmosphere of a classic. The hidden feelings between the male and female protagonists are like a bright color in the gloomy sky, reminding me of the bright red on the little girl's body under the gray screen in "Schindler's List", and the small white flower on the armored charge field at the beginning of the Battlefield 3 Armored-kill DLC promotional video. At the end of the promotional video, the remains of the armor burned on the green field at the beginning, while the small white flower was still blooming under the black smoke. Hope the ending is like this.

Really well written. It feels a bit like 86, and the narrative line and continuity are very smooth. The style of Arihi light novel, the combination of war and daily life described is really attractive. Real, vivid, dark but unyielding, bumpy but endless. This is indeed one of the best articles I have seen in Tomato recently. I like the subject matter and writing style very much. My suggestion is to add more scenes of Ella's sister (it must be included [angry]). Okay, I'm a little impatient. I refuse the knife and the break. That's it, it's rare to leave a long comment. Come on, Haji

Needless to say great! Really It's not a bad street magic, nor is it that the common technology in this background is not suitable for the background (refer to some weights of War Thunder to see the active Super Dimension Warriors using World War II players) Come on author さん I must keep writing it [Like]

This is a very fluent book. The writing style and conception are excellent. It seems that the shadow of Total War Warhammer can be seen in the background. The book depicts not only the story of Henry and Irina, but also a magnificent epic.

An art film based on a novel, worth watching 5 stars for the writing and one star for the adultery. You may think it's nothing, but what I want to say is that this is a vampire and their food is human blood. This is a confrontation in survival. There is no possibility of peace. This is not a conflict of interest between countries. Even the massacre of a war between humans is cruel at best. But this does not mean genocide, and vampires and humans are naturally opposed, so there is human supremacy. This extremism was born to deal with human rape. You tell me that the early war was so cruel, so many people died, and the enemy was the enemy of mankind, not a national war. Now you want to make dumplings? Laughing, you can take your time and get raped

The description in the first half is very good, including long sentences and description of the environment, which are very detailed. The pace is actually not too slow. After all, I have been taking care of Elena, which is more daily. But it can create that kind of depressing atmosphere in the unhurried daily life, making people fall into despair little by little, giving people a sense of despair that they can't defeat the vampire even though they try their best. The second half is more about fighting, so it is normal to go faster. However, there is no need to deliberately adjust the language structure in order to speed up the pace, because those short sentences are a bit too deliberate and read like AI. But overall it is a very good work, and it gives me the feeling of reading the works of a former foreign novelist and essayist, especially the translation accent (not a shortcoming, but I really like the "kick your ass with leather shoes" translation accent). Especially when the characters have to remain silent due to practical reasons during the dialogue, they may not be able to speak, or they may not be able to speak... This kind of helplessness and sadness is vividly performed, which is very consistent with reality. I still hope that if the author has a chance in the future, he can calm down and re-examine this unfinished work, clarify his thoughts, conceive a good plot, and bring this unfinished work to a successful conclusion. After all, including me, there are many frustrated readers waiting for it [almost crying]. It will not disappear from my bookshelf, because maybe one day I will open Tomato and see that this book I once loved has finally been renewed... In fact, the author doesn't need to care too much about those who criticize this book or give negative reviews. You can never satisfy everyone. Just keep your original intention and rhythm and go on until you reach the end of the story. That's good.

Very good. Surprisingly good. See the latest chapter so far. The biggest feeling is that this book is like "warm water". I don't mean bland, but smooth. The technique of line drawing is used in almost every corner, and the most touching words are written in the simplest language. And the narrative rhythm of this book is also rare and excellent. All in all highly recommended.

I stayed up all night and saw the latest version. It's of a very high standard and should be a vest. The writing reminds me of Steel Gunpowder Spellcaster, showing war from individual small tasks, which is far more realistic than many novels in which the protagonist plays war chess as a commander. The world view is neither big nor small at the moment. If it is updated normally, it should have more than one million people? Expect

It is an imaginary story. At first glance, I thought it was from World War I or World War II, but in fact it is a modern war in the style of Western fantasy. The war between modern armed forces and vampires, the lucky ones who survived the war, and the murderous intentions on the rear during the war. There are currently no highlights. It is a Western fantasy war story worth watching.

Unlike an online article, the writing style is more like a physical book. The pace is slower than ordinary online articles, but it reads with that kind of charm, the kind of charm that belongs to a novel.

A very good book, with delicate descriptions, occasionally interspersed with some memories of the Eastern Front, and a sense of despair that appears from time to time as the emotions of the male and female protagonists and the emotions of other characters gradually develop. (Speaking of which, I don't know how humans can win after being beaten like this)

I've finished reading it, and now I'm just reading the first chapter of the second volume. The overall feel is quite good, similar to the Western fantasy background. The main attractions are the story and characters, especially the characterization. Not to mention Ella and Elena, I was most shocked by the father of the protagonist. The character who was thought to be an ordinary supporting character at the beginning was transformed into a general who cherishes his subordinates when his behavior was first revealed. When he met the protagonist for the first time, he directly overturned the previous impression and became more three-dimensional. In the middle period, he would actually doubt the loyalty of the general in resisting the enemy. However, later on, when the poisonous gas was released in the battle of Walden, he was directly portrayed as a general who has means, determination, and is willing to fight for the nation. There is also the protagonist. Although there is no system and the growth trajectory is not obvious, the senses are quite comfortable along the way. The general's daughter is not a flower vase. Various supporting characters include Franz and Friedrich. Even if the latter is just a character who dies when he appears, he is still very three-dimensional. Overall, it's very good, but there are flaws in the writing, such as five characters written instead of four, and the updates are very slow. I hope there can be more updates.

Doesn't anyone praise this author for his good writing? There are no surprises in niche masterpieces. Some people may think that vampires and humans are mortal enemies. How can there be an ambiguous plot? Will the follow-up become very formulaic? First of all, not every citizen of the enemy country is guilty. Secondly, the vampire is the real Madonna. If they didn't save the male protagonist, they would have been reincarnated 40k years ago. Should the male protagonist be resurrected and kill the savior first? The plot can make people guess about the follow-up, but it will not make people feel bland at first glance. The essence of learning Riqing is one of the few online novels that can accurately portray the atmosphere of dark clouds overwhelming the city and the army pressing down on the situation. Five-star praise.

The content is compact and not procrastinating, and the character descriptions are reasonable. It is the best among foreign persimmons. In the early stage, it felt like a light novel, but in the later stage, there are some small details that need to be thought about. So far, it is very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not end it.

It has a unique point of view. I like the vampire and timeline settings very much, but there are small flaws in every aspect. The description is not very detailed. I can only give it 4 points at the moment. Come on, author. I hope the combat can be more detailed and the daily romance can be more delicate (you should be able to distinguish between meticulous and delicate). If I can write it later, I will add another five-star praise.

One of the few five-star reviews I have given, let me talk about the advantages first. This is a very good light novel. The plot is not novel but it is smoother. It can be seen that the author has borrowed many Japanese light novels, such as the Three Doomsday Questions. The logic of the article is clear and the sentences are comfortable. Some storylines clearly have historical references. The author has a good understanding of German history. Disadvantages: There is a lack of understanding of war weapons. For example, armored trains, airships and other weapons in World War I have not yet appeared, and the effect of artillery has been significantly weakened. What I don't understand most is that the heavy machine gun, the most effective weapon for groups, has not appeared. The article mentioned at the beginning that vampires have strong recovery ability but can be killed by headshots, and silver bullets can ignore the recovery ability of vampires. However, no one started to make stronger silver weapons later. Also, the description of civilians in the war is not good. There is no description of the control of supplies when the battle conditions on the front line are extremely bad. The front line is right in front of the face, and at best there are not many things to buy. The world view also cannot withstand scrutiny. At the beginning of the article, it is mentioned that creatures like dragons have been wiped out by humans. The world view probably contains these legendary creatures, but the article does not describe the use of these legendary species. For example, I think armor made of dragon scales is available. The description of vampires is also not good. From the descriptions of passers-by in the article, it can be seen that the vampire species has existed for a long time, but the description in the article gives people the feeling that the vampire species appeared out of thin air. Otherwise, it cannot be explained that humans have no information about the vampire species, and they were defeated shortly after the war started. Then how did humans survive before? Summary: The advantages of this book are obvious, and there are also many shortcomings, but they do not affect the reading experience of ordinary readers. Overall, the flaws are not concealed. I mention these shortcomings mainly because I hope the author can continue to improve the plot. Read the comment area. This is the author's first book. I think it is very talented to be able to write this first book to this extent. This book is also above average when placed next to x point. Finally, I hope the author can continue writing and not continue to live up to the expectations of us readers.

The writing style is considered to be very good in Tomato. The storyline is slowly unfolding, with both the oppression of war and the emotional lines of multiple female protagonists. The writing style is very stable and the emotions are delicate. If you are tired of reading cool novels, you can try this book. It has the potential to be a masterpiece. However, it feels like the first 40 chapters may have been put together by some fragments written by the author. There may be some contradictions in the plot and characters in some places. I don't know if they will be straightened out in the future. Overall, it is in the style of a light novel, not a mindless novel, but it is definitely a masterpiece.

The writing is very good, but it's too short and it's not enough to read. The writing style is very good. I like the character of the male protagonist very much. I don't know if the author is going to write this as a full-length novel or finish it as a short story. Can it be done faster😭😭😭

The depressing and depressing story at the beginning is so well written, it reminds me of the depression I felt when I watched Pitch Black Bullet. Later, the transformation of the vampire from a phenomenon crisis to a game with people is an expected and welcome development. Generally speaking, it is relaxed and exciting, and people are very much looking forward to the follow-up development [cry][cry][Request for more updates][Request more updates][Top post][Top post]

The writing is very good, the emotions are very delicate, and the writing style is also good. The male protagonist is strong, smart, reliable and diligent... At the same time, compared to many novels, the male protagonist here is less slippery and shrunken. He has a youthful atmosphere, but without the annoying childishness.

It's very beautiful, and the words are not gorgeous but can vividly show a crumbling world. The author's writing style seems to take me back many years ago, and I can feel the shadow of the author of old-school fantasy articles while reading. The writing is comforting and I look forward to the next performance. Okay [laughs]

A few months ago, I accidentally clicked on a novel. I originally thought it was set in Germany during World War II. It was an immersive reading in which the protagonist was temporarily sent from the front line to protect (actually monitor) the general's daughter. Later, I discovered that the author also included the setting of blood clan. This is very novel to me, who has read romance novels about World War II and blood clan respectively. Compared with basic writing problems such as typos, too many words, too few words, and even illogical sentences that are common in many online novels, this book is very good in this regard. Of course, when I first started reading, I found that the author used periods more often than commas. I originally thought it was a punctuation error. It wasn't until I reopened the article and continued reading after several months of writing that I suddenly realized that some descriptions seemed short and unfinished, but periods could convey hidden meanings. When I first started reading, and even halfway through, I thought this article was just a novel that told from a male perspective how an orphaned male protagonist achieved success during the war and how he won the heart of a noble female protagonist. But when I reopened the book, I found that my thinking had inadvertently become inertia - who said that online novels can only be written like this? National justice and racial stance, war fronts and power struggles, the love, hatred and grievances of small people, as well as various characters, are vividly portrayed in the novel. Although it is a war theme, while reading the book, what I feel more is not depression, but the present of the unpredictable future, the present with like-minded people, and the warmth of a moment with relatives and friends. In addition, it also produces some perhaps only one-sided reflections on reality and history... Overall, the author's writing style is great. It feels like reading a Western masterpiece, but also has the smoothness of an online novel. In addition, I don't know if it's my imagination, but in some fragments, it seems that the author also used stream-of-consciousness writing techniques - overall, this novel far exceeds many novels I have read before, whether it is subject matter, writing style, characters, plot settings, etc. Although the novel has not been finished yet, and may not even be updated, but as picky as I am, I am still willing to give it 5 stars⭐ because it is worth it!

In terms of subject matter, the theme of the Western Fantasy European War is absolutely novel. The author did not write about the brutality of the frontal battlefield, and abandoned the World War I-style Western fantasy trench bombardment. Instead, he wrote a background in which mankind was completely defeated. The protagonist mainly wrote about daily peace in the early stage, but it can be said to be a relatively good work in terms of the description of the war later. Now he starts to write about the internal struggle of the night descendants. It depends on whether the political department can have a more exciting description. In general, there are no clues about the world view so far, and it is well worth picking up for those who are interested in Western fantasy and near-realistic novels.

Overall, this is a very good novel, which combines the colors of war and Western fantasy. It mainly describes the experience of a soldier in the war. It is not very bloody, but it describes the cruelty and depression of war. The plot is quite exciting and not boring. However, the world view is incomplete, which makes the appearance of some subsequent things a little abrupt. The shortcomings also include the love between the male and female protagonists and the origin of the love. There is almost no writing, which is not suitable for the level of the plot of this work. However, if you try to accept the love between the male and female protagonists, the subsequent relationship between the male and female protagonists is quite good to promote the plot. The image and character of the female protagonist are established, and the perseverance image depicted matches the background of the war in this article and the writing style. Moreover, I also prefer independent and persevering characters, so I send it to you. The flaws are not concealed. Give it five points.

𓀃𓀅𓀇 The author's soul is back! The beacon in the southern sky is blazing, and the black armor covers the sky. The thunder-driving car splits the sky, and the light chases the tail of the comet! 𓀌𓀎𓀠 The author's soul is back! Looking back over the ice mountain, I see a golden frosty moon. Shoot Sirius into Beichenye, the sound of dysprosium is like a complaint! 𓀋𓀌𓀎 The author's soul is back! The sand in the West Pole is swallowed up, and the bronze lord burns into the night. Stepping on the tortoise-shell song and Yu's steps, the star map is in the palm of your hand! 𓀋𓀠𓀤 The author's soul is back! Looking to the east, the hibiscus trees are burning, and the red crows hold the pei in their heads. After nine days of carving the remains, he made a chariot, and Xihe gave him the bridle! 𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back! Forge weapons into bells! The soul is back! Where the bones are buried, a golden harvest grows! You will renew my mouth and teeth!

The author's writing is very good, and the writing has the texture of European fantasy novels. It is very authentic and charming, not imitation or contrived. In the text, the world described by the author is covered with a light layer of gray, but when reading these plain but charming words, you will be immersed in it. I like the novel very much, depressing but refreshing. Now I look forward to the update of this book every day. I read every postscript written by the author. I support the author. I really like this kind of book with traditional literary flavor. How does this show that I read the entire book in 30 minutes😅

An outstanding novel. There are currently no 400,000 words, but it already has a very complete story. The language is very distinctive and there is almost no redundant description (if I insist on saying it, the style is a bit like the Korean poet Li Xiang). It is very suitable for calming down and reading slowly (it doesn't matter if you don't calm down, you will calm down after reading it) The perspective focuses on the protagonist, the description is detailed and limited, and I look forward to the story behind it. (I particularly hate the trolls and brats who hate Duan Comments. They post some unintelligible things. There are not many comments in total and they are still disgusting. I suggest future readers turn off Duan Comments and read with peace of mind.) I thought about it later. Well, the racial conflict is really a big debate. The sense of oppression given to vampires in the main opening is too strong Humans are powerless to fight back I have a tendency to make dumplings later. Although it is said that as long as you look good, your appearance can follow your facial features. But how can I put it? It's okay to put it in the light novel category. Hardly serious