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It's tied. The first thing to affirm is that the plot and emotional description are quite good. However, there are too many repeated sentences in the description, especially in the early stage, which will make people feel more machine-like. In the early stage, it is more discouraging. It is recommended that the author manually modify it in detail (such as the fully drawn bow that appears many times, the typical Chloe style, etc.). This situation will be much better later, and it can be seen that the author is optimizing. Please keep updating, the story is quite interesting overall. If you are like me and have a good mouth, fake beauty, strong but weak/sick person, and you are short of books, you can still eat it by reading the plot ahead.

Big and unique style, extreme pain, perverted pleasure🥰beautiful!

Okay, ok, I feel that the two of them are very CP, and they are very good to watch. Well, there are also some small emotions in my heart. They are very good. Now let me talk about it. The only drawback is that there are always some repetitions in the words. It is a little annoying to watch. Although I said I don't mind, but I still have the senses that I want to watch, but overall it is very good, so I am willing to give a five-star praise.

A highly recommended book. If you like two male protagonists, you can read it. The middle and early stages are quite good. In the later stages, the plot becomes a bit repetitive after the two separate from their companions and fight each other. But overall, it is not bad. You can read it if you have nothing to do (´-ω-`)

I've almost read it. I like this book both in terms of the material and the characters. Personally, I like sick and weak characters. The author's emotional transition is good, but the protagonist's emotions are a bit overdone in some places, but it's not harmful. You can feel that the writing of the subsequent content is getting better and better [thinking] Kao] There is a fly in the ointment. The most frustrating thing is that it is not exciting enough. There are very few exciting settings. Basically, the protagonist fights → injures → evolves → injure again. One is saved and then the other is killed again. It is relatively simple. In the future, the author can use more perspectives to describe some of the pleasure of killing monsters after the protagonist improves. Otherwise, I always feel that there is something shortcomings. [Blow kiss] Looking forward to great progress, this xp is so suitable for my taste

Nice! ! ! ! Chloe's sincerity under the disguise of arrogance, and Horsley's love for tearing apart the cold shell [blowing kiss], the emotional line develops smoothly and reasonably, the love between Chloe and Horsley is deep and passionate, it will not be worn away by time, but will become more and more precipitated. Watching it warms my heart [send heart]

Thank you everyone for liking this book! If you like this kind of beautiful, powerful and tragic series, you can continue to pay attention to my updates. The latest supernatural style novel is online. The protagonist is white and black with a bit of dank feeling. If you like suspense or heartthrob flavor, you can come and support [Send Hearts] I hope you all like it and comment a lot [adoration][adoration] Let's rate it a little more! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Oh, I feel very comfortable watching that pull, fragility, arrogance, and the sincerity concealed under the distorted facts. It's really well written, wow wow. It made me cry when I saw it. Good looking. The best meal I've ever had.

A very nice book, the writing is not bad! The protagonist has a system, he is weak and pretends to be sick + he is really sick, and the food is delicious. If you like this, you can close your eyes and drink it. It was a bit routine in the later period, but the author's writing style made up for this, and the flaws did not hide the flaws.

The evil smile on my face never left my face when I watched it. I highly recommend it. I really like such a character who is sober and puts himself into the situation and pays the price to achieve results.

This is the second teacher's book that I have read. The previous one was about Zerg. After reading it, I wanted to find a meal replacement. Unexpectedly, the author has completed several books. The settings are very exciting to me. After I finish this one, I will read several others. Come on, teacher.

Tied again! Looking great as always! So far I have read three books in this similar series by Teacher and I really like them!

I like the plot in it, but I won't say what I like. Everyone who understands understands.

Simply shockingly delicious! Some of the plots and interactions are really enjoyable. The author greatly appreciates the update! ! (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks really good, and it's considered good-looking among the five stars.

Super nice. . The one who was chased by the Zerg from the previous book went straight into the pit vertically.

Hey, I'm so thirsty, please give it a try, author, please feel free to rush [please update]

So pretty! The development of this emotional line is so reasonable and not abrupt at all.

If you like this type, you can check it out

Really super pretty

Good-looking [shy] like beauty and strong misery

It's a very novel setting. Let two people redeem each other like this! From calculating to being moved, when does the real heartbeat begin!

It's beautiful, very sweet, and the plot is good. It's so sweet and reassuring❤️

Nice. I've read all the author's books. Love this setting so much

It was good to watch, but I felt that the plot of revealing Chloe's identity as a person from another world was too sudden and the development was a bit fast.

Such a beautiful novel, no one has rated it! I don't allow it!

There are so many books about this subject, and finally I found another good one. I cried.