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The author writes about the two-way redemption of my love! The only drawback is that the timeline and logic are a bit confusing, but it can be turned around on its own. The ambiguous atmosphere and tug-of-war are delicious 😋 It perfectly fits my idea of ​​Deha (you are the born savior, and I am the destined Death Eater, only we can truly understand each other). There are two little ones comforting each other➕confiding their hearts. The confession is the kind that seems sudden, but in fact has been traced for a long time. The change in attitude of both parties (from mutual hatred and suspicion at the beginning to understanding and dependence later) is well written! Come on, author, I wish you better and better! ❤️

It looks great to me! ! ! ! Harry and Draco have completely changed from tit-for-tat to advancing and retreating together! ! ! It was so fun for me to go! ! ! What is needed is this kind of pulling. . . I think the author wrote so beautifully😭😭😭I cried. It didn't weaken any party at all, hahahaha! ! The author must keep writing, I beg you. . It's really beautiful😭😭😭I cried for a long time This feeling of hating sea and love is so right. . It's very interesting but the chapters are so confusing that I can't understand them.

Did the author write down all the different situations of the same thing? Sometimes I was so dizzy that I didn't know where to start from. Hahaha. However, the emotional foreshadowing is very good. The confession afterward is not abrupt at all, and is very gentle and gentle. The cuteness of the pop-pop almost makes me faint, especially when the confession is made. .

The author's writing is very clever and the plot is very interesting. The emotional atmosphere between Xiaolong and the savior really touched me. The part about Xiaolong because of his identity and family made me heartbroken. That's enough, Xiaolong. I feel sorry for you. Harry is also a savior. If possible, I also hope that he is a boy whose parents are still alive and grows up happily instead of a savior who is born with a heavy mission. I feel for you two miserable children. There are people, but the plot in the middle is a bit messy, but it doesn't have much impact. This article actually includes the Weasley twins and the Black brothers. The two pairs of authors are also very good at writing. The writing is very sweet. The sweet little life after the main CP is together is so warm. Although I like to watch it in a big way, I prefer to see the family property. The two people walk hand in hand and chat. It is very warm and happy, and it feels light, but isn't it also very happy? Ahem. Overall, I highly recommend everyone to take a look because it's really sweet [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This book is really good-looking. It's very sweet [shy] in places that basically don't have OOC. The ending is about he Xiaoha and Xiaolong. After going through a lot of hardships, I am finally happy [crying] It's actually quite emotional, I really like Deha [shy]

The plot was originally quite good, but there were many things that puzzled me. For example, why did Malfoy and Harry, who were originally in Umbridge's recording room, end up in the corridor and were watched by other people? Moreover, the location and time in some places are confusing, which affects the reading of the article. But the advantage is that the characters are very consistent. Draco's arrogance, sharp tongue, and awkwardness are well written. Harry's sense of justice and the mood when he and Draco exchange insults are very consistent with the original work [Like]

It's really super sweet and the scene is heart-warming! That is, if the same scene unfolds in different plots, it is recommended to use the same chapter number, so that you can understand it at a glance [Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart]

It's super good-looking, but the only drawback is that the chapters are a bit confusing, but the writing is super good, and it feels very comfortable. The writing style is so clean, and it's very therapeutic to read. It's so good at writing, and every sentence pokes me.

The relationship between the two people is rather sour, but very beautiful. The two people touch each other very carefully. When they finally open up their hearts, they are like two cats that have finally given up their disguise and retracted their bared teeth. What they left to each other is something they have never shown in front of anyone. All in all, it looks great.

How should I put it? I feel that the author wrote a lot of repetitive words in this article and the timeline is a bit confusing. The emotional description may not be in place. The above is a possible highlight. Overall, it is for encouragement, so it is five stars, but it may be about 3.5 For me personally.

This book is really great ^ω^, the tension between Harry and Draco is extreme, and it's also DeHaven who I love so much! ! ! This feeling that hits my heart is really awesome (//∇//)! ! !

It tastes right, come and see

Damn, it's so damn good that I can't stand it anymore, awesome Klass! ! !

Against the road couple, Sihasha, just pull it off, be arrogant, just let down your guard😍😍😍

The teacher's writing is very good, but the order of some chapters does not match. I hope it can be revised🥹

It's good to read, but it's a bit hardcore. In fact, I feel that this book can be both hardcore and hardcore.

Although the author's writing style is not very good, it is really sweet [shy]

The author's writing is very good. This little couple who fights against the evil tongue is so delicious. Also, I feel really distressed and haha｡｡°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°｡ The only drawback is that the chapters are a bit confusing, well, sometimes I can't understand them, but the writing is really good and good (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡) Author I will support you'- ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-

It's delicious. I love it. I'll have some.

It's beautiful [blowing kiss] I really like it

It's really beautiful^ω^!

Very beautiful, fascinating

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

No OOC, this is a long-lasting article

Teacher Deha99's writing is super good

Holding the grass and clinging to the puppy makes me so happy

Aren't you talking about sweet stories? Boss, you tricked me into reading sour stories like this [crying][crying][crying] It's really good-looking, but the two poor little ones in the front are too miserable.

Very delicate writing

The author writes very well, but the coherence is not very strong. Some parts need to be understood by yourself😊

Very good, but there is less ambiguity in the early stage