Equestria Girls: Being a Dad Is No Easy Job

(No spoilers) A very exciting novel. If you like monthly journals, you must read it. ①My writing style is very good among the monthly novels, and is above average among the tomato novels. You won't feel jerky when reading it normally. ②The plot transitions quickly, and the core content is well presented without being cluttered. Readers will not feel a sense of jumping while reading. The plot advancement in the first ten chapters is comparable to the plots of more than ten or twenty chapters in other novels. It is also highly recommended for readers who do not like procrastination. ③The character creation is basically non-ooc. As far as I am concerned, I can even describe the character's voice from the character's language description. I am not a senior horse fan and cannot comment on the character creation of Guan Xiaoma, but the character creation of Yueji is very good, just like the reincarnation of Xiao Jin (a slight exaggeration) In general, I highly recommend this novel to those who love reading novels. The writing style should be at the upper level among novels of the same type. It does not have the stiffness and stiffness of a novice author. The plot turns smoothly and the writing style is more delicate. It is like finding treasure from shit. Of course, there are some shortcomings, but they do not outweigh the good points. I can say one shortcoming that has nothing to do with the plot - it is too short, and you will lose it after watching it for a while. To sum up, just watch it! (Contains spoilers) There are also some disadvantages, such as: ① The character's emotions heat up too quickly, and there is no description of any close contact with the senior sister, but he quickly gains the trust and trust of the senior sister. ② There are too many characters added in a short period of time, which has no impact on the people of Yueji. However, it is not friendly enough for readers from Xiaoma's side or readers who don't know either side. Basically, by default, readers know the character traits of Yueji's characters. The character creation of some supporting characters is not specific enough. Even if you don't know Yueji, it will be difficult to remember the character names even if you read in depth. Generally speaking, there are only so many shortcomings. If you can accept it, you can continue reading. (I also read the new follow-up comments added a few days later) : The update feels a bit slow, one chapter is added every day.

It's very interesting, and not OC at all. It really captures the loving daughter of Lean, so the author has to work hard!

The rhythm of the plot is quite well controlled. Everyday life should be as daily as possible, and the main plot should be as main plot. Lien is not OOC in general. I enjoyed reading the story about raising a daughter! In addition, the idea of ​​embodying the Abnormalities in the world of My Little Pony is very good. At first, I didn't know how to advance the main plot. But seeing the Abnormalities embodied, I have to say that it was a great idea. It can increase the chances of advancing the plot and give the children their own opportunities. There is no expectation for Lucio and Valencina to reconcile, but the author's reconciliation is a process, not a grand result. The reconciliation proceeds slowly, starting from the moment Lucio notices Valencina. In addition, the author's care in requesting manuscripts for this book can also be seen. Be sure to invite more father-daughter family members to submit manuscripts! The family affection and atmosphere of a big family are well written. Those who like family affection can just eat it as a state banquet. There are shortcomings, but for some groups, it is about the relationship between lalangs. This book is about the lalangs of Youlian. Some non-CP-oriented groups may not be able to accept it. If they are omnivores, then congratulations, you can taste the delicious reunion (?) All in all, this is an excellent Border Bus and My Little Pony fan work. Since some groups have objections to Lalang, and to prevent Tomato from being removed from the shelves, I will give four stars as an evaluation of this book to reduce the score and avoid lightning. A+ Looking forward to your next work

It's pretty good-looking, not OOC, but the weird Lalang made my eyes go dark again and again 🤦 This book is really good, but this cross-dressing guy is so ridiculous. I laughed out loud. Then let me ask you, what is the difference between this and Xueyue Pavilion😭😭😭

It's really good. The characters are restored and the writing is good. There are only two things that are not good. One is that too many characters are added, but the normal pony timeline appears very early. Without adding some characters, there is nothing to write about. The second point is that the relationship rises too quickly. There are almost no elements of excessive contact in the previous description. Even the name is not mentioned, but after Sora came, he still looked wary and jealous. The latter explained that they reconciled and became father and daughter, but it seems like it was only a week ago.

I have to give this an A+! I was moved by the plot of Lean some time ago, and I have been looking for any books about Lean, and I found a treasure. First of all, from the writing point of view, there is no problem at all. It is much better than most fans. After all, it is not the teacher's first book, so don't worry about the writing style. So far, the writing is very smooth 👍 From the plot point of view, I give it a huge 👍. I couldn't let go of Lean's death for a long time. When I read this book, I felt like a hen card fan reading without worrying about it. First of all, I only knew a little bit about My Little Pony when I was a child. Nowadays, except for the main characters, I have basically forgotten everything else. Lean's fatherly love is well reflected in the text. As for the argument that family ties are improving too quickly, I actually don't think it's a big problem. The writing behind it is very natural and doesn't make people feel uncomfortable. It just depends on personal preference. From the character point of view, since I have never watched My Little Pony, I am speaking from the role of Bus. It is not OOC at all, and the whole body looks very comfortable 👍 The only thing I have to worry about is that if there are more characters at the end, the layout will be prone to problems. Most fan authors are prone to problems. This is mainly reflected in the fact that the author has too much content to express and there are many characters, so it is easy to mess up the writing. I have not seen any similar problems with this book so far. This book is extremely versatile and has high countermeasures. Generally speaking, it is a very big book [like it] and is recommended for everyone to read. Ps: I usually write so much in Chinese that I have tried my best. (It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful new book, so cheers to the author)

The writing is very good, the character is not OC, and it is better than most monthly fanfics on Tomato 😄, go for it

I stayed up late to finish reading it, and it was quite good. It is one of the few well-written articles on Tomato about monthly plans and other articles. It is also well integrated. It makes up for a lot of regrets. Although it has a little knife inserted, it is still quite healing. After reading it, my biggest realization was: As expected of Zi Gongxiang, his ability to accept and forgive quickly is amazing. But I feel like my feelings change so quickly, and subconsciously I always feel that something is weird, but is this also normal for my wife? However, I have a little suggestion. The reading threshold of this article is actually a bit high. It assumes that readers fully understand the world view of the two works. However, for people like me who have never seen Equestria at all, and who have seen the version of Twilight Sparkle before, the problem of being unable to distinguish between people (horses) and places is quite serious. It is recommended that when characters and scenes appear, a little description can be used to facilitate readers to import the image. Anyway, it looks good. I love watching it.

The rare Lienwen is more delicious than you can imagine!

The sultry sadist seems a bit too perfect, but I say the future is promising