[Protagonist: Lin Bai, the only female protagonist: Kurumi Tokisaki. Note: There is a scholar]
Chapter 181 has ended.
Current event: Demonic transformation of evil paradise.
The young man came to the world of battle to form bonds with the elves and start a new adventure.
"Kotori, you want me to capture Kurumi, make her fall in love, and protect Shido's safety?"
"My third wife is the most special."
In the Misfortune Paradise, he punched Takamiya Mio hard on the face, "Recognize the reality, he is not a true scholar, his name is a young man named Itsuka Shido! He is my important partner!"
The ten demons created in the magical world constructed by Westcott, plus Ellen Artemisia.
Are you sure it's not the Twelve Ghost Moons?
Kuang San, a traveling businessman, and the Kotori bandit leader took over the mountain as king. Lin Bai and Liu Gong helped the villagers... The Seven Sins tampered with the oracle and became a savior hero, leading an expeditionary army of tens of thousands of demon kings to defeat the demon king.
Demon King Westcott burst into laughter when he heard that Hero Shido was coming to attack him.
...
In the neighborhood, there are tens of thousands of quasi-elves, the king and the fool fight, the White Queen becomes a heretic believer, when Lin Bai and Shidao appear in the neighborhood, Shidao is almost overwhelmed by the quasi-elves.
"Shido! King! King!"
"Kill the fool! Kill the fool!"
Lin Bai strangled Shido's neck with his backhand, "Escape quickly! If you are caught, your skin will peel off!"
Shidou: "Let go, I can't breathe~"
Then Fei Yixiang said that I was actually hiding a heresy, so more and more Lao Liu appeared, and it turned out that they all rebelled.
Lin Bai: "I don't care about you, anyway, I only love Sansan deeply."
"Ah! No one can take you away from me."
Just think of it as my writing
Reader comments
If you look at the front and not the back (you may think there is a problem), but the back is fine (Kurumi needs the strength to help her, and the male protagonist has also entered her heart), overall it is still good-looking, with good mouth and teeth! ! ! ! !
The protagonist is a demon from outside who uses Kurumi to go back to the past and change history. Hmm, the setting looks so familiar... The cold wind blows in the valley of desolation, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young boy returns. At Danghun Mountain, the stone man sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders and the demon heads north. Countercurrent and tens of thousands of immortals retreat, love loses and persists in tears. Destined to succeed or fail, the Immortal will regret it but I will not.
Chuunibyou is acceptable. The writing style is a bit green, but it is pretty good among Tomato Battle fans. I hope that the character charm of the protagonist can be reflected in the following chapters, so as not to get sick in the middle and late stages. After writing "Garden God", will I write about lotus? [Smile]
I'm a bit stupid and can't say anything, but the writing is very good. Some parts made me cry (I'm so fragile). The protagonist is well portrayed and the plot is good. I also want to have a good life. But when I read it, I felt that there were some missing words, so I need to pay attention to it.
Could the author please update ten times a day?1，
Can we not have a single female lead? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry ][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
It looks good. There aren't many crazy ones in Tomato. This one is even better.
At first glance, it only feels abstract, but the further you look at it, the more exciting it becomes. It is very delicious and interesting, and the author is very thoughtful. Come on author [please update]
I personally think this book is very interesting. In the world of dating, the protagonist has a part of Rikka's setting. It is particularly interesting to watch the protagonist with chuunibyou wandering around in the world of dating. Moreover, the protagonist is immortal, although the protagonist himself does not know it. Moreover, I think the love story between the protagonist and Sansan is also well written. Some people may fall in love too fast and illogical in reality, but I think novels do not need to be so realistic. In short, I personally think this is a relatively good dating novel. After all, there are many dates on Tomato and there are relatively few fans. Most of them are old books from the past. Come on, author! ! [Praise]
The subject matter is very good. I read in the comments section that the writing at the back is pretty good, but the front is a bit off. . . . I'll read it later when there is a shortage of books.
Don't stop it, I'll live on you QAQ
Kids, this book is really good at "A Date with the Unpopular Tomato"🍅🍅🍅😋
It's so beautiful. It feels the same as when I was watching the second disease but also wanted to fall in love.
It feels okay ^ω^ I finished chasing the anime version of Battle in two days, and now I feel empty. I have been reading the fanfic for the past few days. This book is considered good in my mind.
Anyway, the protagonist's characterization is very good, and the emotional line is relatively clear. Of course, it feels a little awkward in the early stage, but in the later stage, it is really interesting. I look forward to the follow-up plot. The author is great, please come on＾0＾~
Good-looking [smile] Love to watch [smile] Quick update [smile] [smile] [smile]
It's very interesting, I highly recommend it. If you can accept the main character's failure in the first few chapters before he awakens his abilities [face covering], after all, it's a funny and everyday work. The only "hidden danger" at present is that the only female protagonist in this book is Kurumi Tokisaki, but except for Tohka who loves Shido, Mio who loves Shinji, and Yoshino who is the male protagonist's sister, the other main female characters have slowly fallen in love with the male protagonist. I don't know how the author will deal with the relationship with other female characters in the future, but it is interesting to see Kurumi jealous [laughing] especially the current Miku chapter [laughing]
Author, please don't starve to death. As long as I have time, I will watch commercials and send you electricity for your love [crying] Don't stop updating.
I have sent electricity nine times for love, and the results can be checked [Adoration]
It took me one night to read it and I still feel it is very good. It is the best battle novel I have ever read.
It's good to watch. It reminds me of the time I paid to watch the three single female protagonists on Qidian. Com a few years ago.
Okay, it suits my taste well.
Come on, come on, look good [laughing evilly]
Overall it's good
Ok ok ok
It felt awkward at first, but it felt pretty good if I bit the bullet and looked at it.
I love watching it, at least I think Kurumi is like this
It's really pleasant to write a chapter or two like this so late at night, I can't stop laughing.
It looks good, but it is a bit awkward in the early stage, but some chapters are really good and quite touching.
Lin Bai's characterization is still very good, and the interaction with Kuang San is also very sweet. The main plot advancement is quite appropriate. The props in other worlds are really interesting and interesting.
Ok ok ok
Shido is about to become the chef of the courtyard.
If you look at the front and not the back (you may think there is a problem), but the back is fine (Kurumi needs the strength to help her, and the male protagonist has also entered her heart), overall it is still good-looking, with good mouth and teeth! ! ! ! !
The protagonist is a demon from outside who uses Kurumi to go back to the past and change history. Hmm, the setting looks so familiar... The cold wind blows in the valley of desolation, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young boy returns. At Danghun Mountain, the stone man sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders and the demon heads north. Countercurrent and tens of thousands of immortals retreat, love loses and persists in tears. Destined to succeed or fail, the Immortal will regret it but I will not.
Chuunibyou is acceptable. The writing style is a bit green, but it is pretty good among Tomato Battle fans. I hope that the character charm of the protagonist can be reflected in the following chapters, so as not to get sick in the middle and late stages. After writing "Garden God", will I write about lotus? [Smile]
I'm a bit stupid and can't say anything, but the writing is very good. Some parts made me cry (I'm so fragile). The protagonist is well portrayed and the plot is good. I also want to have a good life. But when I read it, I felt that there were some missing words, so I need to pay attention to it.
Could the author please update ten times a day?1，
Can we not have a single female lead? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry ][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
It looks good. There aren't many crazy ones in Tomato. This one is even better.
At first glance, it only feels abstract, but the further you look at it, the more exciting it becomes. It is very delicious and interesting, and the author is very thoughtful. Come on author [please update]
I personally think this book is very interesting. In the world of dating, the protagonist has a part of Rikka's setting. It is particularly interesting to watch the protagonist with chuunibyou wandering around in the world of dating. Moreover, the protagonist is immortal, although the protagonist himself does not know it. Moreover, I think the love story between the protagonist and Sansan is also well written. Some people may fall in love too fast and illogical in reality, but I think novels do not need to be so realistic. In short, I personally think this is a relatively good dating novel. After all, there are many dates on Tomato and there are relatively few fans. Most of them are old books from the past. Come on, author! ! [Praise]
The subject matter is very good. I read in the comments section that the writing at the back is pretty good, but the front is a bit off. . . . I'll read it later when there is a shortage of books.
Don't stop it, I'll live on you QAQ
Kids, this book is really good at "A Date with the Unpopular Tomato"🍅🍅🍅😋
It's so beautiful. It feels the same as when I was watching the second disease but also wanted to fall in love.
It feels okay ^ω^ I finished chasing the anime version of Battle in two days, and now I feel empty. I have been reading the fanfic for the past few days. This book is considered good in my mind.
Anyway, the protagonist's characterization is very good, and the emotional line is relatively clear. Of course, it feels a little awkward in the early stage, but in the later stage, it is really interesting. I look forward to the follow-up plot. The author is great, please come on＾0＾~
Good-looking [smile] Love to watch [smile] Quick update [smile] [smile] [smile] It's very interesting, I highly recommend it. If you can accept the main character's failure in the first few chapters before he awakens his abilities [face covering], after all, it's a funny and everyday work. The only "hidden danger" at present is that the only female protagonist in this book is Kurumi Tokisaki, but except for Tohka who loves Shido, Mio who loves Shinji, and Yoshino who is the male protagonist's sister, the other main female characters have slowly fallen in love with the male protagonist. I don't know how the author will deal with the relationship with other female characters in the future, but it is interesting to see Kurumi jealous [laughing] especially the current Miku chapter [laughing]
Author, please don't starve to death. As long as I have time, I will watch commercials and send you electricity for your love [crying] Don't stop updating. I have sent electricity nine times for love, and the results can be checked [Adoration]
It took me one night to read it and I still feel it is very good. It is the best battle novel I have ever read.
It's good to watch. It reminds me of the time I paid to watch the three single female protagonists on Qidian. Com a few years ago.
Okay, it suits my taste well.
Come on, come on, look good [laughing evilly]
Overall it's good
Ok ok ok
It felt awkward at first, but it felt pretty good if I bit the bullet and looked at it.
I love watching it, at least I think Kurumi is like this
It's really pleasant to write a chapter or two like this so late at night, I can't stop laughing.
It looks good, but it is a bit awkward in the early stage, but some chapters are really good and quite touching.
Lin Bai's characterization is still very good, and the interaction with Kuang San is also very sweet. The main plot advancement is quite appropriate. The props in other worlds are really interesting and interesting.
Ok ok ok
Shido is about to become the chef of the courtyard.