Just Change One Word, and I Will Do What I Say in the Horror Game

This article is about a growth-type heroine. Her combat power seems to be quite strong at the beginning, but she will definitely become more powerful and develop more skills later on. At present, it is the mysterious world, the human world, and the game. Copies are remnants of some ancient world. As for the messy writing, I really tried my best, and I will work hard to write the next copy. But this kind of battle of wits is too much of a test of IQ＼(`Δ')/. Thanks to everyone who clicked in. When I was writing before, I always wanted to enlarge the world view and write the story faster, just like driving an ox cart to chase a fierce horse. Let all the characters enter the scene quickly, and in the end they turned into ocean balls mixed in the bathtub, and no one knew who they were. As you can imagine, the result is a mess. Later, I dreamed that the inspiration for this story broke out again, so I changed the previous plot and I should be able to read it. O_O There may be omissions in the vocabulary in the article, and I will change it when I see it. [Bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one]

It's pretty good, and the words are very comfortable. Those who don't like degrading words can feel free to enter. The talent skills are also very fun, and there are no big problems. Come on, teacher:) It's just that sometimes it's easy to get dizzy and you need to flip forward. Words that have appeared in the front can be related when writing later, such as the mysterious person x. When mentioned later, you can write "the mysterious person There are also some wordings that make me dizzy. For example, in the skill description of Xu Guizhou in the second copy, what is the safe area? I don't understand. And some places are too jumpy. For example, in the second dungeon, the first person died on the stairs. The first part is about the heroine watching the barrage and the heroine's psychological description. Later, it is about Wei Yu seeing the heroine's idea of going to the rooftop. It's a bit too jumpy. I think we can add a description of the heroine's actions between the two. For example, the heroine looks towards the stairs, which can show some action descriptions of the heroine's interest in the rooftop. I thought of some more points, maybe adding more horror environment descriptions, and some other environment descriptions. I feel that the environment descriptions are a little lacking, and I can't set up the scene in my mind. I think the lack of environment descriptions may be one of the reasons why I feel a little dizzy after watching it? Because I don't have a sense of pictures in my mind, I think it would be more immersive to describe the environment more.

100% Female friendly! Completely written with a female orientation in mind, there are no words against women, and no neutral words are given away. It is both male and female, and is well received by mothers and fathers. The female-to-male ratio is particularly good, and the male characters are basically cannon fodder with no highlights. There are just a lot of typos and omissions! I hope the author can revise it sometime so that the reading experience will be better.

It's good to read, and the author criticizes the humiliating words in this book. The heroine's outlook on life is also very positive, the storyline is also very good, and the pace is just right for me. So far, there are no surprises. Come on, author! All in all, this book is quite to my liking. I recommend [Blow Kiss]

It's pretty good to watch, but there is a supporting actor named Pei Yin who has a high appearance rate. He is extremely conceited and narcissistic. There are many barrages in the article that charm this supporting actor. I searched and found that this person has not been offline until Chapter 149. One of the reasons for not going offline is because as long as one of his sister and him survives, the other can be resurrected indefinitely even if the other dies. .

Author, we like you [full] female-oriented praise [blowing kiss]

It's so delicious~ There are many female characters, the lyrics of Wuxinnv are good, and the author's writing is good [KISS][KISS]

Female-centered women are better than men. The copy is also very good, but maybe because I didn't use my brain very much, I didn't understand some parts, but this does not affect this is a good book✅

Ah, I saw that I have entered the third instance of the game. I originally thought that what was described in the end was a dream, a hallucination, but I didn't expect it to be true. I was confused. Well, the development of the plot does not seem to be that satisfactory, but it seems very reasonable. Anyway, goodbye

I hope the author will be more careful. There are too many typos, it's like reading a pirated article [laughing and crying] The article is quite nice, the setting is interesting, and the copy is well written, keep up the good work! The author remembers to correct typos!

The content is a bit messy, but the heroine is very capable. I hope the writing gets better and better.

Like 🥰 The copy is very novel, and the protagonist is confused. I feel that the author must have buried a lot of holes, waiting for your continued output.

Perfect! Support the author!

There is no disobedient female character, and there is no crying female character at the beginning. Good reviews

˶>ᗜ<˶Meow, this looks good

Beautiful, very beautiful.

It's beautiful, I love reading it! The author will update more frequently, so don't be tired, but don't be idle either.

The proportion of women is high and the wording is friendly [Blow Kiss] The heroine is very strong

The Treasure Found is a great article. The writing is very good and the plot is very attractive.

After reading a few chapters, I feel happy both physically and mentally. This is the kind of female channel I recognize! Female friendly, good setting, average writing, looking forward to improvement