Falling Into a Darkened Honmaru Before I Turned Into a Ghost

This topic is very interesting. The compatibility between Dao Nan and Yan Sheng is really good! Shen Dao is so cute! The author's writing style is relatively smooth, the narrative is tight and loose, and the characters who appear are not one-sided or stereotyped. I quite like that lady, she is a brave and resourceful person. It is written about the two lines of Higuro's brother and brother. The brother slowly learns to accept himself and has a clear mind in Honmaru; the younger brother also falls from the gods to the mortal world on the way to find his brother. The worldly affairs no longer seem to be separated by a layer of mist in his eyes. It turns out that his brother and he are side by side, not as they should be, but on purpose. So the flowers you see are flowers, and the people you meet are people. After Iwakatsu came to Honmaru, he was almost surrounded by gentle warmth. Trust and bond may be a bit heavy for him, but he will slowly accept them. Faced with such a full, deep, and almost sacrificial friendship, the moon hanging high in the sky will also cast a few bright rays. The bond between brother and brother will definitely be deeper, but the little one is also very cute o(^▽^)o Once again, this is how we review the knife. It's so cute. Hey, www. Looking forward to the update~

It's pretty cool, but I'm a little curious. Will Hashigeri and Kneemaru know that the prototypes of the two brothers are Minamoto Yoritomo and Minamoto Yoshitsune who once held their bodies? Haha

Rating criteria: There are no major problems in the writing, the story is interesting under the logical premise, so I give it five stars. In one breath, you tied Wuwu Jiguo Yansheng. You have finally met a blade who will only choose you firmly. Moreover, the previous education you received was as the head of the martial arts family. Entering this pill is like a fish in water! Jiguo Yansheng's Feng Shui Pills will definitely not make you lose weight! ! ! !

Author, I miss you! ! I personally have never been exposed to Touken Ranbu, so when I first watched it, because I didn't understand the setting, the first part was a little rushed, but it was really good to watch! The delicate portrayal of Yan Sheng's heart is in line with my understanding of this character, and in this fanfic, Yan Sheng received the sincere feelings of the swordsmen, and was unswervingly chosen. His thoughts and feelings are slowly changing, and he is healed bit by bit. The author, and I also like the sister-in-law in this article very much. The ballpoint pen only appears in a few scenes, but here he has a complete character. It makes up for a little regret.

The author writes super well, controls the characters very well, and portrays Yan Sheng's pursuit, majesty and tenderness as the head of the family. The elder brother is the elder brother, and you don't need a reason to fall in love with him! The knife spirits love their brother without reservation and it makes people cry. Let's slowly heal each other like this. Yue Tui is very satisfied! PS: Sister-in-law, I like you——

It's really beautiful, the emotions are very delicate, and the emotions between Jiguo Enichi and Jiguo Yansheng are also described very well. There is no OOC at all. I feel that the teacher is particularly good at describing the feelings of brothers. It has a sad undertone and makes me want to cry (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ). It is really beautiful. The writing style is also very good and the logic is very clear. It can be regarded as one of the few good-looking articles among the random articles I have seen on Tomato.

Cheers to the author, it's very interesting. Don't stop updating. I hope you can keep updating. (When will Yuanyi find Yan Sheng? I'm looking forward to it.) [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Send a heart] [Send a heart] [Send a heart]

Great, a guy like Yan Sheng, who has a low sense of deservingness, needs the knife in this pill to love him wholeheartedly and choose him 100%. This setting is really great [crying][crying][crying] Looking forward to a better reunion between the young couple in the future

The most beautiful article I have ever read in which Iwakatsu is the protagonist! I really like the author's writing. The description of the characters is the most consistent with my idea of ​​brothers from the relay country that I have ever seen. I feel that it is very thoughtful! ! There are no stereotypes (brother is a lemon essence/Yuanyi is a fool, etc.). I only recommend brother because I don't hate the jokes, but I still want to eat something good after seeing too many [face covering] [face covering] Here are some thoughts~~ The description of the brother is exactly what Iwakatsu looks like in my mind. He pursues to become the number one samurai and lives his life without regrets on this road. But this time the author allows him to meet the sword men before everything becomes more irreversible. He has not yet become beyond recognition, but still retains his humanity with his unabashed surname. I simply can't look forward to seeing the conflicts that hinder the relationship between Iwakatsu and Enichi being solved in the future. I feel that Sword Man is a good entry point, able to break the knot between their brothers from an angle that transcends the era. The interactions between Kaguya Honmaru are also very cute, and I really like their daily life. The description of Yuanyi is also very interesting. On the way to find his brother, the heart of the son of God is gradually filled with the feeling of fireworks. You can imagine that the world he is looking at in his seemingly godless eyes has finally slowly focused on the human world, allowing him to feel his brother's mood even more. The forcefully stepping out of the world with a knife shocked me. I am so happy to see their brothers reunited! ! In fact, I think there are men with swords and brothers who are less likely to go astray. I believe we will definitely see a good ending this time!! I don't often write book reviews, so I'm sorry that they are a bit incoherent and messy. Finally, I want to say to the author that he really wrote it well! ! I love this book so much [Sending my heart to you] [Sending my heart to you] This is simply not enough! ! How come I finished reading it all at once after hoarding it for a week [crying][crying][crying]

As a Japanese novel, I really enjoyed reading it! ! ! As for the original work, it is generous and generous, without any taboos or distortions; the description of the brother's emotions is delicate and natural, which enhances Yan's psychological identity and increases emotional understanding (that is, enlightenment) for Yuan! I think the growth of the two of them was handled very well. Originally, Yan Sheng would have been impossible to let go if he had to keep it as close to the original work as possible, but the loyalty of men with swords was actually solved! I actually saw the possibility of a reasonable HE between them! The only shortcoming is that it involves a lot of the game "Touken Ranbu". Here are some reading instructions for those who don't know (I don't play it, so I just searched it): 1. This game can be regarded as a card game in which Japanese swords are personified. The judge is the player, the Time Recall Army is the villain trying to change history, and Honmaru is the main page of the game and can also be used as the base camp of the sword; 2. Darkfall refers to the setting of the sword man (anthropomorphic sword) in the second creation who chooses to devour the master and rebel (not necessarily kill the master) after being abused by the God Judge, and will inevitably suffer alienation afterwards. It is equivalent to the erosion of dark energy and will lose his mind and human form (this should be explained); 3. Swords also have brothers, and they attach great importance to friendship; 4. Only players can do the upgrading, maintenance and repair of knives. Now the knives are about to break without anyone to care for them. Yan Sheng's last hope is this; (I am willing to write such a long review and you must believe that it is very beautiful!) (The personification of the knife in the article is also very handsome and cute!)