My Little Pony Has Endless Possibilities

It's tied. There are no shortcomings so far, but I am more worried that the author has fallen into a writing misunderstanding of adding more water to the story and adding more water to the story: because the protagonist is too strong, the difficulty of the enemies is strengthened; and because the enemies are too strong, the protagonist is strengthened, resulting in the author's original work being out of touch with the world view of the original work. In fact, if the protagonist is too strong, he can take the initiative to go to the pony parallel world to have fun, and it does not necessarily have to be something that is invincible and then enemies come from the sky. Another point is the pace. At present, there is no problem for authors to follow their own pace. Don't suddenly speed up the pace because you are not confident. Some authors suddenly speed up their writing and end up losing their mentality.

I'm just here for the "indistinguishable" famous scene, I hope I won't be kept waiting too long. 😊[Smile][smile]

So cool, Rainbow Dash comment

The overall look and feel is good, the overall narrative and story are okay [Like]

It's pretty good, but my head is a little dizzy after watching it [face covering]

It looks a little dizzy when I look at it from the front, but it looks pretty good when I look at it from the back. Overall, it's pretty good. I hope I can make some changes in the front [shy]

This book is interesting, really interesting! Hahahahahaha!

It's well written, I like this kind of heroine [Sending my heart]

Hey hey hey hey hey

Hurry up Hurry up

It's pretty, but it feels a little lacking.

It looks like it's about horses, but it's actually about people. Destiny, desire, choice, belief, We're still on the road