Collapse of Iron**********

The overall plot is smooth and the characters are well drawn, but is the author not very good at sentence breaks? You forced me to write two or three lines of words into one sentence. To be honest, it really affects the perception. After reading a sentence, I often don't know what the author wants to express, and I have to read it two or three times again. However, the quality of this book is generally online. I hope the author can greatly improve the sentence segmentation [Like]

It is the second-ranked Dark Tower fanfic in my mind. It is well written on a daily basis.

Although I don't know who the heroine is, I hope it's Fu Xuan. After all, I'm a lolicon.

Pretty good, pretty good

The plot design is good, but the writing still needs work

The content is fascinating, the structure is rigorous, and it is very good-looking. If you like the suggestion of Beng Tiewen, give it a look.

I have read and passed

Very, very beautiful

It's pretty good. It should be a double heroine. No, there is also a small black tower

Not bad, the way of writing is quite rare

The author who gave 5 stars suddenly ended it one day [angry]

Not bad, the plot is better but some details are still a bit problematic

I've finished reading the chapters so far, but I feel that the Black Tower part is a bit depressing. Maybe it's my personal feeling, but in short, the author's writing is pretty good😎 I feel much better after having the Little Black Tower doll.

It's very beautiful, the author's writing is good

The Dark Tower has good reviews and the plot is interesting.

Okay, don't worry

This time the author is not short, I think he will write 1 million words in total.