Limbus: Tales from the City

The quality is average. The plot is pretty good for a novice writer. The main character is Bangzhi Hantang. So far, it's not bad. The two of them have a bit of a human-computer feel and a single cell. I can only say that the advancement speed will be a bit slow. The daily writing is not bad. Next, there are shortcomings. To be honest, this book gave me a feeling that the author is both urban and urban. It's cruel, but I also want the simplicity and warmth of a daily novel. Some chapters are well organized, but some chapters are not so good. It's better to use less cruel adjectives. Then the character creation, to be honest, there is a little bit of distribution that is not so good. I suggest you not to add new characters. It is the first book of a new author. Don't use the knife and then? If it can be finished before 50,000 or 60,000 words, it is best to finish the first book of a novice writer. If it can be on an equal footing, then the update speed is fine. I can only say that the author is still in school and understand it. I hope the author can pass it. Come on!

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It's quite good-looking. The whole text flows smoothly without any serious problems. Then I hope to write more about the relationship between Xiao Wan and Xiao Lin. Later, I hope that the cold Xiao Lin can find the talent for self-awakening. Finally, I hope that the author will write better and better in the future [Blow kiss]

Emm, the author will keep updating, right...