It's Just My Everyday Life. What's There to Be Surprised About?

It's good-looking, the male protagonist is rarely sober, and the writing is very clear. There is no clichéd way of showing a weak kid who gains power, and the character is portrayed very delicately. There is a feeling that Ming Fei is not so bad, it really makes people dream back to high school. At present, it seems that there is no poisonous point. The only flaw is that there is no supporting role or helper to match it. I hope the emotional part can be taken slowly. Tell me if you've seen Dragons or not!

I quite like the plot of the story, and the secondary lines are very subtle. But the shortcomings are also obvious. The storyboard is very confusing and most of the details are omitted. It feels like I'm reading an abridged version. Here I recommend the author to read it again after writing it, think about it carefully, and add in the details [Punch Out]. The main reason why I can comment so seriously is because this novel is written by me, and I feel so immersed in it 😢😢😢 It turns out that you also wrote the book "I'm a Chuunibyou: All My Fantasies Come True" [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] I originally wanted to raise it, but I didn't expect it to be ended directly 🥺 I really want to read it, but I'm afraid that it will end suddenly like the first book without traffic 😢. This update is so small, it's not enough to read 😢

I really like this book. Although the pace is fast and there is a sudden feeling, who knows who will come first tomorrow or the accident. I feel that the protagonist is very similar to me. He thinks about things when encountering things. I feel that if I encounter an adventure, I will become a powerful person. But I found that life is still like this. The writing is very real. I hope the author can keep writing and I hope the author can think more about the content. It can be sudden, but I also want to see the beauty of the process.

Five stars is an encouragement, not very good-looking. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The language organization skills of the first ten or so chapters were really exhausted for me. I didn't have much descriptive ability. I didn't even know what was going on while reading, and the scene changes were abrupt and abrupt. The template is also very obvious, a beautiful girl, a tall, rich and handsome man, plus a shy supporting character in adolescence. From an ordinary wealthy young man in high school, to a heir of a family with a special university background, to a young man from a top family, they are all carved from the same mold. I keep writing a story over and over again, which is a bit boring and a bit out of place. The advantages are not bad either. The writing style has improved, and you can obviously read it later. The same story template is getting better and better the more you write it. If this is the first book by a new author, look forward to your next work. The logic of the story is also relatively smooth. The male protagonist saved the class beauty in the alien beast incident, and the class beauty fell in love with the male protagonist due to the suspension bridge effect. But apart from that moment of bravery, the ordinary male protagonist doesn't have much to praise. After getting along for a while, he left the male protagonist under the instigation of rich, handsome, flowers and fake friends. The author writes about this process, not just an empty opening background board. The most important thing is that this is indeed a story, a story with distinctive characters, a clear theme, a complete story chain, and a story that focuses on writing stories.

How can I put it this way? This book has a strong dragon flavor or style. The plot is also very fast and compact. The protagonist is probably the same as Lu Mingfei but better than Lu Mingfei, but he is also very middle-class. Overall, it's okay to see it now. It's good if you don't look at it through colored glasses. However, it's quite toxic if you want to examine it carefully. However, the plot goes by very quickly and I feel motivated to keep watching. It's a little bit confusing that the protagonist always resorts to desperate situations to fight back... To sum up, it's a chuunibyou who thinks he's weak but has a destiny.

Haha, thank you all for your support. The new book is about to start. I hope you can give me more positive comments. The author will save more manuscripts and will update more if you give them positive comments.

In fact, it was quite good. I read about the love suspense and the dying patients from the second disease. I liked the feeling of the love suspense book the most. Unfortunately, the rhythm started to fall off a bit at the beginning of the train, and I didn't write it in the end... Talking about this book, it feels like the love suspense book, the pace starts very quickly and then falls off instantly. The writing is a bit fragmented. Although it can arouse some emotional resonance, it feels like the scene changes without fully catching the emotion, and the span is very large. Just... From a reader's point of view, it feels like there is still a lot to look forward to writing. Many characters could be more three-dimensional if they were described more, but the author just ended the story neatly and transitioned the scene. I quite like the author. I have read four of the author's books, and the setting of each one is good. The island life in the love suspense book is also very interesting. Although the plot and characters are a bit flawed, it is not a big problem in this type of novel. I just feel that the author's pace in each book is very fast. I also hope that the author will write a book that he likes completely soon, so that he will have the motivation to persevere, and maybe the rhythm will be much better. Come on.

You know, author, I have been waiting for the sequel to the last book for a long time, but it has not come. However, although you have brought us a new one, I still love your writing. I believe you can write it well, come on!

It's okay to show off, not that awkward 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭[smirk] 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

The author gives me the feeling that there is no written version of Jiangnan after scanning the code.