[Multiple heroines] [Threading books] [School beauties from various countries] [Weird system] [Nervous roommate]
School beauties from all over the world;
A system full of various payment traps that want to squeeze every penny out of the male protagonist.
Wearing books, we must win all the female protagonists before the original male protagonists? !
Reader comments
I am Shennong
Advantages that come to mind so far
1. The main structure of the big world is good
2. The male protagonist has something to eat
3. There are currently no big problems with the character expression of each heroine.
4. The description of the heroine's appearance is very good, and there is not so much wording (many uneducated novel writers love to describe the appearance with a lot of words, which makes me sick, but this is not the case at the moment). It can be said that it is treated with care.
Disadvantages
1. You can be more refined in depicting the scene, but don't be deliberate.
2. There is too little description of the bad "male protagonist", or it may be that the chapter has not been published yet (it's okay, I will wait patiently for your update)
3. I still hope that since this harem-type novel is going to torture the villain, it will be more cruel. At worst, there will be another villain later, but it should not lose its rationality.
I still think it's okay
The dialogue inside is so exciting [laughs evilly]
If you eat it, you must give it a 5-star rating [laughing]
Update soon, is there any talk about setting up a group?
When you are relaxing, you can read it like an emperor and stimulate the secretion of dopamine [laughing] It didn't make you angry at all, so far it seems to be very enjoyable [heartfelt]
Is there something missing between Chapter 18 and Chapter 19?
It is recommended to reduce the use of idioms a lot and change the language style. This makes it difficult for me not to suspect that this is generated by AI.
I am Shennong Advantages that come to mind so far 1. The main structure of the big world is good 2. The male protagonist has something to eat 3. There are currently no big problems with the character expression of each heroine. 4. The description of the heroine's appearance is very good, and there is not so much wording (many uneducated novel writers love to describe the appearance with a lot of words, which makes me sick, but this is not the case at the moment). It can be said that it is treated with care. Disadvantages 1. You can be more refined in depicting the scene, but don't be deliberate. 2. There is too little description of the bad "male protagonist", or it may be that the chapter has not been published yet (it's okay, I will wait patiently for your update) 3. I still hope that since this harem-type novel is going to torture the villain, it will be more cruel. At worst, there will be another villain later, but it should not lose its rationality. I still think it's okay
The dialogue inside is so exciting [laughs evilly]
If you eat it, you must give it a 5-star rating [laughing]
Update soon, is there any talk about setting up a group?
When you are relaxing, you can read it like an emperor and stimulate the secretion of dopamine [laughing] It didn't make you angry at all, so far it seems to be very enjoyable [heartfelt]
Is there something missing between Chapter 18 and Chapter 19?
It is recommended to reduce the use of idioms a lot and change the language style. This makes it difficult for me not to suspect that this is generated by AI.