My Sister Is Disobedient? Then Play with Your Sister and Develop Her

The author's writing style, character description, and plot rhythm are all good, but the design problem is a bit big. Plot of God and Man [rolls eyes] (Listen to my advice, author. I immediately deleted this book and re-opened it, killing all the poisonous points)

The writing is good, but the sister is not taken seriously yet, and the sister is almost ready for personal use. With this gap, any man will directly choose the sister. If the sister does not come to Boda, she can be discarded.

My personal idea is to accept both [laughter] It's so disgusting. I still need to modify it.

It's a very interesting book. It's just two sisters, but it feels too CS.

Everyone is a genius, but the writing is very fluent, so it's not impossible to read.

The revision of the last chapter was correct. I lied to my mother that I was pregnant with a strange man. The perception was too bad. It was much better after the revision.

I suggest changing it to two female protagonists. The audience may be wider, and the book will feel more refreshing. It is not so brainless. I can see that the author has put in hard work. I feel that the results of the book should be better if it is changed to two female protagonists.

Super pretty, I like Ning Qingli

The book written by the author is really beautiful

I guess the author is also reading the comments, listening to the advice, and has changed a lot of content. My current impression is good. It should be possible to maintain this level at 8 or so. Whether it can break 9 will depend on the follow-up.

It's okay. Although it was a little bit toxic at first, it turned into logic later. After I changed it, it was still okay. The author also listened to the advice and gave me a five-star encouragement.

At present, it feels relatively dull. Anyway, I feel that my emotions have not been mobilized. I don't have the joy of eating melons in the Shura field, and I don't feel the sweetness of making sugar.

Good looking and suitable for native dogs

How can I stop updating [I'm about to cry]

The author can actually resonate with me.

It still looks pretty good, but after looking at the author's data, it doesn't seem to be ideal, but I hope the author doesn't give up, keep going [eating melon]

Can it be changed to two female protagonists [crying]

Update as soon possible

Now it looks okay and acceptable

It looks good, but it feels a bit weird. I can't tell which aspect it is.