[No System | Not a power fantasy | Romance included | Slow-paced | Pseudo-ensemble cast]
Narration: Yun Qixiwei's path to immortality has been anything but smooth. She's watched countless prodigies rise like the morning sun, only to fall and disappear without a trace. All she can do is keep to her own path and move forward, one slow step at a time.
Scene One: Someone dares to sneak up on a female cultivator and molest her. Yun Qixiwei spots him hiding in the grass. “Let's see if I can't blow your fake thing off with a clay pot!” Boom! Today's achievement for Yun Qixiwei: one more rotten root blown off.
Scene Two: On the road, she happens upon a rich young heir abducting a woman in broad daylight. There are too many people around, so she might give herself away (she's worried his elders might come after her, not that she couldn't take him head-on!). She lies in wait in the grass, then strikes a fatal blow when he's vulnerable. A little spear up the backside. Zi Yun: “Aaaaaah! Help me, save me! I'm dirty!”
Scene Three: Sect tournament. “For the love of our ancestors, could you please stop hitting people with that pot of yours? We're about to get caught!” Yue Xinian cries in despair.
Look, I'll just look at it this way, the author is a novice, just raise a new little author and look at it hehehehe
It's pretty good, the front is a bit draggy but the back is okay, the writing style is quite lively and interesting.
It's pretty good. Write it down. Just write it and read it. No one will care about it.