Braving Moe Academy with the Twelve Talismans

It's not bad, the flaws are not concealed, and it gets better and better as I read later. However, I was actually attracted to it by the fact that the CP is European. Although the protagonist and Miria Xing are really close to each other, I have read too many stories about the CP with Miria, and I am a little tired of it. Fortunately, the CP is still European. Come on! Lots of updates! If you are sure that the CP is Ouba, don't have to write an ambiguity with Miyaxing at the same time. It will be very uncomfortable. Even if you have to write an if line, it is not something that should be considered in the main text now, right? For example, when it comes to wearing earrings, there are obviously girls present, so why does Mi Yaxing have to help her personally? And the writing is so ambiguous? Really, so far, I haven't written down my cp feelings with Ouba at all, which makes me a little sad...

Damn, you wrote the previous plot really well. I like 😘 very much, but it feels very disconnected since the CP became Ouba. The character of Ouba currently seems to lack a soul, and he and the heroine are not on the same page, and their relationship is a bit inexplicable. On the contrary, it is not as natural and CP-like as the relationship between the mysterious star and the heroine in the early stage. But now the Mystery Star has no soul, and it doesn't have the brilliance and sense of being alive in the early stage. (It's not that he has to do something with the heroine to be outstanding. But if he has no emotional line now, his character will be flat and unfulfilled.) His feelings for Titina are also inexplicable and disconnected. All in all, your writing is very good. I really like the setting of the heroine and the development of the early plot. And the fact that the heroine helps others find the direction of their own magic is really awesome 😘[Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I can only give it four stars, but it's really good to watch and I like it very much. Unfortunately, it's a serial and I can't read it all at once. One star was deducted because I felt that the heroine didn't like the emotional line. It would be better to have no cp. The European party appeared too late. I skipped a paragraph in the middle but it was still interesting. I feel that the other parts were well written. It completed Ukenana's line and strengthened everyone. I wrote an upgraded version of magic based on everyone's magic characteristics. It was quite interesting. I felt that it made up for the pitfalls of the original drama. It was very good. I am looking forward to the plot of the fourth season. I hope the author will finish it soon.

Updates are slow and the rhythm is not good. Many fanfics have the vampire king Tsundere listening to the protagonist. There is no need to add a love line. He is just a 6 or 7-year-old child. There is also the setting of Sapphire awakening powerful skills under the guidance of the Vampire King. All superfluous. There is no need for blood-sucking blood. The protagonist's abilities have been prepared for so long in the early stage, but the results are completely unfulfilled. He was beaten too badly in the first season, but it was not meant to be completely crushed. I feel that the author did not dare to change the balance of combat power at will. There is no difference between fighting with her and without her. Although Wu Lala was saved, I felt that the combat power described could not be matched, and it seemed that the spell was a complete waste. Of course, the advantage is that it is good to deal with it in a friendly manner. But the love aspect is completely unsatisfactory, and the vampire king is too redundant. Although the author gave him a mature appearance and a cold name, he cannot support it at all. He is very uncomfortable with this group, and he is not as cute as a child who is unreasonable and unreasonable. Ou Pao's character is poorly handled. He and Piao Piao will still become good friends. They met in the original drama through fate. The bond between them is stronger than that between La Bao and La Bao in the original drama. Because La Bao always has Guiney and everyone around him, he can't do some things. I hope the author can understand as soon as possible that the love direction you wrote is totally wrong, and don't embarrass Ou Pao. Myriax is very important in this work, to the extent that the protagonist cannot be left out without him. Many plots cannot progress without him, so we can only think of some ways to barely solve the problem to form he. Loving someone doesn't mean you have to be possessive, jealous, and worried about gains and losses. You can also live your own life. At present, people who fall in love with the protagonist have no description of the soul. Ouba is finally free and can do many, many things. How much does he long for in his heart? Author, do you understand? Although he is kind and willing to take on the responsibilities of the Ten Stars, the friendship he feels at Moe Academy is not enough. Something is missing.

The setting is very novel, combining 12 spells into the Moe Academy, which means that the heroine will be very strong, and in fact it will be very enjoyable. The character of the heroine will not be aggrieved, and the regrets in the original work can also be changed. It's the emotional line emmmm I deducted one star because the introduction is about CP Europe, which is why I came here, but the content will include an ambiguous plot with Mystery Star. Here is a warning for friends who want to read it, Lei can run away.

It's very nice, but can the CP be Mystery? It's really nice.

The story is very interesting, but there is one thing about the emotional line... There are too many interactions with Mystery Star in the early stage, which leads to a strong double-star cp feeling, but the main cp is Ouba, so there will be a bit of fragmentation. And according to the plot I've watched so far, Mya Star is a one-way arrow but I haven't noticed it yet. In this situation where he cares about the heroine, it would be really weird if he still insists on Miriam CP in the future. Anyway, when I think about the mystery CP not being removed now, I feel very conflicted (of course it may be my own problem) Overall, it's very interesting. I support the emotional line of the main plot, but can we discuss it a little bit? 🥺 The author should stop writing the mystery CP of the main plot. 🥺 🥺 🥺 The child wants to watch it now, but he feels that he can't accept the subsequent mystery CP.

It's so well written, I finally met a cp Ouba 😳 Come on, I'll keep paying attention

It's a good story line. It's perfect. I like the heroine's charming design. The only drawback is that there aren't many chapters. When I was reading it, I didn't notice that it was a serialized book, so I finished it in one go. Then I could only click on the update button, and then I waited for a month for it to be finished, and I had to worry about whether the author would be a loser. Woo woo woo.

It's so beautiful, and the story is very coherent and attractive. There's nothing special about it to fit in with the original plot. The heroine is really super nice. Even though she's said to be a time traveler, she really regards herself as a member of Moe Academy, and her friendship with Ukenana, my Bai Yueguang, is really super good. When I first met when I was a child, I told Ukenana, since you are Princess Naia, then I will be your knight and protect you forever ꈍ◡ꈍ It's true, I've read more than 10 fan books, and this is the only one that makes me want to read it all the time, and I wait for updates every day🥲🥲Don't stop updating.