White Wolf Demon Servant Wants to Be Free

As expected, I am the first to review this book. I am a newbie with a new book. Please give me your criticism and guidance to make this book better. I usually have to work, and writing novels is my dream, but I will save enough manuscripts and try my best to update them stably. As long as someone likes this book, I will finish it, and I like this book very much now, so even if others don't like it, I will finish it.

I think the author is not simply depicting some suffering, but the beautiful qualities that exist in the deep and dark gaps are made to shine. I personally feel that this book may provide some comfort and encouragement to some people who are in the same dark place. Because I can empathize and be moved, some of the author's strokes are still powerful. Moreover, I think the overall creative idea is also very good, and it is a book worth appreciating.

Has the author practiced it? The pace is very fast, and the weakness of the protagonist is used to lead to the first battle. The way this battle can lift the readers' hearts clearly shows that the author is extraordinary. I wonder if there will be a scene in the future where I was forced to do something, but later got rid of the Gangyin and continued to do it because of my emotions.

Potential stock, edible. So far, it's not toxic, the plot is normal, and the combat descriptions and character portrayals are passable. It can be regarded as a rare high-quality furry article on Tomato. The future is bright, keep it up : D

Although it is the author's first book, and the genre is niche, the template does not have a formula. It seems to be full of buffs, but it actually has great potential. The author's writing style is very good, the character descriptions are not many but very three-dimensional, and there are no poisonous points in the handling of many key plots. But as an early-stage abuse novel (the late-stage system is too useless in the early stage [face covering]), the current stage is definitely not that exciting. However, every character and experience that the protagonist has honed lays a solid foundation for subsequent growth. I hope that the protagonist can become the "alpha wolf" and truly lead the demon servant to freedom. (No, I feel like this passage is very manipulative [laughs]) Looking forward to the follow-up development [blowing kiss]

This is the first time I have seriously read an article with the setting of "cannot disobey the master's order" (well... It reminds me of a dead article). It can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into the child Xue Han. What he would think and do at that time is very comprehensive and does not violate the ideological seal. Even sometimes I think it is not a big deal. If the author hadn't said that it violated the ideological seal, I would have skipped it. I really wouldn't feel OOC. In fact, "The Abuser" is a label that has a very small audience on Red Persimmon. To put it in a big way, it can become a poisonous label, but the author just stepped forward. I really admire it and filled some of the gaps in the bookshelf. To be honest, I quite like this setting... Can I say this (I can't save my xp)? I hope the boss will work well and make this book even better! ٩( 'ω' )و

The author's portrayal of the protagonist Xue Han is the most eye-catching aspect of this book. As a white wolf demon servant who was reborn in a different world of orcs, he did not awaken the aura of Long Aotian at the beginning, nor did he come with an invincible system buff. At the beginning, he was imprisoned, despised, and used as a tool. He would tremble because of pain, waver in despair, and even develop dark hatred when being abused. These imperfect moments allowed him to break out of the conventional setting of an "innocent little white flower" and become a soul of flesh and blood, capable of pain and hatred, but never giving up his desire for freedom. Please don't stop updating. I'm so sad and want to read it. I finished reading the updated parts in a few days. Now I feel itchy. Please update more [crying]

OK, brothers, I also spent a whole day reading it (yes, from 7 a. M. To 1 a. M., Isn't it amazing?) Then let's talk about the conclusion first. The teacher's writing style is really amazing. You can see the protagonist's psychological contradictions and his choices almost everywhere in the article, which makes the protagonist's characterization almost full, and then I almost skipped reading the rest, of course for my own reasons. It was so depressing that I almost dropped my pearls [face covering] (I may be that sexy, um, yes). Although the author's writing is also very good, I still hope to get over it as soon as possible. After all, who doesn't want the protagonist to be well (is this really micro-abuse!?)

After reading the first volume, I will also comment on it [Sending Hearts] [Blowing Kisses] These are all personal opinions, and have no negative influence. I have a strong ability to accept them, so I can't complain if I don't like them [I'm about to cry] This book may offend some people, because the protagonist Xue Han is a slave, no, his status is lower than that of a slave, but this kind of counterattack in a desperate situation is also very good, and it belongs to a theme that is rarely seen on Tomato nowadays [Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart] The author's details are also very good. The twelve priesthoods are a very common Western fantasy color, but he also wrote a different kind of beauty [blowing kiss]. The character and characteristics of the protagonist Xue Han were perfectly discovered by the author, and he really brought Xue Han to life [shy] The characters in it are also very emotional, flesh and blood, emotional, and very active. The plot is also closely connected, and the world view is fully depicted. The ability hierarchy is also a small point [shy], but it does not affect the overall sense. The protagonist Xue Han is really improving little by little through his own efforts, and he vividly depicts the predatory nature of the weak. Of course, the depiction of perversion is also very vivid [shy] As for the system... Waste is really waste, powerful is really powerful [eating melon], being able to accurately observe his own progress, adding skills to Xue Han, and also being able to see the abilities of others, giving himself an extra life security [sending heart] The article is not invincible, nor is it pleasant, and is very sad. The whole process is a kind of relaxing and depressing [crying] I feel very sorry for Xue Han, and I am also happy to see Xue Han's progress. In an almost numb environment, I maintain my original intention, work hard to prove and make progress for myself, and live for my future. I think this is also the author's state of life, living for a better future [blowing kiss] Finally, there are not many interesting points in the article, but I really like it. The biggest interesting point is the identity of the demon servant. If you don't like it, don't read it. The author is also very difficult. If you don't like it, if you don't like it, my good article may be gone. Thank you all for reading it patiently. Here, I also wish all furry babies to be happy every day, rich in wealth, and their babies will be popular!

It's good-looking. I like Xuehan's character very much. He is tough and unyielding. Moreover, his recent development is also very good-looking~~~~~~ It must be updated, author.

The emotions are sincere, the narrative is vivid, and the characters are three-dimensional. The protagonist has a sense of helplessness towards real life, but never gives up his pursuit of freedom and ideals. He holds his future firmly in his own hands. Just like Bei Feng said, he did not gamble or hide, but chose to see and face the dangers of life, and did not miss the small but real warmth.

This book describes the world view very well, the Western fantasy world, the world of the 12 main gods It has been written since the birth of the protagonist. The damage caused by the mental seal (which makes the demon servant unable to resist) seems to have destined the demon servant's tragic fate. The status of the demon servant in this world is like... A pet that can talk, move and have its own thoughts... A tool for people to vent their desires is more appropriate. The protagonist has been serving different masters since he was born (pure service, the protagonist is clean) (main plot, excluding extras). He has always felt unfair and longed for freedom. Before the gold level

Hey hey~ When Xue Han becomes stronger in the future and unlocks the mental seal, will he be able to walk on this continent as an independent free individual, and then travel through many different continents and countries, meet all kinds of people, witness or participate in various events, and really take a good look at the world? To experience the truth, goodness and beauty from "human/animal nature" that is hidden by the cruel world. Explore the history of this world and explore the secrets scattered around the world. After everything is settled, can Xue Han have a relationship that can be entrusted to each other? I am looking forward to future stories, whether they will be wonderful performances or ordinary and casual daily life. (Actually, I hope Xue Han will hug him and say "you are all my wings" from now on) [laughs] The overall reading experience of this book is relatively smooth. It is a fantasy coming-of-age novel with a clear theme and acceptable completion. The advantages and minor shortcomings are relatively normal. The story revolves around the white wolf demon servant breaking away from the contract and pursuing freedom. The main line is clear, the plot logic is basically stable, there are no obvious logical loopholes, and the early foreshadowing can be reasonably recovered. However, the work does not fully explain the details of the world view. For example, the description of the rules of the devil world and the specific restrictions of the contract is shallow and insufficient. Part of the plot advancement relies slightly on coincidence. For example, the protagonist relies on unexpected help several times to escape danger, and his own planning is less reflected. Character creation is the highlight of this book. The struggle, confusion and persistence of the protagonist Bai Lang are very delicately depicted. The growth process is natural and easy for people to sympathize with. Although the supporting characters have their own characteristics, the position changes of some characters are a little hasty and the foreshadowing is not sufficient. However, for these supporting characters who will not appear much in the future, I personally think that the author has done a good job in shaping them. There are also some mild regrets in the novel, such as the overall rhythm is slightly unbalanced, the early foreshadowing is slow, and the later ending is slightly faster; some plots tend to be common routines, and there is a slight lack of freshness. Maybe the author is gradually mastering the writing skills and is still unable to achieve perfection, but I personally think that the author is stronger than other novice furry writers. Overall, this is a sincere work with three-dimensional characters and a complete story. It is very suitable for readers who like the themes of growth and redemption. Although there is still room for improvement in setting and rhythm, it does not affect the overall reading. It is a story about struggle and freedom worth watching. (It would be better if there is a love line) Hey~ [blowing kiss]

The further I read, the more interesting it becomes. I personally have never seen a sadistic novel, and I never thought it would be so painful. However, this painful feeling not only made me extremely sympathetic to the experience of the characters in it, but also made me feel suffocated and powerless from beginning to end. It also made me remember their spirit and behavior fresh. While reading this book, I also constantly understood myself. When I read this book, I wondered why I felt so uncomfortable. I was afraid of bad endings, I was afraid of pain, and I felt powerless. Maybe I was invisible and transparent in real life, just to protect my fragile heart. I thought I was very independent, but this may not be the real me. Maybe that's why I read some cool and refreshing articles at the beginning, or less sadistic articles. I should be afraid of losing, so I long for beauty, such pure innocence, I want to protect it, I want to create that beauty, that pure warmth. At this moment, I really felt that I had been living under the mask of "independence". Maybe I couldn't understand this sentence deeply in the past. I thought that my heart was strong. Perhaps independent people are constantly making progress, even if there is no definite future, even if this road will be difficult to walk. On the other hand, I pretended not to care, but because of the reluctance in my heart, I actually still cared. Recently I felt that I was in a very sluggish state, and then I accidentally saw a popular science video saying that people who are stagnant and have no motivation are without love or hate, but I don't feel that my family owes me anything. Maybe this state is what I need, not what I dream of. But maybe the emptiness in my heart, the self-independence I show to the outside world, maybe no one can be deceived in the end. It doesn't make much sense to say too much, but this book did give me some thoughts. I am looking forward to the next plot. This may be my first time. Of the 6 or 7 novels I have listened to or read before, none of them gave me such a real feeling as this book. Even if I understand my feelings better, so what, I may still be someone who just knows but doesn't know how to put it into practice and is afraid of taking a step forward. What attracted me was not only the experiences of the characters, but also the courage the author wrote about them. The reality is cruel and the story is sad, but what really touches my heart is not the suffering itself, but the fact that they still choose to go on despite being afraid and not knowing what the future will be like. Maybe it's to live, maybe it's for freedom, maybe it's for the tribe, maybe it's even for the important people. Their reasons for moving forward kept changing, but they never stopped. Maybe reality will not always give people a good ending. It is indeed a difficult road to walk for the freedom of the demon servants, but they all try their best to do what they can. I think it is precisely because of their courage to go on even if they don't know the result or the future that I will never forget it. What a flesh-and-blood story and characters

It's very interesting. The plot is delicate and has foreshadowing. However, the introduction scared me off before. I was afraid that it would be a very sad and heart-wrenching plot so I didn't read it. This book shouldn't have such a low score. Maybe it's the introduction that scares people away. And how come this book is on the male channel list? ? ? ? ? ?

The description is very good. Xue Han is so pitiful. I dare not read the if line. The main line is very sad. I look forward to being myself again soon in the future. I couldn't help but watch it (it's really sad, and it's really annoying to be unable to control myself). My favorability towards Isaac and his father has dropped significantly😡😡😡, I need a new CP to heal me😭 After thinking about it carefully, Isaac is essentially good, but he was assimilated into society without the protection of Xue Han. The culprit is still his father Renault😭

In terms of content, the entire book first describes the pain of the demon servant from the protagonist's own perspective, and then leads to the main line of liberating the demon servant, but it is also interspersed with the love for the good master (Lao Ai) (still not very calm), and the description of the stories of the people he meets (with the author's own thoughts and opinions) (the content unfolds bit by bit, from individuals to the entire world) In terms of writing, as the story progresses, the author's descriptions become richer and more delicate, and his descriptions of characters, scenes, and psychological activities become more diverse and precise. As for the rating, the author's content and style are indeed unique, and naturally he will be judged. However, I believe that if you continue reading, you will gain a variety of new feelings and develop your own understanding and insights.

It's good-looking, non-toxic, and the plot advances smoothly. This is a good furry book worth recommending. At present, I feel that the protagonist is too miserable (the author, you bastard, didn't you say that you are slightly abusive to the protagonist? [Crying] You call this "nue bu si" ni) [face covering]"), in general, the plot does have great potential, and it is a good book worth trying. I fell in love with this book, and I have joined the group. I only hope that this book will prosper. Well, who is here to visit [you take a closer look]

It's very beautiful and exciting. It's rare to see this kind of subject matter and write it well. I hope the author will continue to persevere! ! ! I just want to ask if Xue Han was called Xue Han because Renault was deliberately trying to show off to him, or if it just highlighted the low status of the demon servant [Thinking]

I feel that this book has surpassed many Tomato system furry novels so far. It is already an excellent novel about orcs worthy of being on the gold digger's bookshelf and looking forward to it every day. But what I'm more curious about is whether it means the end of the story when the protagonist is free or at least close to freedom. What other thoughts does the author have? After all, one person's story is too small compared to the entire world of orcs, and the content that can be expanded is very huge. Level of writing to convey the truth: good Sense of world immersion: relatively good (personally, I don't think the Western fantasy flavor is too strong) Rhythm and reading smoothness: Excellent Update frequency: high! (I recall the days when I used to look for Pony fanfics everywhere and wait for the author to update them. Monthly, quarterly or even yearly updates would be released every day when I went home and read Fimtale, flipping through the weekly newsletter and Pony Pony recommendations) I personally hope that the author can keep writing, and it is also acceptable for the author to stop and take a break and think about it from time to time, and not lose his grace and level and disappear from everyone just for the sake of two updates a day.

My writing style is not as bad as mine. The author is definitely not as casual as me in learning Chinese. This is my first time reading this kind of recommendation book. To me it is relatively novel, with a unique perspective and fascinating perspective. Support the author. I'll update it when it's finished tomorrow. Haha [thinking]

The quality is very good, and it is considered excellent among the bookshelf I have read. There is basically nothing wrong with the writing, plot, content, and characters. It looks good.

It feels very novel. I have never read this type of novel before, and the writing style is also very good. It always makes people want to follow it. I hope the author will work harder! Quick update [blowing kiss]

I feel that the author's writing style is so good that you can't help but feel immersed in the emotions of the protagonist. The world view is well depicted and you can intuitively imagine that kind of world. At first, I thought that writing this kind of article would be overwhelming, and it would be pure sadism. But in the end, I found a treasure trove of characters, and the portrayal of the protagonist's mentality is surprising. After reading it, I feel that I still have more to say and look forward to the author's updates.

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This novel is very good, it reminds me of "Rebirth as Experimental Subject: Escape from the Laboratory" I read before

It's cool, but why not include dwarves? "Dwarves are actually a kind of Furui, because they are short and hairy, so they are actually a group of drunken old moles." (If you see this text on this piece of armor that is about to be hammered to pieces, it means that the owner of the armor is being hunted by a group of small creatures that love hammers) It's okay, even though I continued to torture right after I finished, at least Lao Han has made some progress.

The whole story has great stamina, the characters are vivid and soulful, the plot is completely laid out, and the writing is smooth and comfortable. There is no bloody conflict deliberately, and the emotional expression is restrained and strong. After reading it, I can't calm down for a long time. It is a good book that I will read back again and again. I highly recommend it. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

If nothing else, I guess the author is a white-haired man (white hair and red pupils yo😋 (Xue Han's name is so funny🤔) It's really good-looking. It's non-toxic and non-toxic. The author should be an old reader and he has a good grasp of the organization and context. It's a pity that I'm not very good at watching it, so I can only taste it slowly, watch it for a while and take a break.

The story is really well written. I look forward to showing more of the world view. I feel that the only way to liberate the demon servants is to liberate productivity and force new production relations to eliminate the old system through more advanced productivity. Slaves who are absolutely obedient are definitely not as good as free workers. I just don't know how to show it reasonably in this fantasy world. Come on, author [laughs]