Adventure in Another World: I Used Cavalry and Slashing to Raise a Legendary Army

It's a bit interesting. I thought it was a child's play adventure group of four or five people upgrading to fight the devil. I didn't expect it to be a corps style, and it's not the old-fashioned lord start. It's a good article if you write new ideas. It's above the grain and grass level. Highly recommended.

It can be written well, with logic and writing style, not too poisonous. The writing in the back is too watery, especially the part about taking a boat and driving the map. I haven't finished writing it yet. I estimate that I will write more than 30 pictures. There are many typos and sentences. I seriously doubt that the AI expansion of the water in the later part is serious. The adventure plot written in the new chapter is really good. I have written chapter 30 for half a month and I still haven't finished the task. There are few updates and I like to slow down the pace. I have no motivation to follow the book. I originally thought it would not be so good in the future.

It's a DND-like adventure story from another world. It's not invincible, but it's not frustrating either. Some people may find the progress slow, but I think it's just right. It's great. Keep up the good work!

This is one of the better western fantasy novels I read on Tomato recently, and it is a large army battle that I like. In addition, I support having a female protagonist. In this kind of novel, without a female protagonist, it is like an emperor without a queen. For those who get one-star negative reviews when they hear that there is a female protagonist, in reality, they are probably poor people who have been cheated by the female protagonist and got ptsd. They will turn left when they go out.

Ram, team, cooperation, adventure, equipment, management, development, friendship, love, family affection, and dog repair. I love it so much. I haven't read such a good adventure novel in a long time. It's a very good fantasy adventure. That is, can the author [learn] [learn] [learn] faster?

It's good-looking, one of the few high-quality adventure novels about Stealing Horse Heads, and the plot and character descriptions are very good [laughs]

I have read 64 chapters so far. The author writes very well. The system is reasonable and not mindless. The actions and thoughts of the protagonist are also very good. He even has the qualities of a hero. After all, he is willing to invest in himself and his subordinates. The story written is also very good and can be lyrical. It is the best otherworld adventure novel I have ever seen. See how long you have been watching

It looks good, the cavalry and slashing system adds poisonous milk powder to the world view, the taste of the battle group is great, I can definitely say that it is the grade of Pendor, the background of the Western Fantasy is also very good-looking and tastes very good, I can only say that it tastes great [Blow kiss]

Beautiful, really beautiful 1. I don't have teammates with cerebral palsy, and I handle interpersonal relationships very well. Second, I don't suffer any losses. Except for being cheated at the beginning, I have never suffered any losses. 3. Slowly level up, you can feel good, and you won't be invincible immediately like in the Invincible novel, and then you will be kicked in the nose and face for a long time to find out that you are still a waste. The protagonist is the kind of person who handles interpersonal relationships very well. He will not be like a chuunibyou, nor will he blame others. I think this is very good. Four world views, the world view is very good, not so depressing, everything is prosperous, the goblins do not write about how women are treated and then start to pity them, the goblins are also valuable, and they will not lose money. Ok, that's all, I hope you can keep it up in the future, just don't be too big, it's okay if you can change it after you come, my requirements are very low [rolls eyes]

It's a pretty good novel, and the world view is obviously huge, but it feels like it might have been influenced by the game? The author prefers to take his time. After writing hundreds of thousands of words, there are still less than 100 people. I feel that the development of the protagonist is very slow. I feel that the pace can be sped up.

This book can be said to be perfectly written. Among the novels I have read, many authors have good literary talent at the beginning, but once they finish writing the beginning, they don't know how to deal with the trivial content in the big chapters. The author of this book handles it very well. There will be no show-off or other bloody plots, and there are no sudden accidents that cause plot changes. Overall, this book is worth pursuing.

The latest 83 chapters, a book with a strong Western Fantasy spirit, made me miss the time when I used to play the old-fashioned Api sent to Mu. The category... The pace is slow, the writing is stilted, the description is okay, and the emotional line is blurry. Generally speaking, if you like Western Fantasy, it is not a loss, so I will give you five stars for encouragement. ☕

It's a super high-quality article about riding a golden finger. It's very good. It's rare in Tomatoes.

The evaluation is "Xiancao", brother, it is simply amazing. It covers all aspects of farming, adventure, fighting, and growth. It is top-notch, brother. It is better than some farming articles written at 7:00. This allows me to read it for free. I can finally understand the feelings of those who dig for gold in the rocks. It is so cool. It is too early for me to read. I finished reading it in one day I watched it again. It's not enough. Brother, can you work hard and strive for 10,000 yuan?

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It's well written, nothing too sinister. I hope the author can keep writing. The protagonist's outlook on life is normal and he won't be unable to walk when he sees a girl. Gold coins obtained will be converted into combat equipment in time. I've seen more than 80 chapters and so far it's pretty good.

Quite good, especially the sense of improvement as the team continues to develop. The plot is well controlled and it definitely deserves five stars on Tomato. The update is also relatively stable, with one chapter during the day and one chapter at night, distributed regularly.

The Diary of Preparations for the Emperor's Great Expedition, disguised as a cavalryman, a different world, and DND. It looks good. I feel like I want to shout something. What's going on? For the Emperor! ! ! Wait, I seem to have yelled wrongly. On the brass throne, sacrifice your blood to the blood god, sacrifice your skull to the skull throne, and offer endless blood and war to the supreme existence! ! !

Legion-oriented articles rely on adding points to add points to yourself and your brothers in the team. The character description shows that the protagonist is quite decent and the supporting characters are honest. However, the protagonist's portrayal is not deep enough, and the supporting characters are also relatively flat and cookie-cutter. But this platform is worth watching. Other reviews mentioned that the poison spot accepted addicts into the team, which was okay, because in the beginning, it was based on the attitude that they could be free if they were somewhat useful, and the rogue behind was indeed useful. Still the same problem, when writing about brotherly love, it's not bad, don't abandon, don't give up. When writing about feelings and the heroine, I also add the time spent getting along with her. Suddenly the flavor changed, I felt something weird that I couldn't describe, so I inserted the whole paragraph and felt weird. The problematic heroine design is quite likable and useful, but the way the male and female protagonists interact with each other in the novel gave me a strange feeling for some reason. Maybe it's because the military novel suddenly changed to the feeling of a mom-and-pop business. The male protagonist suddenly became more popular, and the female protagonist suddenly became more delicate. When they were not in love, they shined in their respective fields, but when they were in love, they suddenly became too ordinary, and their auras were completely lost. I don't know why.

It reads very smoothly, and the combat process is well written. If you have played horse-and-blade, you are in for a treat. The sense of immersion is full. The protagonist has fully developed his medical skills first. Just like me who just joined the game, I could not die even if I had to endure three hours. If you have not played horse-and-blade, the combination of the author's excellent world view and the unfolding of the plot can firmly attract your attention. In summary, the quality is high, and book lovers who like riding and cutting, war, upgrading, and farming can read it without thinking. The only drawback is that the author is currently very slow, with not many words, and the worldview is only slowly unfolding. I can only say that the future is promising.

The writing is good, but it feels like the use of AI is very obvious from the middle, and the whole writing style has been changed... All the interesting daily routines are gone because AI can't write them yet, so all that's left is killing killing killing... Upgrade and continue

A very good horse-and-blade Western fantasy novel. It is not procrastinating, and does not deliberately include some cerebral hemorrhage content. The author writes very well and has clear ideas, especially the description of the economic aspect. The author writes very clearly and is not confusing. The economic description of this book is the best I feel. The combat aspect is also very smooth and not sloppy. Goldfinger is more biased toward horse-and-chopping. The training of the protagonist team is closer to the bells of the bell, which is very detailed. This book is a new star that will eventually shine in Tomato

A very good adventure article. The protagonist is a qualified leader. He gets to know his companions during the adventure, feels growth and bonding, and looks for treasures and adventures. The plot is quite acceptable [Thinking][Thinking][Like]

The plot and rhythm settings are very good, and the protagonist's character is also good, and he should be tough or cowardly. Pushing and pushing, not the kind of mindless shaved ice, but not the kind of crazy suppression, anyway, the rhythm of the increase in combat power is just right. The whole plot looks very comfortable

So far, the look and feel is very good. First of all, I am a loyal fan of DNF, Baldur's Gate, and Dungeons & Dragons. The combat descriptions in it are also very good. The preparation before the battle does not include sudden changes in power and various instant kills. Every battle is based on collecting intelligence first and proceeding step by step. The protagonist does not have amazing talents or attributes at the beginning. Generally speaking, the protagonist in the early stage is just a warrior and an adventurer with a relatively strong career. ////What I want to say next is to the author. I don't know if the author has any plans to supplement the world view in the future, including more descriptions of races in this plane world, gods, level training adventure system, determination of various equipment magic, etc. I would like to ask the author, is the background template you use based on the 5e rules in Baldur's Gate? What is the starting point of each attribute for ordinary people at 10 points? The upper limit is 20 points? If you want to break through 20 points, the ceiling must be set unless there are other external forces, such as taking alchemical items, magic props, or breaking through on your own. However, the protagonist has a system and should not be restricted by these 20 points and single attributes. Author, please reply to me [laughing] [sending heartfelt messages]

Chapter 335 is my first time reading a riding and slashing novel. I feel very good. I read the latest chapter in one go. It has a western fantasy background and feels like a medieval warhammer. The most comfortable part is that the pig's feet will encounter big events, but they will not be the center of the big events. It will not be like some novels where pig's feet explode wherever they go. Big events chase the pig's feet. In this book, the pig's feet take the initiative to participate in big events (compare The royal capital is actually not that big 😂), and it is only a peripheral participation. You can retreat at any time when you reap the benefits. There is no sense of compulsion like other books where you are led by fate and forcefully go down. I look forward to the author's future performance, such as whether the mentioned dungeon will appear later, and whether there will be adventures in other continents. God feels that there is no need to participate so early, and it is good to continue to be the background.

It's nice and comfortable to watch, but it updates too slowly. It would be better if there were multiple female protagonists

Adventure in another world: I used cavalry and slashing to raise a legendary army I really want to write something. The mercenary group in the Western Fantasy World is not a dungeon. It is expected to compete for hegemony in the later stage. I don't know if there will be farming. Goldfinger is very powerful, the narrative style is relatively bright, and overall it is quite relaxing. In terms of characterization, the protagonist has a certain bottom line, is relatively mature in his actions, and sometimes has a bit of a flamboyant personality. This character is not bad. But sometimes it has the exaggerated characteristics of the second dimension. Of course, this is a web article, so it's acceptable. 4 And a half to 5 stars.

Very good, there are no common poisonous points in army literature, such as the exponential expansion of the number of people, the so-called collective pressure on the protagonist's combat power, and the flattening of combat power. The minor problems now are that the pace is slow and updates are slow and improvements are slow. There is no clear main line or at least it cannot be felt, and the whole team is running around but drifting with the flow. Now there are just signs of dual-career employment. Either speed up or add updates, otherwise it is really impossible to catch up.

The whole thing is very good. The spokesperson of Bucket Number But it is also realistic that physical strength and agility restrict each other. It is recommended to add the so-called grading of proficiency. Fans of QQ and DND are not very adaptable to this kind of proficiency. I don't know what level it is at. There are also constraints on the core attributes of mages and other professions, such as physical fitness, agility, perception, etc. It will be more comfortable to write a small chapter to talk about the settings (there is only a little content, so it is okay to put it in the main text)