HP: Slytherin's Wizard of the East

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was heard and the tears will not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

Not bad. Many things in the plot are novel, but the characterization is rather stereotyped. When it comes to my mother from beginning to end, I can only remember her cooking, cooking, cooking. The descriptions in some places feel repetitive. For example: This time XX is more XX than before, and it can appear multiple times in one article. Overall, it's easy to see

Cute, Xuan Bao and Xiao Long are very cute, and the light daily life is also very beautiful, Draco

After reading so many Harry Potter fan stories about Chinese cultivation of immortality, I felt that the protagonist was not written very well. The protagonist has some insights into his own cultivation of immortality. It is not simply a combination of Chinese and Western, but a specific point-by-point penetration of the similarities and differences between the Western magic system and the Chinese immortality system in the text, as well as where they can be connected. This is beyond my expectation. (There are still relatively few chapters, I hope this can be expanded upon) The author's writing style is very good, and the pace is not slow. It is a relatively smooth daily life, and it just follows the original plot. There are no major changes to the characters in the original text (not Malfoy, in my opinion). It's really easy to get bored by giving so much plot to Malfoy, but the author didn't say [face covering]. Overall, I'm looking forward to it. It's a long way to catch up.

Not bad, but there are too few updates. At the end of it, it feels like a two-male protagonist [licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen]

It's tied, the writing is very calm, the plot has no bugs, it revolves around how the protagonist, a Taoist priest from the East, learns and integrates in the magic academy, opening up a new path. The protagonist's ability in the article is not awkward but coincident. The three protagonists are friends with each other. The two male CP should be Draco. I feel that it should be the main focus of the article. The CP is also very good and the two get along very cutely. Now I am in the third grade and I am looking forward to the follow-up development.

Good-looking🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭Damn it, tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose. It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. 😊I run, I jump. I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. 😮It makes me realize that God does exist. I feel so good that I cry. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock of vegetative people 😨 I can see the tears flowing from the corners of my mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so good that my tears did not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water 😃

It's good-looking, with two male protagonists, but I think I really need to research the fertility potion. I may not respond to other stories, but this one seems to be different. The protagonist and Malfoy are both only children. If they really want to be together, the family will be ruined, unless the parents work hard to create it, but it feels unlikely.

The writing is calm and eloquent. The writing style is good and the article is logically logical. It feels like I have read a new HP. The protagonist's character is very mature, and he talks like a big brother. He feels that his mental age is much more mature than his peers. It's like he is teasing a child. The protagonist is a very powerful scholar. He is a master of Chinese and Western knowledge at a young age. He is the best at learning everything. He is able to learn by analogy and has a deep understanding. He is born to do this, hahaha. He is so strong that his classmates don't dare to bully him and can only admire him. Then the highlight for both men is probably to be with my roommate Lao Ma [you can taste it carefully]. This is a cool article. The protagonist has always been the best. He has been admired by professors all the way. He is a future star in the magical world [Thinking]

The collision of Eastern Taoism and Western magic concepts is very innovative and waiting to be fattened up.

It's particularly beautiful, and the pull between Zhou Xuan and Draco is particularly exciting. Because the two are still young, a little progress between them can make people scream, it's completely pure love. All I can say is that it's simply not enough.

I thought it was a non-CP story, but I didn't expect it to be a two-male protagonist🤔. This type of subject matter seems more suitable for writing a non-CP story, and it's not easy to be OOC. However, the author's writing style is pretty good. I'm looking forward to the following plots. It would be great if I could update 100 chapters in one day [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

Good! Very good! As a person who has been involved in the Internet literature circle for many years, what I value is not the plot, or I value the plot far less than the logical narrative of the story and the expression of ideas. The idea is very novel, many emotional words are used just right, and the story logic is completely self-consistent. This section of the ghost shows what I value most, the blend of heaviness and innovation. I like it very much, full marks. Hope you can stick with it. For your dreams and for the readers' dreams.

A treasure book, the story is told eloquently, the writing is very good, and there are no sentences that make me embarrassed. I like the protagonist's character very much

Already tied [sending heart] [sending heart] It's so beautiful! The little dragon written by the author is so cute🥰🥰The emotional line with Zhou Xuan is so natural, I also like the plot, and the daily life is also warm [Send heart][Send heart] Come on, keep writing [Send heart][Send heart]

Funny, the beginning of another story, the shock of not being able to be in the same hospital after meeting [laughing] the cute Malfoy

What a treasure! The writing style is very comfortable, and the combination of Eastern and Western cultures is very appropriate. It can be seen that the author has a pretty good literary background. The protagonist is strong but not too exaggerated, and his personality really pokes fun at me. He feels like a very reliable big brother~(^з^)-☆ The interaction with Malfoy was cute, and the emotional line was relatively slow. I hope to see more of the relationship between the two little ones [blowing kiss] Wow! The various little actions after confessing love are so sweet! ! ! Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [blowing kiss]

One of the labels that attracted me was "bi-male". I am really a bookworm, and I have not read the book "Harry Potter". I have only been exposed to it online (perhaps the movie). Judging from the current progress, Malfoy should be the other male protagonist, right? I declare that the Sorting Hat is the biggest contributor! The real feelings are still too delicate. Although I just feel that the age is a bit hard to say, the rest are very good!

Immortal product! ! ! Just choose Erwin's character! ! ! Super super sweet ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! The collision of Eastern and Western cultures is very touching, and it is closer to the original work [laughing] Come on [blowing kiss]

I'm super satisfied, I finally found an article with a novel theme and good writing! The two of them get along so sweetly! Malfoy is a completely tsundere type and the two of them are perfect together! Never let me stand against you

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It's beautiful to watch. The fusion of Eastern and Western cultures is great. It's worth a visit.

Zhou Xuan's character is good, he is a typical calm and rational Asian, I like him! !

It's really good to read, and there are no kid rampant like those in the HP circle. However, I haven't read the original book. I plan to read the original book after reading this one, or watch the movie first. This book made me very interested in the Harry Potter book. The protagonist of this book, Elvin Selwyn, or Zhou Xuan, has a very good character. His rational, loyal, hard-working, courageous, motivated and other precious qualities are all reflected in him. It can be said to be a comprehensive version of the four major colleges. It is hard not to like.

This book is quite delicious. Logical and Reasonable Thinking Online. I personally feel that there are no brainless plots, which is consistent with common sense. Teachers who are interested can try to read it without cp. I think the biggest reason why this book is not rated high may be that the cover is not particularly attractive. I quite like it and I don't have any discomfort. Summary: Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! I love teachers 😘 I'm wrong. Teachers have cp. Some have cp [sending heartfelt wishes]

The protagonist is really well portrayed, and the little details of the back-and-forth between the two are very interesting! ! I'm not a patient person, so this is the first time I've read all of this book on Tomato and I'm following it! ! I hope the author will continue to work hard and maybe add ten chapters a day!

It's a great book, very logical, really worth reading. It's really really really good to read. Please read this book, okay? It's really beautiful and the author writes it very seriously. I beg you all to read it, okay?

Shocking and delicious... I cried when I saw it 😭 The source of my life... The author, please don't stop updating! I love you... I saw that the rating was too low, so I came to support... Boss, don't think that no one is watching and abandon us😭😭😭

A very new setting allows people to understand Malfoy from a new perspective and see magic from a Chinese perspective.

Beautiful, very logical, not exaggerated at all