After Spoilers, Lin Daiyu Wants to Tear up the Script of Red Mansions

The characters of Daiyu and Baochai are a bit OOC, which strengthens the identity of the protagonist and the vicious female supporting character, but the plot is very good, logical and thoughtful, the other character settings are also very good, a bit refreshing, and the writing is very smooth. But some plots are so boring. Watching two or three women fighting over one man is not interesting at all. It's all about watching the heroine's growth and career. Writing about other women's female rivalry cannot highlight how indifferent and sober the heroine is.

The writing is quite good👍👍👍Other readers' comments on Daiyu's desire to save the Jia family. I think the reason given by the author (Daiyu is based on the friendship between Jia Min and the Jia family) is logical. People are not grass and trees, and no one can be ruthless. Everyone in the Jia family takes advantage of Daiyu, but there is indeed emotion in it. In addition, the author's writing style is very good, not in vernacular, but full of ancient charm, which is my favorite style❤️❤️❤️

Tied Chapter 77, the author is a capable person, the writing is very good, and what the author hates is exactly what I hate, such as Xue Baochai, Xi Ren, Mrs. Wang... I am so happy to see Baochai being fucked🥳 Deducting one star, I feel that I am not getting married for the sake of not getting married. If there is no suitable person, I can choose not to get married, but if I meet the suitable and good person, Daiyu can definitely get married. The author also wrote that the prince's family is very good and likes Daiyu, so why not get married? In those days, if you didn't get married, you would have to endure too many rumors. Couldn't Daiyu be happy?

The heroine of Reborn House Fight couldn't bear to save her twelve hairpins, she worried about her sister's maid's marriage, she was invincible and she killed the prince, the prince, the prince and the high-ranking officials' sons fell in love with me one after another...

It's very interesting, with clear logic and good writing style. It's not easy to write a Dream of Red Mansions fanfic, but this book doesn't make people feel that the style of the painting changes suddenly. The plot is very smooth, and I don't feel aggrieved or aggrieved at all. I don't like some writings about Daiyu having an extra brother or younger brother, as if Daiyu's melancholy, talent, and twists and turns in her fate are all because of the bad life of every man. With Yaozu protecting her, her future suddenly becomes brighter. In this book, Daiyu can stand up and be strong purely by herself. This is also in line with my understanding of Daiyu's character. A girl who can survive the death of her parents and be eaten and wiped under the roof of others can still have her own personality. A girl who is neither humble nor arrogant must have her own wisdom and courage. Highly recommended! (If you like Baoyu, Baochai's may not be suitable)

It's a tie in one day. It's really good to watch. I found out that the plot of the original book was about Daiyu, but it made me feel extra novel and happy. The author's good literary skills and love for Daiyu can be clearly seen between the lines. Daiyu is here In this book, there will no longer be a mangosteen who just wants to repay his tears, but the Lord of Jiashan County who can truly control his own destiny. He has walked a path to heaven in this huge palace that is absolutely different from that of "Lin Daiyu". I look forward to the stories in the future of this book. Come on, author, you write really well! !

I finally tied it. I have more than ten years of reading experience and I really like "Dream of Red Mansions", so I came here to comment. Personally, I like this article very much. First, while Lin Daiyu was working hard to save herself, she did not forget those innocent women in Rongguo Mansion. Wang Xifeng, Sanchun, and Shi Xiangyun were all trying their best to save them. Second, the timeline is consistent with the original work. If there are differences, the author will also give hints. This will not cause drama. Third, the author's writing style has some ancient charm, which will be very enjoyable for those who like this type of writing. Of course, this article also has some minor flaws: some plot connections are not natural enough. But overall, the flaws are not hidden, and it is still a good article. I will keep pursuing it! The author, please work hard to write more articles. It is best to write more every day [smile][smile]

Why isn't it five stars? ! I want to recommend this book to everyone [crying] [crying] [crying] Not to mention how good Daiyu is, the group portraits written by the author are so wonderful, and they become more exciting as they go by [crying] It's really painful to wait for updates.

It's very interesting to watch. It's a tie in one breath. The author's settings and warnings have already been mentioned. If you can accept it, it's worth watching! The writing style is very natural and smooth, which is better than 90% of Red Mansion fans on the market!

The writing is very passable. When I saw Hei Baochai, I clicked in.

Daiyu, who is self-reliant, rational, not internally dissatisfied, and beautiful on her own, is very powerful. It doesn't matter who you are, the prince, the third flower, the three-yuan family, get out of the way, don't affect me. Daiyu is beautiful alone, and it feels good when she scolds Baoyu. The characters are distinct, not OOC, I would rather donate all the money than leave it to the Jia family. I have seen the true face of Jia Mu clearly, and I hope to keep it like this.

I dare to comment only if I tie it, it is definitely a very good article. I usually read paid articles on other platforms. The writing logic of this book is completely different from free articles, and it is not bad even if it is placed on other paid platforms. What I am most satisfied with is that this Lin Daiyu novel has no CP. After reading too many official fanfics, I always feel that Lin Daiyu is better without CP.

As long as you can accept the author's warning at the beginning, then this book is really worth reading. The author's writing is good and the story line is smooth. So far, I don't think there is anything particularly OOC. It's tied. Please post a new comment. It's really good. The author's writing skills are guaranteed online.

The author writes well, but the last few chapters made me want to cry. In the recent chapters, Daiyu was always forced to go to one house or sent to that house. No matter where she was, she was wronged. I felt so lonely and at a loss. Although there are people who care about her in this world, she doesn't seem to have a home where she can truly feel at ease. Everyone is separated from her by one layer. The front page is very nice and the writing is great! There are some small things at the back that are OOC. I am a little bit sensitive personally, but overall it looks great. Next I would like to share my personal opinion. First of all, I support women's pursuit of happiness, whether they are single or married, as long as they are happy. Lin Daiyu in this book has no family members. As I said at the beginning, everyone is separated from her. Jia's mother put her behind her, and her grandmother's best friend put his offspring in front of her... So, whether it was because of the closed-society worldview of Dream of Red Mansions, or because I wanted her to have emotional sustenance (having close people to share her joys and sorrows, someone to stand with her on the same line), I wanted her to have someone she could rely on occasionally. For ordinary people, it's okay to recruit a son-in-law or a wife. Anyway, this is a novel, so you can just write a perfect and warm man for Daiyu (anyway, there are already many men who like Daiyu in the previous article, right?). For elders, it is okay to ask her to recognize her as a stepmother. I really wanted to give her someone close to her, and write about a woman with a similar family situation to hers. It would be good for the two of them to redeem each other. Why do I want her to have "sustenance" so desperately instead of being the "big heroine"? Because there is no conflict between the two. First of all, we can see that Daiyu is an emotional person. It can be seen from the original Dream of Red Mansions that Daiyu yearns for and believes in love; some of the contents of this book, such as the gratitude and admiration for her grandmother's friend, the love for several sisters, the teenage emotions for the grandson of her grandmother's friend, and the hope and disappointment for Jia Mu, all show that she attaches great importance to feelings, so why let such a person go on alone in the Lin Mansion? This has changed two things about the helpless woman in the original work: her mood has become tougher, and she has more support. I think it's good, but it would be better if the emotional needs could be fleshed out a little bit. The second is ability. No matter how big the cards are, no matter how solid the backing is, for Lin Daiyu, who is alone, she is still a bit guilty and cannot guarantee that she will continue to go smoothly. If the emperor wants the remaining money of the Lin family, and if someone wants to use some means to force Lin Daiyu to submit, what will Lin Daiyu do? The newly updated Jia Mu forced her and Jia Baoyu to cook the rice. I can see it here. She is not capable enough, and no matter how powerful her identity is, she can't stop many crises. Of course, that doesn't mean that marrying a man can solve all problems. I just saw the paragraph in the article where it said no one could help her, and I wanted someone to help her. I support both male and female elders. Some people may say that this is a novel. It can write less about the hardships and the money the emperor wants from Lin Daiyu, so that the above problems can be solved. But I can tell from the book that there are still conflicts between the late emperor and the emperor, and there are also plots in this book. The late emperor even wanted the Lin family's money from the beginning. So I would panic. The above is just my own opinion.

The rating is only 7.1? It will definitely increase in the future. It's been a long, long time since I've seen a novel that made me feel the same way as the characters in the book, and I didn't deliberately belittle one party without thinking, and just go along with the flow to give the girls a good ending [Like]

Why am I tied again [crying] I am very good at writing, the plot is innovative but not clichéd, the writing is graceful but not lost in the ancient charm, the characters are deeply drawn, and the summary is just not enough! And I feel that with Shi Xiangyun's stubborn head, the ending will probably not be too good, which is a bit sad.

This book breaks the tragic fate of the original work and gives Lin Daiyu the ability to rewrite the ending. She not only saves herself, but also saves the girls in the Grand View Garden. It perfectly makes up for the regrets in my heart, and the plot is smooth and the characters are relatively fitting.

Wow, it's really pretty. It's the feeling I want. Sister Lin is so good. She's talented, beautiful, and a loyal servant with wealth and substance. She's someone everyone will like hhh. Don't be too easy~ But in my personal opinion, no cp For Sister Lin, she is still a bit lonely. After all, the people she interacts with are all for one reason or another. In the end, she will not be with her. Even if she holds a child and raises it by herself, I feel that it is best for her to have someone accompany her to know the cold and warmth, and talk about the past and autumn. But this is my personal feeling. Maybe I am still too secular [shy] but the author's article is very good. I think it is the feeling I want. Sister Lin is so good, she should live her whole life as she pleases [shy] Come on, I have to catch up until the end.

Dear readers, you are here to read the novel, and you won't lose money by investing in it! ! ! Dear readers, you are here to read the novel, and you won't lose money by investing in it! ! ! Dear readers, you are here to read the novel, and you won't lose money by investing in it! ! ! I am a reader who has been following updates. I feel that the experience is very good so far. There is nothing uncomfortable or unbearable. If you have any reasonable suggestions to the author, they will be considered and accepted; The plot is relatively reasonable, Daiyu is very sober and cautious, not a super brainless slap-in-the-face story, nor does she feel aggrieved at everything and be restricted in everything she does. The most important thing is that Daiyu is single! ! ! (Some other second-generation novels are also very good, but I can't bear to be paired with a man, no matter how good I am. Even if I am the king of heaven, I will not be worthy of Sister Lin) (and is currently single. Although there are descriptions of suitors, who can not be fascinated by our Daiyu? The key is that Daiyu has no idea of ​​getting married. Whether she will continue to be single in the future will affect whether I want to continue pursuing articles); The writing style is also very good, unlike some Red Mansions novels that feel weird to read and speak like modern people pretending to be ancient people (it is not specific to any other Red Mansions novels); The plots written so far include: Daiyu gets the inheritance of the Lin family, becomes the head of Jiashan County, stays away from Jia Baoyu, takes Xiren under her command, etc. I won't spoil the rest (it's definitely not that I forgot while watching.), To reiterate: Dear readers, you are here to read the novel, and you won't lose money by investing in it! ! !

It's good to read, this book Daiyu is very sober, she planned for herself early and got rid of the control of the elders of the Jia family. Miharu's portrayal is also very good. Although it is very different from the original work due to the subtle influence of Daiyu, the character design is not OOC.

In the beginning, I was actually very disgusted with fanfics in Dream of Red Mansions, but the author wrote it really well. It is true that there were so many situations in the original work that made me uncomfortable, but I didn't notice it. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot and the new life of the characters.

It's so beautiful that I unknowingly tied it. The rating is too low. It must be praised with five stars! The author is updating a lot, woo woo woo, it's too hard to bear a little bit every day. I'm saving up but I'm afraid I'll forget the previous plot. If you're tired, author, please update two chapters [shy]

I don't know why the score is so low, but it is really well written. The author must have read Dream of Red Mansions many times. Everything is very logical and he prefers Daiyu Baby. Every morning when I open my eyes, I read updated chapters. I keep following them and look forward to more updates.

The author's writing skills are very strong. It is not a brainless novel. The characters and the timeline of major events are very consistent with the original work. There are no magical changes. It just tied it within a few days [Please update] [Please update] [Please update]

After reading so much about Red Mansion, I really like the author's Daiyu, who is careful at every step, has insight into world affairs, is calm in dealing with things, and has a trace of compassion in her heart, with a sense of divinity. The Daiyu written by the author is the kind of person who is destined to ride the wind and waves, overcome all difficulties, and rise against the wind. Even the difficult situation of the caged bird in the Jia Mansion at the beginning makes people feel that the cage cannot contain it, and sooner or later it will soar into the sky, like a kite that has broken its string and risen into the wind. I also like the motto the author asked the nun to give to Daiyu at the beginning [Adoration][Admiration]

It seems to be very good so far, the writing and logic are all online. It's rare to come across fan fiction that is so close to the original work. Friends who like this type of fiction can just close their eyes and get into the trap [laugh][laugh][laugh] It's no exaggeration, this is the most satisfying Red Mansion fanfic I've read on Tomato [cool][cool][cool]. The characters and plots are all online. The only drawback is that it is not over yet. It is very hard to follow the updates every day [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

It looks like a very comfortable book. The writing is mixed with white and white, a bit like a vernacular novel, and the characters are not too OOC in my personal opinion. I can tie it up in one go. Good luck, author!

It's almost tied now. The author will try his best to update! ! ! I have read a lot of Red Mansions fanfics, but there are very few that are written with both writing style and clear logic without departing from the original plot. At present, the author's plot description and character creation are all biased towards the original characters. I hope it can be maintained in the future! ! ! [Adoration][Admiration][Like][Like]

It's tied. I personally feel very good about it. It's not the kind of time travel to save Daiyu, it's Daiyu's self-rescue story, and it doesn't change into a different person or anything all of a sudden. It feels like there's a step-by-step process. The protagonist is Daiyu, but he's not talking about Daiyu all the time. The communication between the lines, the description of the style of painting is also okay, but you can see, I tied it anyway and plan to finish it.

This is a fanfic about Daiyu that I really like. There are not too many cheats on the system, there are not a lot of family intrigues, there are not a lot of intrigues, and there is no entanglement in romance. It has written the smartest and kindest Daiyu in my mind! The rating is low, it's worth watching!