Preparing for First Love

My copywriting is useless [short story] [Two male protagonists + secret love + two-way running + sweet pet + redemption) The label is wrong, it's not a reunion Food guide: There are knives, not small and not big. The plot spans a long time, and the plot is a bit difficult to write. Remember to leave a review after reading it~ Ruoruo is so cute! [Cold on the outside and hot on the inside, school girl attack x cute, lonely and secretly in love] Wen Jinruo has a secret love guide, and the target person is the much-anticipated school girl of Gaoling - Zhou Yize Wen Jinruo knew Zhou Yize's daily plans better than he did. He knew exactly what he wanted to do and where he wanted to go. As fate would have it, they were assigned to the same dormitory. One evening during a heavy rainstorm, he hid wetly in the bookstore where Wen Jinruo worked. As water droplets rolled down his eyelashes, he suddenly raised his eyes: "Wen Jinruo, you seem to be... Always near me." Cardiac arrest. On the night of the heavy rain, they slept in the same bed for the first time. Wen Jinruo's sleep talk was like a blade, piercing deeply into Zhou Yize's heart. It turns out he is so pitiful. Daddy, the mother who left Since then, Zhou Yize has become Wen Jinruo's savior and boyfriend, and Wen Jinruo has also become Zhou Yize's "pistachio" They became the perfect couple. They chose to become trainees together and debut together. [Wen Jinruo, I am willing to accompany you for the rest of my life, and I want to make up for the gaps you have left. So, will you marry me? ] [I do. ] The author's first book, please give me your advice.