I Have a System. What's Wrong with Saving More of Our Forebears?

Looking forward to the follow-up Here are my personal insights: 1. The pace is still very slow at the moment. It is probably a slow-paced medium-length novel (to be determined), which has now been tied. The focus in the early stage is still on the protagonist returning to the world to learn skills and knowledge. Personally, I still want to see the life on the Long March... The character of the protagonist is still designed with great care. The dialogue between high-level military officials, the arrangement of the protagonist and the description of the follow-up actions can also be seen that the author has considered it and the writing is quite good. Well😖The biggest problem at present is that there are too few hot spots, lack of interesting points, and somewhat boring. I look forward to the author Xiaoqiao thinking to lubricate the full text~ 2. Ennn When I read the mission completion prompts in the first few chapters, I thought I was traveling through a parallel world, but when the old leader Qin Huaiyuan and "Shuguang" his son and father met each other, I was shocked to realize that the protagonist had traveled back in time. It is undeniable that this setting will bring some variables. There are already some micro bugs and paradox problems (type: chicken lays eggs or eggs lays chickens?). The current circle is average (), and the processing is very conservative and quite satisfactory. The subsequent rounding still depends on how the author handles it... 3. I don't deny that the writing style is immature, but it is very unconventional. I didn't click on the author's homepage to look at it – if you are a novice author, this is a good starting point; if you are an author who has written several books, there is still room for improvement. Stacked Armor: A personal review is not a review/demining of the whole book. The focus is more on my own concerns and memory points. Some words are more euphemistic, and it may be biased to treat it as a demining... ---My name is Wang Dachui. This must be the ultimate test for me. I believe it won't be long before I get a promotion and a raise, become general manager, become CEO, marry Bai Fumei, and reach the pinnacle of my life. Thinking about it, I'm still a little excited. ---

I really like this plot! And all the explanations given by the author are very reasonable. I will call the author Brother Art Processing. The first explanation is art processing🤩Getting back to the subject, the plot is generally very good. The protagonist is a very caring young man. Keep up the good work, author!

It's a very interesting novel. First of all, the author writes it well. Secondly, I must like it whenever I encounter this kind of novel. Although I know it is fiction, it also makes up for the regrets in the hearts of most Chinese people.

The writing is very good, and it feels very real. It depicts the scene of the Red Army's Long March, the Long March Road, and the first step of the Long March of thousands of miles. Our party, our ancestors and heroes, the motherland will never forget you, and future generations will not forget you. Pay tribute to the heroic predecessors! Blessings and blessings! I wish my motherland prosperity!

It's a very good book, and the writing style is also relatively delicate. It makes up for past regrets🥺It makes me cry😭

This is not a simple harem battle novel, but a long song about survival, perseverance, inheritance and redemption. The pomegranate tree in Cuiyunxuan has witnessed the dependence in desperate situations; the catkins by the willow stream have carried the wind and frost of half a life. Lin Wanxu's life went from revenge to relief, from self-protection to salvation, and finally turned her own pain into a ladder for thousands of women. There are no perfect protagonists in the book, but they are all flesh and blood; there is no forced perfection, but there is peace of mind everywhere. After reading it, I couldn't calm down for a long time. This is an ancient saying with real soul and power. [Smile][smile]

The writing is very good, and the plot is touching. I wish I could live it. When I was in the second grade of elementary school, the first full-length literary work I read was about the "tragic journey" of the Western Route Army. At that time, just ten years after the founding of the People's Republic of China, I burst into tears. Today's peace and happiness are hard-won!

The score is low, I would say at least 9 points or more. The author's writing is really good. I never follow the article, so I specially created a "follow it on the spot" folder for it! [Like] After reading it, I feel sad, touching, proud and proud. The author's creations are popular and professional, and the writing style is good. Each golden finger reward is particularly creative, not obtrusive or exaggerated, and it also promotes the plot! [Like] I want to seriously praise you. Really, my thoughts have been purified after reading this book! This is the best Anti-Japanese War-themed article I have read this year! It was not an easy journey for us! We should remember history, move forward bravely, and create a future! [Like][Like][Like] When you saw your mother's lantern, you read it several times. This paragraph is no longer a novel. I call it art.

A very touching time travel story, a history that will never be forgotten in the hearts of billions of people in China. Thank you for your hard work. Five stars.

Nice! The writing is more realistic! The system's rewards are timely and practical. The author has a huge IQ of 210 [laughing]