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Very good, very beautiful. It's just that the protagonist is still too weak and has been suppressed. Also, the world line is not clear yet, but the education and training plot is really interesting. In short, I want to watch the education and training [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

This book written by the author is really beautiful. When I was bored and looking for a book in 🍅, this book by the author illuminated me like a ray of light. Whether it is the beautiful writing style or the full and three-dimensional characters, they deeply captured my heart. Based on my careful appreciation of this book, I can only say one thing: Xuan, too Xuan. I also hope that readers can give the author some free encouragement (big bosses who are qualified can give a reward), or even a heart-warming word, which is the best motivation for the author to persist. At the same time, I also hope that the author can persist in updating. I believe you can do it. Come on! Come on! Come on!

It's very interesting, not just a post, the main storyline is quite exciting. The evaluation is: a book that I am willing to continue to read (there are too many books, I can only read a few books a day) [Chigua]

It's pretty good. There are no serious poisonous points. It's a bit routine in the front, but it's okay after you get up. As of now, one of the big bosses on the surface is the woman who came to Tinder, and the demon with the goat's horns and the coffin. It's a bit unknown whether the system is good or bad. As for that The synchronization rate, judging from the guesses in the comment area, it should be something like being snatched away. It depends on how the author wrote it. If it is well written, it is a foreshadowing, if it is not well written, it is a thunder. However, one thing has not been explained clearly. Since everyone who stopped it knows that the flame saint is fake, it makes no sense that the light saint doesn't know? It's also possible that I didn't read it carefully. The above is my opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

The character settings are all good, but I hope the author can deal with the real and fake flame saints as well as the system issues as soon as possible. I personally feel that if these two issues are not dealt with well, it may become a poisonous point.

As of March 10 Well done, the protagonist who is the favorite of the group must stand up and fight back hard! In terms of plot, I hope the author will intersperse some emotional interaction plots between the protagonist and Elise in the main line. I think Yi's current favorability towards the protagonist is a bit artificially high. Relying on just such a small amount of interaction and the legend of a flame saint protecting the light saint is a bit untenable (it is not ruled out that the light saint is a love brain). It can be seen in the supplementary part of the latest plot.

It can be seen that the ending was conceived before, but the process is a bit fast, and there is a suspicion that the ending will be made up in the middle. Other than that, there are no inexplicable little tricks or pain points, so it's still a good book.

I finished reading it in two nights, and after thinking about it for a long time, I could only come up with one awesome sentence. If I really want to say it, this book is logically logical and the foreshadowing is well recycled. Moreover, the author is a super good person and has basically never made any mistakes. The plot is not sloppy either, very good The most important thing is that it tastes good😋

This is one of the few books that I didn't pick up but read directly. It's one of the best in the Western Fantasy Lily circuit. The plot is novel and it's really rare to see a saint and a saint. The plot also seems to have been well-worked. There are foreshadowings and pitfalls, and the character creation is also good. However, I don't know if the portrayal of Guangsheng is weird because there is less plot or there are pitfalls. Anyway, I highly recommend it, and I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch [smile] Please also review the book after reading it to give the author some motivation.

The writing is pretty good, but those who follow Xinwang to read the Dark Souls fanfiction can go away. Basically, only the characters of the same name and fire is important are used here. It is not so much Xinwang, but someone who went to the traditional sword and magic world with the Dark Souls game setting.

It's an interesting development. If it can continue, it will be a masterpiece [blowing kiss]

The overall look and feel is excellent, and the plot design is beyond brilliant! The twists, suspense, and emotional ups and downs are all present, the foreshadowing is perfectly recycled, the combat power setting logic is clear, and the part of complaining about the system is also very interesting. The characters are vividly drawn (each saint is unique), the character creation is very interesting, and the post-posting part is also very good (I also want to see Elise's counterattack, it's fun to attack each other😋), the writing is good, and the creative level is very high. Come on!

Such a beautiful book, once it becomes popular, I will be a veteran

The book is really good as a ss book [eating melon]. It contains a lot of stickers, but it ends a little too quickly. It feels like there are a lot of things that haven't been spread out, but it's really good.

The author's writing is still very good, and the world view is well shaped. The background story is also very exciting and the logic is very smooth. The writing technique may be a little immature, but at present it is still very good and worth recommending.

The protagonist opened a big account and it made me so handsome [face covering]

It's a very good book. At the 120th chapter, the foreshadowing has been recycled. The introduction has been recycled. From the current point of view, there must be a knife. I think I can guess the direction of the plot fairly well [eating melon] Anti-spoiler: Lily must live well or be able to escape control [crying] I really like this character.

Invincible name, I think it looks good

Author, I order you to spend at least 8 hours a day updating, otherwise it won't be enough for me to read.

Homura's new owner was pierced through the chest by a thief, and Homura didn't react at all. It felt like the king of time being stopped.

It's not disgusting at the beginning. My point has surpassed many books. It's okay. What's going on between Lily and the protagonist? Is this considered being bullied?) It feels like Lily is a doll made from the soul of the first generation of Light Sage, otherwise it can't be directly attached to the protagonist. It makes me feel uncomfortable. It was obviously Lily who came first [crying]

It looks good and I personally think it can be considered a masterpiece in Tomato Novels [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua] Taihao has watched it, but there are too few and not enough to watch [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][shy][shy][shy][thinking][thinking][thinking]

It's good to read, but the posts are just seasoning. In fact, the setting, plot, and characterization of this book are all good. It's a delicious novel😋 Urgent withdrawal. Now the post is the main line. If it changes again later, I will come back and change the book review [face covering]

It's very beautiful, the world view and plot are very interesting [laughs] It's still fun to follow the updates every day, and the plot posts are the same [making faces]

The plot of this book is very simple and compact, with no grinding and grinding, and there are many daily battles, including Tie Tie. When it's time to stop, it's time to stop, there will be no regrets, and you won't feel bored, it's interesting and beautiful.

Full marks, you guy Finished with onion flowers

Hao Kan "Enter at least five characters"

At least i like it

It's good-looking, has a lot of foreshadowing, and has a good pace.

Thoughts after viewing: Oh ~