I Became a Shelter for Troubled Girls

It's very interesting. Why is the rating so low? It looks like a harem, but I personally feel that it is about party fighting, not quite like a harem. It depends on what the author says. There are currently three female protagonists, and I estimate there will be about four to five in the future. It has the flavor of youthful literature, sweet and salty, but it is too little, and I can't watch the plot development. Low score. The wheelchair girl's family is the dominant one. It's better to write it as a party battle instead of having a harem. Xiao He, who was extremely stable in the early stage, broke into pieces in front of Qin Lian. In Xiao He's eyes, the male protagonist is her god. When it comes to Qin Lian, the male protagonist directly becomes Qin Lian's dog. The gap is too big. Yes, in the chapters in recent days, the male protagonist is completely unconditionally biased towards Qin Lian. If she hadn't been unhappy with it, the male protagonist would have been picked up long ago. Even the third and fourth girls were arranged by Qin Lian. They were clearly planned. Those who liked Huang He in front of him should retreat quickly. Don't torture yourself by looking back. Two bad reviews, I simply can't stand the fact that Huang He is beaten up by other female co-stars. Again, I think Huang He is good and I can abandon the book after reading the Huang He chapter. The rest is full of abuse of Huang He.

Lying in bed and dreaming about the life imagined by others😭I can see it all in one glance😭 The book is a good book, the writing is very good, and the plot is also good. Overall worth a look. The poisonous point is that I feel that the male protagonist is a bit scumbag, but the partisanship is not a poisonous point. Also, how will it end with so many factions? I look forward to the Shura Field in the future. I would like to see how the fifth-divided party struggle ends.

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The level is very good, and it can be seen that the dialogue between the characters is deeply thought out and the content is sufficient. However, from my personal subjective point of view, the market is still not big enough for this young literary youth's daily life. It is difficult to say that this achievement will be the day when I see a big and explosive plot. It is a pity, I hope I am a poisonous milk. Another thing to mention is that if you decide to cut it, try to keep the explosive plot in order to leave a good impression and accumulate readers. I will continue to read it and wish you better results.

It feels a little uncomfortable. I thought I could read a few more chapters during the May Day holiday, but the author also had a holiday [face covering] The rhythm of the whole book is well controlled, everyone's role is sufficient, and it is dealt with in volumes. There will be no chance of forgetting the character. Many female protagonists. If you want to read a story about a single female lead, don't come here. There are five female protagonists here, and any one of them can become the heroine of a single female protagonist. It's a test of the author's writing skills. Who can remember what happened in daily life? As a result, the author said that he was writing a memoir, and I was jealous beyond recognition. Whose good family has such a colorful life? The author's experience is also very rich. With so much material, he must have seen a lot in real life. [Laughing] Huang He was very upset. Cao Cheng was his only one, but she was not Cao Cheng's only one. This is the price for her liking Cao Cheng. She is the one with the strongest will, playing the role of both a head wife and a virtuous wife. She chose to be a liberal arts student for Cao Cheng. I feel sorry for her, because literary men and women complement each other very well, and it would not be fun if their ecological niches overlap. But if you are not literary, it is easy to steal. It can only be said that you still have to pay a lot. At present, it seems that she has the most bond with the male protagonist among the newcomers, and she has a great chance of winning. Qin Lian is a naughty person. He can obviously kill the competition, but he cares too much about the perfect self in his memory, causing himself to change from being the only one to being the fake one. The starting situation was very good, and Cao Chengdu was turned into a little naughty dog, but this self-degradation made it difficult to win. She is smart, but the plan to accommodate her exposes flaws unknown to her and undermines her chances of victory. Xiao Chuyu. A symbol of life. Good figure, good personality, loyal, a bit lacking in love, stupid beauty type. Quite fond of her. She is the kind of person who can have a brotherly relationship, which is natural and beautiful. He has a good family background, can fight, and is responsible... He has many advantages and is sunny and cheerful. Having such a friend in your life is a life worth living. She has quite a lot of space, and because she is so beautiful, I am a little short of words. [Making faces] Chen Qingqing. Weak people who give in to violence. In order to survive, you can become the person you hate the most. I'm looking forward to her redemption. It doesn't matter whether it's worth it or not, it's just that she is a poor person who is oppressed and has a good heart. As for the others? The Lord doesn't care. Is Chen Qingqing good-looking? After all, this is a society that values ​​appearance. If there is no value, who has the ability to lend a helping hand when you need it most? This is the noble person in life. [Almost crying] Shen Weiyang. It left a deep impression, like a sharp knife suddenly showing its edge in an inconspicuous chapter. There is not much plot at the moment and will not be described. Summary: Excellent work, it can be refined and refined. Looking forward to being seen by more people. The author writes very talentedly. Because I have also wanted to write a book, I know how difficult it is to write a good book. Three sent for love. The author will come back soon to update. You said you would write it to the end.

Brothers, believe me, this is a rare and good book. It may not be the kind of particularly enjoyable novel. Rebirth and Golden Finger are well balanced. Although there are some minor bugs, this does not affect reading. I can only say that the emotional line, writing style, characterization of the characters, the direction and continuity of the plot are perfect. This is really a masterpiece on Tomato. As for why the number of readers and ratings are so low, I probably think it's because this type of article has a small audience on Tomato. If nothing else, this writing style is so delicate that I suspect it is the trumpet of a certain big shot. As for whether I recommend it or not, I can only say, brothers, don't miss it. There are not many books with such great potential left. And the author, you must not give up on this book. The data may not be very good, but those who follow it are definitely your most sincere readers. And I believe that this book will become popular sooner or later. You can definitely do it. Come on. @

I believe that most people don't like the character Xinxin Why? Because the male protagonist is reborn, has ability, vision, and a sense of security. Even to He, the male protagonist is her god and her whole world. But everything changed. After the character Xin Xin appeared, the male protagonist turned into a dog, a dog that licks Xin Xin. From the moment he unconditionally obeyed or knelt down to lick her, the charm of the male protagonist has collapsed. I can't accept this gap. I feel very sorry for He. The god in her world has become a dog in her world. (I particularly like the girl created by the author - Huang He) Qingqing, the eldest sister is more alive than Qin, I tell the truth. The four stars are because He Na is as tough as a weed, silently gentle and considerate, and always sees you as your only salvation. Empty sadness

It's a good read and I love reading it. Compared with other stories with multiple female protagonists, it seems a lot less utilitarian and it just feels like it comes naturally. I like it very much and hope the author will keep up the good work. I want to see the ending and read 100 chapters in one day.

It's good to read. I've read the latest chapter and there's nothing sinister about it. The daily details of the characters are also well described, but there are too few and it's not enough to read. The author will update soon!!! Also, can you describe Huang He more in the future? [Sending my heart] I like this character so much.

I feel like I can read Chapter 51. Some parts look awkward. The Wen Qing and Huang He chapters are a bit classic but well-written. Personally, I think Chen Qingqing is quite interesting [face covering]. Although she bullies and curses, my feelings have changed after coming out of the wheelchair or entering the school. Especially in the chapters where the protagonist transforms into a licking dog. You have received the memories of a 30-year-old since you were 16. You have not seen the wheelchair for six years. In addition, it must have been more than 20 years since the last life. I To put it bluntly, I have to put it down after more than 20 years. [Laughs] You can fix this for me (I forgot to say something in the comment). In short, the wheelchair made me very uncomfortable. He came up and said some inexplicable words, and the protagonist was also inexplicable. Miao answered the question, if you don't write about your previous experiences, who will accept her? Later on, I felt that operating a wheelchair was very pleasant [face covering]. Of course she has a little habit of wearing hats. Of course she doesn't really have it, but she is very naughty, which makes me very happy [laughs] Currently there are 51 chapters. My favorites are Huang He, Xiao Chunv, Wheelchair, and Chen Qingqing. I still really want to see Chen Qingqing's emotional line [face covering] It's fun to bully her.

Let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the characters in the author's works are all flesh and blood, and there are no surprises. The shortcoming is that I feel that the protagonist is a bit too ordinary and cannot be replaced. Rebirth is such a big hook, and there is a price to use it. It makes people think that another person can do the same thing? Or do it well. Anyway, cheers for the author

I feel that it should be a female author. Her writing style is very delicate, and her interaction with the heroine is also quite sweet. However, the male protagonist has no sunshine and is soft and weak. The few characterizations are also in this direction.

Not bad, I hope I can improve Xinxin's progress. I feel like it makes my heart itch. I really like Xinxin [Send Heart] Also, what Chen Qingqing wrote was not very good and I didn't like it very much. I hope you can mention the progress. You can't write hundreds of chapters in high school, right? How can I watch kiss like this? What do you think... [Laughs evilly] Come on [send heart]

I haven't seen any bad points so far. I think Qin Lian trains the dog and the protagonist is too licky. But as you continue to look at it, you will find that Qin Lian's high position is only in words and soul. Qin Lian has always been in a lower position and is completely inferior to Cao Cheng.

Not bad. Is there no role for Chen Qingqing in the future? She doesn't have enough scenes to look like one of the heroines. I really want to see the little girl's introduction after she is saved, "I will give you everything I have, I just ask you to look at me one more time."

It's not an exaggeration to read it and regret it for life. It's so damn good-looking. It's not the kind of outrageous and mindless romance novel. I saw this novel on the recommendation list at first because I didn't click on the name. Then I clicked on it and couldn't stop. The author is amazing.

I have a feeling this book will be popular, but the male protagonist is a bit immature (personal suggestion) [Thinking] The backend is a little bit toxic. The male protagonist had nothing to do with Qin Ling in his previous life. When he was reborn, he was like a licking dog [laughing and crying]

Nice! It's a bit sad to see Xin Xin feel inferior because of her leg injury and keep pushing the protagonist away😭 She obviously liked her so much when she was a child that she only wanted the protagonist to talk to her alone

It is rare to find a book that suits my taste. It has a slightly literary feel but not too much, and the writing is powerful but does not force the reader. I just feel that it could be written a little more relaxedly, otherwise I will get tired easily if I read too much. Although the character design is somewhat labeled, it is the characters who interpret the meaning of the labels as they go on. This is the first time I am writing a review and rating because I hope the author can keep writing and see a more complete ending to this book.

This is really amazing. The author's writing style is very good. There are many things in the front that can be explained later. Although the wheelchair girl's family is the only one, it is already balanced in the plot. With the author's writing style and writing power, the later parts will probably be very interesting [Sending Hearts]

How can I put it this way? I can accept Qin Lian's stiffness when he enters the theater. The rest of it is fine. The stomachache is also more to my liking. As the author, Diao's first book is well written. Five-star encouragement [please update]

Lao Qin's first mover advantage is too great Lao Huang has strong operational awareness and high awareness Lao Xiao pure stupid people have stupid blessings Lao Chen hasn't seen the operation yet Lao Shen's move was too thunderous [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

So far, I have read half of it myself. This book is very good for me personally. I can also see some things and know some things. For me, it is a relatively good-looking book. I hope the author can finish it.

Damn, it's so well written [crying][crying][crying], can the author post 100 updates tomorrow? I finished reading the previous ones in one night [crying][crying][crying], the emotional line is very delicate, the character creation is very successful, the heroines have distinct personalities, they are not produced by an assembly line, and they are easy to forget when you turn around. I hope the author will stick to it, it is really beautiful.

This book is considered a masterpiece, although there are still some flaws, such as the character of the male protagonist. If you read it in one go, you will have a feeling that the male protagonist has a changeable personality, but subconsciously you feel that the male protagonist is a bit dull. I hope the author can write out the emotional changes of the male protagonist, otherwise it will feel weird [smile] In addition, both the writing style and the writing ideas are very high-level, and the characterization is meticulous.

It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into the details, and the novel is generally good-looking. But the plot of Chen Qingqing's character is really, really uncomfortable. I can't understand it and I don't really like this kind of character. Therefore, I will not update this book, but I still hope that the author will write better and better in the future. ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

The Huang He chapter is indeed a masterpiece. The author's writing is very delicate. Qin Ling's appearance is amazing. "The cowards are waiting for you." The aura is full, but the stamina is insufficient. The more short stories and jokes that follow, the lower Qin Ling's status is. The change in the male protagonist's personality is a bit uncomfortable.

It looks like a spring breeze, very comfortable

Shennong has tried it, it's non-toxic, and the plot and writing are both excellent.

Did I, The Crimson King, miss something? Why does the protagonist have so much affection for Qin? Did Qin redeem the protagonist?