Hogwarts: Start with a Blank Slate and Add Points

The text is excellent, the plot is exciting, and it has its own original design. He is not Harry's follower, but a real protagonist. It smoothes away the regrets of the original story (and has the protagonist's inner activities, like a real person), and incorporates some other elements. Even if you open your eyes, you will not know the plot arrangement. As soon as I finished writing it, it ranked first in my heart. The latest chapter is so affectionate, and it completely captures the power of love in the original work.

This is not an innocent fairy tale but it is full of beauty. It is not a grand epic but it is equally shocking. It has the sophistication of the original work but occasionally goes off the line. It has the tragedy of the movie but it is always satisfactory. The legend needs to be proved. This is the author's proof. It is absolute gold.

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Although I really only wanted to give it four stars, I still gave it five stars. After all, this is one of the few Harry Potter fanfics that is pretty good. At least it can be considered a good source of food, maybe? As long as the prerequisites are maintained and the holes are filled, nothing will happen. Generally speaking, the poisonous points are there, at least they didn't poison me. Maybe it's because some good books I've found recently are being serialized. I'm still willing to give this book some encouragement. Come on, author, please update soon.

Although it is not a very good HP article, I can feel that the author wrote it carefully.

Tomato is a rare example of living humanities, which is very precious in the current environment where AI articles are everywhere. The pace is a little fast, and sometimes it jumps to the next scene and the next thing without any transition, but the feeling of reading it is not bad. It has the feeling of a light novel from the country next door. Overall, it is very good. I like it very much. I hope the author will pay more attention to the detailed distribution in the future. Come on, I highly recommend it! ! !

I don't understand why the rating is so low, but I really think the author has written it very well. The plot is interlocking, there are many foreshadowings and they are all filled in. There is no problem with the logic. The character of the protagonist is also very three-dimensional. I don't understand why some people call the protagonist a virgin. But if you read it carefully, you will not think that the protagonist is a virgin. I hope the author can write some extras [sending my heart]

Although it has the feeling of reading an outline, and the writing style has the stiff and incoherent feeling of Japanese light novels translated into Chinese. But at least (the beginning, I haven't seen the back part yet, I don't know if it is artificial or not) it is artificial, and the author did not use hate intelligence [smile] Okay... The author started to use hate intelligence in Chapter 40 or 50... I know it is really convenient, but... Alas...

After watching it, it's okay. In fact, it's about 7.5 Points. So far the heroine is Hermione The unrequited girl has Fleur and two original female characters. I really want to know how the author handles it. At present, it seems that he only loves Hermione, and it is probably impossible for others to do so. Actually, I was looking forward to collecting a few more, but it seems unlikely at the moment.

I once warned hp authors not to play with time. Not only that, there are many things in this article that go against my principles. But there is a saying that either you don't do it or you never do it. The structural design is really clever, and the climax is climactic enough. Some places gave me the special feeling I had when reading the original novel when the truth was revealed. That's enough.

It's pretty good, the writing has a bit of a literary flair, and the protagonist's character is quite fleshed out.

The writing is pretty good, and the single heroine Hermione is great!

The emotional line is really well written. It is the best among the more than 20 fanfics I have read. The author is really good at writing. It's a bit platonic, not very passionate, but both sides are unique and willing to die without any hesitation. There are many original plots and interesting ones. This alone can kill many fans, but I don't know why the rating is so low. The summary is that although the name is very ordinary, it is really good.

Very nice. I have read so many books on Tomato, and this is the first one that made me feel that the plot is engaging and worth reading. The texture of the author's writing is a bit hard, not like ordinary online writing.

I finished reading this book, it's so exciting! Good reviews

The author is very thoughtful and the overall layout is reasonable.

I was fascinated by this book, and I highly recommend you read it too!

The interactions between the characters are interesting!

Great book, highly recommended.

I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time.

It's quite good. It's rare that it's not a book written by AI. It's worth reading.

A very interesting novel, the more I read it, the more I like it.

It's so well written, come on, author.

Wow, it looks good! The writing is so wonderful

Humorous, it's a great book Is it about to end?

This book is quite good. There are many words and phrases that feel like European and American dramas. The Triwizard Tournament has been completely changed. It is quite creative. I look forward to the follow-up.

The plot is full of twists and turns, and there are so many foreshadowings that you can't stop watching.

The characters are vividly and naturally drawn, each with its own merits.

The foreshadowing is cleverly buried, echoing back and forth, waiting for the follow-up

The storyline is compact and not procrastinating, and the content is fascinating.