After Transforming into a Sick and Weak Master, He Was Disliked by the Entire Sect.

It's really beautiful, the writing is delicate and smooth, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the plot is progressive and suspenseful. The character creation is good, the personality is distinct and not flat, the plot advances naturally, the details are well described, the writing style is comfortable, the characters are full, the story rhythm is stable, and the overall quality is very online As we all know: in the world of cultivation, the master is a high-risk profession. Indifference to the disciple arouses the disciple's desire to follow. Caring for the disciple arouses the exclusive intention of the disciple. Being lukewarm to the disciple makes the disciple develop an exclusive heart. He wants the master to only look at himself and be better than the disciple. The disciple aims at the master, from admiration to love, and is weaker than the disciple. The disciple takes protecting the master as his life goal, from dependence to devotion. Five-star praise is given Five-star praise is given.

Tomato fairy fills the sky. Who knows that fish does not give smoke! This character is my favorite besides Xiao Du and Xiao Pei! It's still delicious. Not much to say.

The writing is very good. Finally, it is no longer a harem story about a master and a disciple. But most of the protagonist's dealings with his disciples are quite acceptable, but one point is that when facing a disciple with bad eyesight, he is impersonal and unpleasant to watch (even though he knows that the opponent is also a traitor).

As the saying goes, if you know how to fish, you will get the best products. The characters are described very delicately, and the psychological descriptions are also very detailed. Especially the transitions, there is no sense of dissonance. Every book written by Zhiyu is stuck in my heart. Hope this pair is he. Yue Jing came here and gave me a five-star review.

I really want to see lasagna [laughs] Master and Apprentice Sandwich Cookies

Really Really Really Really is really super beautiful, with three-dimensional characters and interlocking story lines. Overall, I feel both distress and hatred for Shen, but I also have some expectations for the ending. It is really a good book that is enjoyable to read but will regret for the rest of your life if you abandon it.

Yu's books are extremely authoritative, and Yu has never lost when it comes to cultivating immortals. As we all know, master is a high-risk profession. It happened that several disciples had that kind of thoughts about a certain master. Ask the master how to raise a disciple? Useless. I suggest you find Bai. After all, you raised an apprentice to death without doing anything.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Can you give Xiaoluan, the fifth child, a good ending and a good plot? I like Xiaoluan very much [][][]

The writing is very good and the foreshadowing is all connected together. For the first time, I hope the ending is be [face covering]

Yin is so miserable, I will stand by her on this matter I can't do it anymore. In my previous life, I followed the standard routine. I locked up a yandere as a sick girl, tortured her, and then regretted it after I tortured her to death. It should be an upgraded version of routine writing, at least the writing style is better

I won't comment, it's beautiful😋

As long as Yu's book is not like the Emperor's Master, it will be fine

Today is a special day. Yes, it's my birthday, and I like this book the most. I still have it saved, and I'm writing this review now. After all, it's the first thing I read on the first day of my birthday. It's a good book.

As we all know: In the world of cultivation, the master is a high-risk profession. Being indifferent to the disciples arouses the disciples' desire to follow. Caring for the disciples arouses the exclusive intention of the disciples. Being lukewarm to the disciples makes the disciples develop an exclusive heart. The master wants the master to only look at himself and be better than the disciple. The disciple aims at the master, from admiration to love, and is weaker than the disciple. The disciple takes protecting the master as his life goal, from dependence to devotion~

It's beautiful, Xiao Shiwu and Shen Yanchun are in the extreme, [admiration] sweet, but also a bit sadistic, not piercing the mouth but not greasy, Shen Yanchun is simply made of black sesame glutinous rice balls, one is murderous, the other is compassionate to the world, I feel a bit sadistic in the back, but it still feels very sweet

Author, please, please give me more 1v [crying]

The writing is particularly good, especially the portrayal of each disciple. Sometimes I feel that the scene is brighter and more relaxed as soon as the disciples appear. When I am with the master, I feel depressed and subconsciously want to escape.

I finally see a normal master-disciple relationship [laughs]

It's good-looking. Fish's writing is always good-looking.

Now I desperately need the full text of the original book, so I write it here in blood [laughing]

I hope to be both a be and a he. Looking at it now, I feel like everything is possible.

Fish's books are still good to read

I'll give Yu's new book 5 stars first.

I feel that the third child is a bit pitiful. [Cover face]

Very good. Please give me an ending.

What, haven't you evaluated it? ! ... Yu's books are just beautiful, beautiful, and love to read [sending heartfelt wishes]

Still cool! ! ! ! ! ! The writing flows naturally, the plot is novel, and overall it's very interesting to watch.

I like this book very much. I think the writing of this book is very interesting. It is not enough to read, but it is also very deep. The emotional line is also drawn delicately and perfectly, and it can also be satiated. It has the ultimate tension. The characterization is also very cool, not flat and even understandable when you think about it carefully and put the perspective into perspective. The core is powerful and soulful [Like]

The characters are vivid and full, and the author's writing style is excellent! ! !

I really like this pair. They are very beautiful and the writing style is rich [shy]